After picking up Mr. Shang's mobile phone, the attitude of young people changed from unwilling to return it to not asking for anything in return, because they were moved by the photos in the mobile phone and the loving messages to the disaster area. The young man was blinded by greed, but Mr. Shang's love, like a clear spring, washed away the dust in his heart and made him return to the right path of life in time. Imagine, if there is no "love" in this mobile phone, once Mr. Shang wants to call the police, the trouble brought by this young man is self-evident.
However, in society, it is not uncommon for people without love to "stumble". A freshman of Fengxian University in Shanghai stole more than 10,000 yuan from his roommate within one month, but refused to admit it because he was afraid of being beaten by his roommate, and finally he was jailed. Shimou, Luquan, Hebei, 16 years old was beaten for stealing his father's money. He ran away from home with a grudge. Later, he was arrested for theft many times, and his life was ruined ... because of greed, he ruined his future. What is the reason? For the time being, please don't lift the moral stick to kill people who have slipped. Please look at their mentality when they make mistakes: fear and resentment. If we believe that "at the beginning of life, human nature is good", we should guide them with tolerance and love, so that good can overcome evil. However, in today's society, helping the elderly is vilified, love donation is questioned, and fists are added if you don't give up your seat, and you will be beaten if you don't sell it. In the atmosphere of suspicion and violence, we generally lack humanistic care and tolerance, are used to punching each other, and are not surprised by violence. Therefore, those who just stumbled, desperate in fear, would rather accept the condemnation of conscience than add fists and feet. There is no love on the road of "transformation", love is aphasia in violence and love disappears in violence. It can only watch helplessly slide into the abyss of sin.
If we can give the "lost" people a light of love, they will not necessarily lose their way on the road of life. When the writer Lin Qingxuan was a reporter, he reported the news of a thief who committed thousands of crimes and had exquisite modus operandi, and lamented: "A thoughtful thief like this will achieve something in whatever he does!" It is this sentence that changed the thief's life. Today, the thief of that year is already the big boss of several shops. As the saying goes, "A kind word warms three winters", Lin Qingxuan's kind words, like the sunshine in winter, let thieves feel care in the cold, and like a bright lamp in the dark, let thieves find their way in life in the dark. "People are not sages, to err is human." It is magnanimity and great love to tolerate mistakes with love and overcome demons with love. I remember that 32 people were killed in the Virginia campus tragedy, but 33 balloons symbolizing the dead were released, 33 boulders engraved with the names of the dead were carved under the trees in the mourning area, 33 mourning bells rang, and 33 candles were used in the vigil-all of which included the murderer. The Christian spirit they practice is great compassion for the separation of love and hate. To tell the truth, love can't save the murderer, but it gives the world spiritual guidance-it's not terrible to slip, as long as kindness is still there. The road of "transformation" needs love, which gives the "lost foot" the opportunity to redeem itself and gives the "lost foot" the opportunity to reflect on life and choose life.
The road to "reform" needs love. This kind of "love" can be love, tolerance and encouragement ... as long as it can influence others, it can be called the love needed for "reform" No one wants to be a stumbling block when he is born, but sometimes he makes mistakes because he can't stand the temptation. In fact, as long as they are willing to guide "stragglers" with love, they will definitely return to the right path of life and have a bright future. The rain of love, although it failed to turn the whole world green, can bathe an oasis of the soul. If everyone can guide the "tripping" with love, then fewer and fewer people will commit crimes. Why should people always be afraid of "guarding against thieves"?
The road to "transformation" needs love, so please don't be stingy with your love.
Teacher's comments
As far as an exam-oriented composition is concerned, this paper has three characteristics of excellent composition: profound thought, beautiful literary talent and clear structure. 1, profound thoughts, such as quotations and arguments in the third paragraph, are close to reality and go straight to the present. 2. Beautiful writing. For example, in the fourth paragraph, metaphors and parallelism are used in many places to present the poetic beauty of intuitive images. 3. The structure is clear, the viewpoint is put forward by combining the materials at the beginning, the main part combines the advantages and disadvantages, and the sublimation part reveals the essence and development trend, which is concise and clear. But out of the circle of exam-oriented composition, as far as an article is concerned, the viewpoint of the article is too idealistic, and "need love" has become "only love", which overemphasizes the power of love and ignores the conditions of legal system construction and civilized development, and seems to be a castle in the air. Although the article can highlight positive energy and play a harmonious hymn, it lacks insight and penetration to reflect on the present and reconstruct the path. If we can mention other conditions of the road of "reform" at the end, even if it is only superficial, we should think dialectically and comprehensively.
(Guo Zijian, a Chinese teacher at Guangzhou Sixth Middle School)
Non-teacher comments
I can't help but want to scold the exam-oriented composition: don't let middle school students write purely argumentative essays, especially don't let them face the discrimination of value dilemma, okay? Throughout this article, the author has exhausted his knowledge reserve and logical ability, but he still feels powerless. I don't think this is the author's own problem, but she has to face a topic that is still difficult to control at her age.
Of course, it is useful to strengthen logic training in some small places, such as trying not to use full-name judgment sentences, such as "as long as they are willing to guide' stumble' in a loving way, they will definitely return to the right path of life and their future is bright." This kind of sentence can't stand the blow of counterexample. In fact, the author herself knows this, otherwise she wouldn't say, "The rain of love, although it didn't make the whole world green, can bathe in spiritual oases."
If I were to be 20 years older than the author, I might write the old topic, "Great virtues don't exceed leisure, and small virtues can enter and leave." It seems that picking up things is not a question of virtue, but a question of virtue, so young people are "moved" that if we affirm this behavior, we will fall into an ethical dilemma. Suppose that after reading the short message, the picker found that the owner of the mobile phone not only donated money to the disaster area, but also deceived a third party and paid bribes to government officials ... What should we do with this mobile phone? The reaction of young people reflects the disconnection of social education: we can't treat love with greed, can we treat greed with greed? In fact, donating money to the disaster area is not an obligation, but a moral bottom line. "Not returning things" should be denied more than "not donating money to the disaster area".