Poetry with summoning skills

Stars and springs: maternal love, innocence and nature

star

I can only make young people's hair turn white.

You can't white the hearts of young people.

Mom!

The wind and rain in the sky are coming,

The bird hides in its nest;

The storm in my heart is coming,

I only hide in your arms.

The poet used vivid metaphors to convey the feelings of maternal love, and his writing was sincere and touching.

Thousands of angels,

Get up and sing praises to the children;

Kid!

In his little body,

With a great soul.

In the eyes of poets, the world full of innocence and childlike interest is the most beautiful in the world.

The second is the worship and praise of nature. In Bing Xin's view, human beings come from and belong to nature, and should be harmonious:

We are all born babies,

Lying in the cradle of the universe

Bing Xin also combines maternal love, innocence and nature:

Creator jujube

If in eternal life,

There is only one blissful promise,

I want to sincerely beg:

"I'm in my mother's arms,

Mom's on the boat,

The ship is at sea in the moonlight. "

The third is thinking and feeling about life. We call these poems "philosophical poems". This kind of poem is concise and meaningful:

Flowers in the corner,

When you appreciate yourself,

The world is getting smaller.

The spring 174:

Young man!

Take care of the description,

Time is turning pages,

Please write!

[Appreciation]

This is a very philosophical exhortation poem. At the beginning of the poem, young people are encouraged to study hard and "treasure and describe" their life poems by calling and using inverted sentences. Don't slack off and waste time. Then, use a personification and metaphor rhetoric to point out the reasons and urge people to make progress; Because "time is turning pages, please write"! Poetry is similar to Yue Fei's "Don't wait for leisure, white the head of a teenager, empty and sad". After reading this, the shocking aphorism of the ancient philosophers will ring in our ears: "The deceased is like a husband, never giving up day and night", thus lashing Ma Su and urging him to show his brilliant life diligently.

Little brother! Three bright and happy stars in my soul. Gentle, unspeakable, deep-seated child! Please enjoy!

This poem vividly expresses Bing Xin's pure and passionate feelings and her philosophy of "innocence and love". Poetry begins with an affectionate call, as natural and warm as a sister greeting her brother in life. Then the poet used a metaphor. The beauty of this metaphor is that it is complex from the beginning: comparing the little brother to a "star" is a layer, and then comparing it to a star in the soul, the realm will be broader, clearer and lighter. Secondly, in this metaphor, the connection between the ontological "little brother" and the metaphor "star in the soul" is far away, which has a lot of imagination space, so it can arouse readers' strange aesthetic feeling. Combining this metaphor, the poet used a series of descriptions appropriately and boldly: "The star in the soul" is "bright and happy", which is a festive atmosphere; "Children" are "gentle", which is an atmosphere of affection; It is "unspeakable" and an atmosphere of philosophical thinking; It is also a "deep soul" and an atmosphere of spiritual blending. In this way, in a short space, the poet wonderfully combined the most familiar and mysterious images, full of philosophical and musical beauty, containing infinite tenderness and praise, which moved everyone who read this little poem and made it unforgettable.

Star spring (1)

Excerpt:

Residual flowers are attached to the branches;

The bird flew away,

Scattered all over the floor-

Is life also a glimpse?

Comments: Lao Bingxin compares life to a scene where birds fly in a hurry and fall red all over the ground. She doubts that life will come and go as quickly as she sees it in this world. Old Bing Xin may be sighing for someone that her (his) life is so embarrassing. Have pity on her (him)!

The Stars in Spring (2)

Excerpt:

The flower of success,

People only marvel at her present glory!

However, at the beginning, her bud,

Soaked with tears of struggle,

The blood rain of sacrifice is scattered everywhere.

Comments: As the saying goes, "You can't judge a book by its cover". Although the flowers displayed in front of everyone are so exquisite and beautiful, who knows that there are endless efforts behind the beauty, and some people will shrink back in the face of difficulties and then go back to poetry to see the brilliant flowers. Should we learn from their fighting spirit and bumpy past?

The stars in the spring (3)

Excerpt:

Green shoots,

The young man said:

"Development: yourself!"

Pale white flowers,

The young man said:

"Contribute yourself!"

Deep red fruit,

The young man said:

"Sacrifice yourself!"

Comments: From the "confessions" of Yael, Wahl and Guoer to the youth, we can not only see Yael, Wahl and Guoer's expectation and longing for the youth; From the words of Ya Er, Hua Er and Guo Er, we can also see from the side what their usual life is like. Usually it is silent dedication.

The stars of spring (4)

Excerpt:

Sunlight enters the cracks in the stone,

Small thorn fruit said:

"lend me your head,

Liberated your imprisoned self! "

The box came out,

A hard rock,

It split in two.

Artistic value is a very subjective judgment. Your feelings for him are the most important, not how many people appreciate it, but how high the price is.

The stars are the eyes of missing, and the spring water is your continuous, soft and endless acacia. The stars are always hanging in the high sky, watching your lovesickness and your friendship.

[Appreciation]

This is a very philosophical exhortation poem. At the beginning of the poem, young people are encouraged to study hard and "treasure and describe" their life poems by calling and using inverted sentences. Don't slack off and waste time. Then, use a personification and metaphor rhetoric to point out the reasons and urge people to make progress; Because "time is turning pages, please write"! Poetry is similar to Yue Fei's "Don't wait for leisure, white the head of a teenager, empty and sad". After reading this, the shocking aphorism of the ancient philosophers will ring in our ears: "The deceased is like a husband, never giving up day and night", thus lashing Ma Su and urging him to show his brilliant life diligently.

Notes on the stars in spring water

Bing Xin, 22, published Stars and Springs. How beautiful the youth of 22 years old is. She has lost the restlessness of the flower season and worn off the sharp edges and corners. It is still a passionate year, but it is a little more gentle and calm.

In this book, Bing Xin mostly uses flowers, grass, clean streams and meteors as the bedding to tell the beliefs or proverbs hidden in a careful place. What seems gentle and naive actually reveals the flashy and selfish phenomenon in social unrest.

Perhaps, Bing Xin often touches petals, counts patterns, looks at flowers and listens to the subtle sounds of flowers and plants, which is why her articles are so delicate, delicate, gentle and fragrant. I often taste her articles and poems with fragrance.

Perhaps, Bing Xin often peeks at the stubbornness and naughty, stubbornness and tenacity of the grass, and she is infected by the vigorous vitality of the grass. Therefore, her poems make people feel her persistent pursuit of faith, her desire for family happiness, and her insistence on everything in nature that is full of business. Her articles have such youthful blood boiling, as well as naive yearning and feelings when she was a girl.

Perhaps, Bing Xin often drips water into the stream, splashing the clear stream comfortably, letting the holy water wet one corner of her pleated skirt, praying for the blessing of the holy water, so that the holy water can't reach her ankles. So Bing Xin writes so clearly and thoroughly, as if she injected the freshness and purity of nature into her body and soul. She knows everything, and all the disguises and escapes cannot escape Bing Xin's clear blue eyes.

Perhaps, Bing Xin often stares at the bright starry sky on the balcony at midnight, letting his thoughts wander in ancient and modern times and in mysterious space. Therefore, her words are like the twinkling morning star, which instantly shines brightly, making everyone submit and dazzle.

Maybe, maybe ... a lot may be because Ms. Bing Xin is integrated with nature. While enjoying nature, she also exudes the infinite charm of her own words.

I like her poems, cute and small; I like her, quiet; I like her writing, delicate and fresh; I like the spring water with stars, because the love contained in it makes me feel the warmth of my family, and makes me love my family like Bing Xin!

Reflections on The Stars in Spring

This is the first modern poem that I have read completely, and it is also the first time that I have read Bing Xin's works, and it is the first time that I have read this touching masterpiece "Spring among the Stars". After reading it, I suddenly felt a feeling I had never felt before.

This article was written by Bing Xin, a famous writer in China. I have heard of his name since I was a child. When I was a child, my family told me the story of grandma Bing Xin every day, but I never had a chance to see her works. At that time, I only knew what ancient poetry was, and I didn't know the difference between the rhythm of modern poetry and ancient poetry. Once, I came across the article "Stars in Spring Water" and realized that modern poetry is more vivid, catchy and interesting than ancient poetry. Unconsciously, I fell in love with modern poetry. If you don't believe me, listen to me about the article "Spring Water Stars"!

Let's take a look at this passage first: the stars are twinkling-how can we hear their conversation in the dark blue sky?

In silence, in the twilight, they deeply praised each other. In just a few words, it outlines a beautiful, aesthetical, natural and harmonious picture. Moreover, the author's imagination is so magical and wonderful that the stars without feelings in the ice Leng Ye sky can still praise each other, and the author expresses his pursuit of "human love" very implicitly. You can see such a short poem and embody such a great spirit. I think grandma Bing Xin must have been very careful when she wrote it. It's nothing. Look at these words again:

Mom! The wind and rain came, and the birds hid in the nest;

The storm in my heart is coming, so I can only hide in your arms. A few words praised the noblest and most selfless maternal love. She enthusiastically praised maternal love. I expressed my heartfelt thanks to my mother. The whole association is natural and gentle to read.

In Spring Water, there is a passage that I can't forget for a long time. "Spring says to the youth from the green grass:' My light is on you, creating your living personality from the cold environment!' The poet tells people with personification that the dawn of revolutionary victory has come, and people should warmly welcome a better life in the future and create their own brilliant life. This is also a portrayal of the poet's revolutionary optimism and enthusiasm.

In a word, I think grandma Bing Xin's poems are shining stars in the vast night sky, small flowers scattered on the forgotten banks of the river, and they always exude refreshing fragrance.

The work "Springs of Stars" gave me a great whistle. She told me about human's pursuit of love, the greatness of maternal love, and that I should be optimistic about life ... which touched my great spirit and kindness.

The book Spring with Stars is my first contact. I am used to reading the vernacular. Reading poetry at once is a bit uncomfortable, but it has a different taste.

When I opened the book, the first introduction attracted me. When it comes to how Bing Xin wrote poetry, from childhood to adulthood, it fully embodies Bing Xin's talent in writing.

Her poems are mainly famous for maternal love, innocence and nature. From "Stars", "Childhood is the truth in dreams, the dream in reality, and the tearful smile when recalling." It is conceivable that Bing Xin's childhood was full of dreams and childish fantasies. "Little brother, ... a child in the depths of the soul." It also explains the indescribable deep friendship between Bing Xin and his brothers and sisters. These are Bing Xin's childlike longing and happiness.

Later, she went abroad to study, which has been going for many years. She described her thoughts with a pen and was eager to go home early. She fantasized about meeting her mother and then going home. She is very happy. But once there is no fantasy, then she will become more lost and disappointed. How can you miss home when you leave your hometown and your beloved mother? "The waves in my hometown! The waves you splashed once pounded my rock bit by bit, and now they pounded my heartstrings bit by bit. " The waves kept beating on the shore, and I was indifferent, but once I left my hometown, every drop of waves touched a string that was about to break, a string that was homesick. Indeed, only mothers are good in the world, maternal love is the greatest and maternal love is the purest.

Bing Xin's short poems gave me thousands of feelings. There is no hypocrisy in her poems. They are true feelings from the heart, which can touch people's hearts and can be seen in Bing Xin's childhood fantasy. Her fantasy is so beautiful, so charming, so childlike. However, her deep maternal love and yearning for her mother are beyond our reach. Motherly love is so sacred that it is beyond the reach of any kind of love in the world. Bing Xin is synonymous with maternal love, and I understand maternal love through Bing Xin.

At this point, my heart is surging, and I can't calm down and express my feelings.

The reason for choosing Bingxin is simple. She is a very caring person. This may be very general, but since I read the book "Stars in Spring Water", my opinion has become more firm. "Stars in Spring Water" is recognized as the highest achievement of the poem, and Mao Dun called it "starry sky lattice" and "spring water body". The theme it embodies is: maternal love, nature and innocence, which constitutes Bing Xin's ideological core "philosophy of love". "Stars in Spring Water" contains three aspects: one is to praise love and innocence; The second is the worship and praise of nature; The third is thinking and feeling about life.

Bing Xin believes that love can melt glaciers, dissolve all evil and darkness, and cover up the bad side of human nature all her life, so even in turbulent times, she can still stick to her own ideas. No matter the Cultural Revolution or the May 4th Movement, she never gave up, nor was she decadent. She took an active part in the patriotic student movement against imperialism and feudalism. From May 4th to April 5th, she started her literary career with problem novels as the paving stone. Since then, it has been deeply loved by readers of all ages.

I think Bing Xin can give full play to the philosophical theme of love because she grew up in a rich and warm family. In this family, what she sees is the beautiful side of the world, and her mother's care has taught her an important lesson, so that she can confidently believe that love can affect everything in the years to come, no matter what hardships and evils she encounters. It also reflects her desire for an ideal life. Because of her family, she kept the purest innocence. I think this is something that will not change no matter how many years have passed. Bing Xin loves nature since she was a child, which is reflected in many of her poems. Her sentences have no strong color and artificial rendering, and they depict pure nature with the lightest pen and ink. Just like her pen name, it is as pure as ice and pure as jade and is deeply rooted in people's hearts.

Bing Xin said, "I never call myself a poet." Perhaps it is because of this heavy title that she can express her deepest feelings in the simplest words. It is precisely because she never considers herself a poet that she can reach a higher ideological level while enjoying the pleasure of literature.

One of my favorite poems is:

Young man!

Compared with the elderly,

I know you're bored,

It's gentle.

I like this poem because it taught me how to face setbacks and difficulties. We are high-spirited teenagers, and we should not have a kind of maturity and depression that does not belong to our age. Compared with the elderly, although we have lost the vicissitudes of life, we have the opportunity to start again. Every day we face is brand-new and life is fresh. Nine times out of ten, you should face these annoyances calmly, be optimistic and brave, and finally you will find that your annoyance is gentle.

Bing Xin's ideological field still has a lot to explore, and it is far from enough to rely on this word 1000. However, I believe that no matter how many years have passed, the spirit she promoted will remain in our hearts.

Young man!

For the memory of the future,

Draw your present picture carefully.

[Appreciation]

This poem is so popular that you can understand it as soon as you read it. The poet advised us to grasp the present, study hard and work down to earth. Only by "painting your present picture with your heart" will your future career be brilliant and your life path be broad. Only by "recalling the past" can we "not regret wasting time and not be ashamed of doing nothing"! Only in this way can you proudly say that my life is full and meaningful. A word "be careful" can penetrate the back of the paper with exquisite words and infinite care and exhortation.

98 stars:

Young man!

Believe in yourself!

Only you are real,

Only you can create yourself.

[Appreciation]

This poem mainly warns young people to build self-confidence. Believe in yourself, overcome yourself, surpass yourself, not afraid of the hardships and frustrations on the road of life, not afraid of the wind, frost, rain and snow in life. Don't give up your troops when you encounter some difficulties, don't be discouraged when you are frustrated, don't be depressed when you are wronged, and don't be depressed when you are hit a little. Or "The Internationale" sings well, "There has never been a savior, it's all up to us". Friends, "believe in yourself", "only you can create yourself", only you can show your beautiful demeanor and show a brand-new yourself in front of the world.

Haibo kept asking rocks,

The rock is always silent and never answers;

However, his silence

Millions of people have been able to think.

Excerpted from-1 16

Comments: This poem mentions rocks and waves. On the beach, we carefully observed that the waves came up with the tide, hit the rocks, hit and retreated. In this way, the waves hit the rocks violently, and the rocks resisted the attack of the waves again and again. When asked about the rocks in the earthquake-stricken area, the rocks remained silent. Rock and roll thought a lot, but didn't answer.

Everyone will hold grudges, and so will animals. What does the rock think when the sea waves hit it again and again? The silence of the rock is to let Haibo know his ignorance and feel guilty. For these reasons, rocks have withstood and paid a price. And what will the rock think when Haibo goes to sympathize with the rock? The rock remained silent. It is not that he has nothing to say, but that everything he wants to say is buried in his heart.

In fact, it is the same in life. Some people like Haibo will harass you from time to time, and I am as silent as a stone. For example, a classmate in my class is sitting next to me, and it is not just something. He runs on me everywhere, satirizes me everywhere, reads my jokes everywhere, is extremely sad, and wants to break up the feelings between me and my friends. I was silent and ignored him. I want him to know that he is doing well.

Stars:

one

The stars shine—

Deep blue space,

Have you ever heard them talk to each other?

In silence,

In the twilight,

They praised each other deeply.

two

Childhood!

This is a fact in the dream,

This is a real dream,

Memories are tearful smiles.

several

Humans!

Love each other,

We are all long-distance travelers,

Towards the same destination.

Yijiu

My heart,

Like a ship,

Across the undulating sea of time.

two two

Life and death-

This is a hazy month,

Die-

It's a gaunt fallen flower.

Ersan

The lamp of the heart,

The light in silence,

Throw it out.

Spring water:

four

Reed grass,

Only this kind of yellow wave?

Take the wind to Jiangnan!

one by one

The south wind blows,

Jiang Chun's smile

Brought it from the water town!

20

The mountains are independent,

Is the universe occupied by only one person?

Erqi

The wind is blowing!

The singing of autumn insects has stopped!

Liujiu

The bottom of silence,

But according to

Forever red spring flowers.

One four one

After the rain-

With the sound of frogs,

Water drops on the lotus tray,

Splash your clothes.

In terms of content and artistic conception, stars and springs are hardly an organic whole. They are not written in one breath, and they naturally have a sense of fragmentation. However, seeking the internal relationship between them will help us to have a more complete impression of Bing Xin's poetry creation.

Bing Xin herself once said, "There is only one goddess of poetry, and she is full of tenderness and sadness. Let her express it like this. " The goddess of this poem not only appears in her poems, but also dominates her essays and novels. Although her little poem is fragmentary, it has not left the territory of the goddess of this poem. It can be said that the basic emotion of Bing Xin's poems is silence mixed with sadness. Along this emotional clue, we can trace back the footprints of Bing Xin's poems.

Bing Xin is a person who constantly needs and creates poetry. She is unwilling to state the reality, but willing to construct the ideal; Unwilling to look for phenomena, but willing to explore emotions. Like a silkworm, she wraps herself and her readers with glittering silver silk, weaving a peaceful and beautiful world, which only turns the external pain into a shadow without disturbing people's peaceful dreams. Bing Xin's poetic god is different from Tagore, Guo Moruo and Wen Yiduo, and its gentleness and serenity make people doubt its existence. Liang Shiqiu, a contemporary of Bing Xin, once thought that Bing Xin was a "female writer who was cold below zero" and asserted that she was "rich in reason and thin in feelings". Indeed, some of Bing Xin's short poems are very cold, such as Twenty-nine of the Stars, Thirty-two and Four. , grade eight or five of "Spring Water". But after all, you can only quote these songs. Bing Xin's weakness lies in her lack of imagination and expressive force of poetry, not in her lack of emotion. Silence does not mean indifference, and feelings take various forms. The country of poetry can not only accommodate passionate enthusiasm, but also need sunshine, moonlight, enthusiasm and silence. Bing Xin is not short of poetry. Who can say that what is hidden behind her dusk and night is not the throb of her soul?

Sixteen stars:

Young man!

For the memory of the future,

Draw your present picture carefully.

[Appreciation]

This poem is so popular that you can understand it as soon as you read it. The poet advised us to grasp the present, study hard and work down to earth. Only by "painting your present picture with your heart" will your future career be brilliant and your life path be broad. Only by "recalling the past" can we "not regret wasting time and not be ashamed of doing nothing"! Only in this way can you proudly say that my life is full and meaningful. A word "be careful" can penetrate the back of the paper with exquisite words and infinite care and exhortation. Appreciation of Bing Xin's Stars and Springs

Most of the poems in Bing Xin's Stars and Spring Water are small and exquisite, with novel ideas, poetic feelings, bright and fresh language and rich philosophy of life. There are 8 poems about youth, 3 stars and 5 springs in the collection of poems. After reading these poems, you will be impressed by its novel ideas and moved by its profound philosophy.

Sixteen stars:

Young man!

For the memory of the future,

Draw your present picture carefully.

[Appreciation]

This poem is so popular that you can understand it as soon as you read it. The poet advised us to grasp the present, study hard and work down to earth. Only by "painting your present picture with your heart" will your future career be brilliant and your life path be broad. Only by "recalling the past" can we "not regret wasting time and not be ashamed of doing nothing"! Only in this way can you proudly say that my life is full and meaningful. A word "be careful" can penetrate the back of the paper with exquisite words and infinite care and exhortation.

98 stars:

Young man!

Believe in yourself!

Only you are real,

Only you can create yourself.

[Appreciation]

This poem mainly warns young people to build self-confidence. Believe in yourself, overcome yourself, surpass yourself, not afraid of the hardships and frustrations on the road of life, not afraid of the wind, frost, rain and snow in life. Don't give up your troops when you encounter some difficulties, don't be discouraged when you are frustrated, don't be depressed when you are wronged, and don't be depressed when you are hit a little. Or "The Internationale" sings well, "There has never been a savior, it's all up to us". Friends, "believe in yourself", "only you can create yourself", only you can show your beautiful demeanor and show a brand-new yourself in front of the world.

"Star" 1 10:

Young man!

Compared with the elderly,

I know you're bored,

It's gentle.

[Appreciation]

This is a philosophical poem urging young people to establish a correct outlook on life and life. Young people should correctly treat difficulties and setbacks, that is, correctly treat "boredom" in life. If you want to live, study and work, you must get along with others. When you get along with people, you are bound to encounter difficulties and setbacks, so you are bound to feel "bored". We can't avoid it, nor can we avoid it. Only face it calmly and bravely and optimistically. The ancients once said: "Heaven will be the great task of the Sri Lankan people, so we must first suffer from its ambition, work hard on its bones and muscles, starve its body and mess with its actions, so we should be patient and have benefited from its incompetence." This is a fact. Only in difficulties and setbacks can you increase your wisdom and talent. A saint said, "Difficulties are the wealth of life." That's great. Young people don't have vicissitudes and troubles like old people, and sometimes when they look back, they will inevitably be worried and miserable. Every day that young people face is brand new. Young people have no burden of life, no family drag, and not too many chores. Generally speaking, there will be no major survival crisis. Therefore, even a little "annoying" is "gentle" compared with the elderly.

The third part of the spring:

Young man!

You can't fly like the wind,

It should be as still as a mountain,

Like floating clouds,

A helpless life,

I only did the poet's information!

[Appreciation]

This is a very wonderful philosophical poem. The poet compares the clever metaphors of flying wind, floating clouds and quiet mountains, and tells us the true meaning of self-cultivation. Zhuge Liang once earnestly warned his son Zhuge Zhan in The Book of Honesty: "Be quiet to cultivate one's morality, and be frugal to cultivate one's morality. If you don't stay in the garden, you will be unclear, restless and not far away. Be sure to calm down before you can learn. " It can be seen how important it is for us to calm down and get rid of impetuousness!

34 spring water:

Young man!

From the white ground,

Looking for sympathy.

[Appreciation]

This is a lyric poem that tells young people how to communicate with others. Concise and meaningful. The poet wants young people to "find sympathy from the white ground", which means that young people are full of love for others and society. Romain rolland said, "Love is the flame of life. Without it, everything will be dark. " . How well you speak! It can be seen how important sympathy and care are to others and society. As the song goes: "As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world".

"Spring" article eighty-seven:

Young man!

Just looking back?

The world cannot stop moving forward.

[Appreciation]

What is poetry? Ai Qing said: "Poetry is a living sculpture of the soul". What is a good poem? Ai Qing said: It "not only makes people feel what it contains, but also reminds people of something deeper and further." This little poem by Bing Xin is such a good poem. She vividly showed her "living sculpture of the mind" to young people. She not only makes us "feel what it contains" from the poem, but also reminds us of something deeper and further. Poetry warns young people not to be complacent, conceited and stop, not to be immersed in a happy "review" all the time, but to guard against arrogance and rashness and be innovative and enterprising, because "the world can't stop moving forward." Poetry is really inspirational!

The spring 13 1:

Young man!

Sadness after awakening,

I just buried myself deep.

It turned out to be a tiny human!

[Appreciation]

This poem, like Stars 1 10, is also a lyric poem that warns young people to treat mistakes and setbacks correctly. This poem is a bit difficult to understand. But as long as you know that you should pay attention to the characteristics of jumping and ellipsis when reading poetry, then this poem is easy to understand. As long as you comb the poet's thoughts a little, it becomes: young people! Correctly treating mistakes and setbacks, waking up sad, will only bury yourself deeply. This is originally a tiny achilles heel of human beings!

Poetry is short and alert, such as sobering, enough to wake up those groggy heads.

The spring 174:

Young man!

Take care of the description,

Time is turning pages,

Please write!

[Appreciation]

This is a very philosophical exhortation poem. At the beginning of the poem, young people are encouraged to study hard and "treasure and describe" their life poems by calling and using inverted sentences. Don't slack off and waste time. Then, use a personification and metaphor rhetoric to point out the reasons and urge people to make progress; Because "time is turning pages, please write"! Poetry is similar to Yue Fei's "Don't wait for leisure, white the head of a teenager, empty and sad". After reading this, the shocking aphorism of the ancient philosophers will ring in our ears: "The deceased is like a husband, never giving up day and night", thus lashing Ma Su and urging him to show his brilliant life diligently.