Lotus leaf mother Bing Xin's father's friend gave us two pots of lotus flowers, one red and one white, both of which were placed in the yard. For eight years, I haven't seen lotus flowers in the yard-but there are many in my hometown garden; There are not only two pedicures, but also three pedicures and four pedicures, all of which are red-violet. One moonlit night nine years ago, my grandfather and I were enjoying the cool in the garden. Grandpa smiled and said to me, "When our garden first opened in Santillian, it happened that you three sisters joined our big family. Everyone is happy and said that it should be Huarui. " I feel a little bored when I hear the complicated rain in the middle of the night and get up early on a cloudy day. When I looked out of the window, the white lotus had withered, and the white petals floated on the water like a boat. There is only a small lotus leaf and a few pale yellow flower whiskers left on the stem. That red lotus, which was still in full bloom yesterday, is full and graceful among the green leaves this morning. Still uncomfortable! -I wandered for a while, and there was a loud thunder outside the window. Then it rained heavily, and it rained harder and harder. The red lotus flower was tilted left and right by the dense raindrops. Under the empty sky, I dare not go down the stairs or think about it. Calling my mother in the room, I quickly went over and sat next to my mother-I turned around and suddenly saw a big lotus leaf next to Honglian, slowly leaning down and covering it ... My restless mood disappeared! The rain did not subside, but red-violet did not waver. Raindrops kept beating, only on the brave and kind lotus leaf, some weak water droplets gathered. My heart was deeply touched-Mom! You are a lotus leaf, I am a red lotus, and the raindrops in my heart are coming. Except you, who is the shade under my unobstructed sky? 1July 2, 9221day
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This is a prose poem that borrows scenery to express feelings and praises mother. The article starts with the lotus in our yard, focusing on the lotus in the rain. The author found that the lotus leaf covered the lotus flower in the rain and touched himself, so he had associations, remembered his mother and the scene that his mother loved her children, and took this opportunity to express his feelings for her mother to protect her children's growth. Writing lotus flowers like this compares me to a lotus flower. My mother is a lotus leaf with vivid image. Yes, even the lotus leaf will consciously protect the lotus, not to mention the mother loves her children. So he wrote at the end: "Mom! You are a lotus leaf, I am a red lotus, and the raindrops in my heart are coming. Except you, who is the shade under my unobstructed sky? " A few simple strokes clarified the main idea and deepened the center. "Rain in my heart" refers to the ups and downs on the road of life, and only my mother is the one who protects herself from the ups and downs on the road of life.