Dew in the morning is full of fear.
The voice of login came from the valley.
? Under the sickle full of fragrant rice
? Put his backpack and full fruit on the bamboo fence.
? Agricultural families in autumn habitats.
Cold fog on the river Samuel's round net
? China tallow leaves with less green snapper are like shadows.
? The crown of the tree is covered with frost.
? Shake the parked paddle gently.
? Fishing competition in autumn.
The sound of crickets in the grass is lonely and broad.
? When the water runs dry, the stone will be clear.
? Where is the bull market behind the flute?
? Fragrant flute cave on a hot summer night?
? Qiu Meng in the eyes of shepherdess.
? The vividness of "full disclosure" The word "gone with the wind" is relaxed and vivid. In the early morning of recording sound, the dewdrop image constitutes a clean and rich sound and image. "Xiang Tao" leads to a fragrance. "Full food" describes the harvest scene and personifies it. "Full fruit also saw a bumper harvest. Finally, Mr. Liang's role is the finishing touch. The anthropomorphic "habitat" means meaning.
Fisherman autumn scenery. Cold Fog expresses a hazy poetry, which is consistent with the season. The metaphor of "green bream is like the shadow of Chinese tallow leaves" seems clumsy, but it is actually wonderful and interesting. The portrait painted by "Guizhi" also implies the echo of "morning". The "game" is virtual and real.
The unique view of autumn. Poetry. The problem of language vacillation arises. The competition between the "whole journey" and the "Hong Kong fever" flute hole has the poetic and lush background of "summer night". "Shepherdess" ever seen a fishing boat perched on a farmer's "game" in autumn? Flute, behind the bull market, brings back the feelings of girls? Her eyes must be full of autumn scenes, and her heart must tremble slightly with joy and dreams.
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The exercise showed that
Read the poem emotionally, think about the order of writing the scenery, and then recite the poem.
This question requires students to read and recite the poem with emotion. This is the main form, focusing on the appreciation of poetry, and students should be guided to recite it repeatedly.
Add words under the two flavors.
1。 Put down the sickle full of rice fragrance
Agricultural families in autumn habitats
Fishing boats in autumn
This problem is to guide students to taste the artistic conception of language poetry, which can be found in the discussion of the text.
Third, compare the words after this poem and talk about the similarities between the two poets in expressing their thoughts and feelings. (Psalm omitted)
The purpose of this question is to guide students to appreciate, and also to provide students with equally excellent foreign poems. In the thoughts, feelings and artistic styles of many * * * images, they come from love expressing thoughts and feelings and poems praising autumn.
Teaching suggestion
Focus on reading. Guide students to read the whole poem repeatedly and emotionally until they are familiar with it.
, designed a certain openness, let students freely play the topic, and guide students to appreciate this poem. Do you like this poem? Why? What's your favorite poem? Why? What should you do in autumn when your attention is on the spot watching the ball? What's your impression of autumn poems? You can also come in autumn. Is there a poem engraved on it?
Third, guide students to appreciate. When appreciating teaching materials, we should make full use of the text to guide students to appreciate and compare. If you appreciate it, you should read it carefully, then compare the similarities and differences and find the same place. If it is compared, of course it is better.
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About the author (Wu Zaimin)
He Qifang (19 12 to 1977) is an essayist, poet and literary critic. Formerly known as Cheng Xinwang, he was born in a conservative family in Wanzhou, Sichuan. When I was a child, I liked China's ancient poems and novels best. 1929 I'm going to Shanghai from China to attend public school and read a lot of new poems. From 193 1 to 1935, I studied in the philosophy department of Peking University. Universities publish poems and essays in "Modern" magazines. 1936 published Zhi Lin's poetry anthology Hanyuan Collection edited by Li Guangtian, and 1937 published prose anthology Painting Dreams, which won the literary gold medal in Ta Kung Pao. After graduating from college, He Qifang once taught in Nankai Middle School in Tianjin and Laiyang Rural Normal School in Shandong.
After the outbreak of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, He Qifang returned to his hometown of Sichuan to teach, while continuing to write poems, essays and essays. 1938 went north to Yan 'an and taught at Lu Xun Art Institute. He is the minister of Lu Xun's literature department.
After the founding of New China, he mainly engaged in literary research and criticism, and participated in the long-term leadership work in the literary and art circles. He used to be a member of the Chinese Federation of Literary and Art Circles, a member of the Chinese Writers Association, a secretary of the post office secretariat, and the director of the Literature Research Institute.
He Qifang's love and poetic style. He said that he began to write some beautiful and gentle "early works of young intellectuals, which vividly expressed the thoughts, feelings and personality of a petty bourgeoisie." He is dissatisfied with the ugly reality, they don't know the way out, they are eager for a better life, but they lack that kind of passionate pursuit. Then wandering in nostalgia, loneliness and depression, leaving only hopes and dreams.
He Qifang is an art form that constantly pursues perfection. In terms of poetry, he began to create, which is a manifestation of the beauty of image and artistic conception, and attaches great importance to the integrity of form, the rigor of rhythm and the harmony of rhythm. Therefore, his poems have exquisite and gorgeous functions. As for prose writing, he claimed that "my lyric prose has found a new garden". His characteristic is that he has well integrated poetry, written stories with touching metaphors and rich words, and rendered the beauty of colors and patterns. Therefore, his prose has a unique style.
Ideas and artistic styles have indeed changed significantly, especially in Yan 'an during War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression's period. At this time, he is getting farther and farther away from his dreams, facing the simple uncertainty of reality, poetry and fashion style.
The six-volume anthology of He Qifang (People's Literature Publishing House) is the most creative and theoretical anthology of He Qifang.
(Excerpted from Encyclopedia of China Literature 1992)
Secondly, the atmosphere —— Reading Autumn (Liu)
Autumn is selected from the poem Prediction written by He Qifang in his early years (193 1- 1933). This is because the poets of that period didn't like to write the symbolic meaning of mystery, or they liked to ponder the philosophy, thinking that the depth was heavy, unlike those poems that he had received in the affair between men and women and tried to come up with expectations. It is rare for a poet to invest in the countryside and the activities of the people around him, as a clear and pure poetic expression of the audience, everyone's affairs and the school. Writing a poem, seemingly a simple, direct and profound symbol, actually means moving, profound and long. Poetry reveals that kind of atmosphere, a charm, which is the most amazing thing for readers.
The so-called atmosphere, especially the lyrical works of literary works, usually refers to the works, the overall fengshen background and artistry. The weather is a little similar, but different. Meteorology refers to more personal information, including content, form, atmosphere and other aspects. It seems to mainly involve images, emotions, emotions and atmospheric significance, but it is not all like the expression of Si Kongtu: "God, I don't know, I know but I can't be happy." The same is true of Tang's "Lantian is getting warmer, jade smoke is unattainable". When reading the mind, the words should also be the shape of the mind, which can be restored.
In Autumn, the poet described the essence of farm life in language. Every poem is a picture, which is a three-layer composite picture composed of three poems. The combination of screens not only creates fluidity, but also incorporates a special atmosphere.
The first photo is Harvest figure Farm. Here, I don't want to write about a farmer, but a general agricultural activity. Write two scenes, Tycho logging, and the fence between the back and the fruit. Diary of the Valley is in the first chapter. Tintin floats into the distance, attracting auditory sounds, cooling dew and attracting vision and touch. This is really an exotic scenery, which inspires people to remember the impression of Miao Guangxu. Is "The Book of Songs" a sentence from the adventure of "logging Ding Ding, birds falling into the valley, trees moving"? Gone with the Wind and the Valley He Qifang's early poems often appear, but they only write imaginary, metaphorical and extended meanings, which are realistic and will not have some emotions. The poem expressing the mood of fruit on the back is not a champion, but the reader thinks that the company has got some, smile. "Habitat" is used to describe the life of species, and now autumn ends in this section, which summarizes the situation of farmers returning and the image of nothingness (autumn), creating a relaxed and quiet atmosphere.
The second photo is an atmosphere word ("dew") of "Frost belongs to Fish Morning", "Performance" and "Frost". The poems written by He Qifang in his early years often convey an indifferent, quiet, lonely and hazy atmosphere. The picture also contains a series of activities: casting nets, fishing and rocking the river. The pictures of these ordinary activities contain a kind of light and far, clear and quiet charm in the poet's pen. "Gently" often appears in poems, such as the relaxed and satisfied mood of a fisherman who is "handy". He Qifang's mind may be in the past few years, and autumn is really so quiet and far away.
The third picture is a long picture of a girl. Writing this section of the stream of weeds and crickets is equivalent to the word "feeling" of the environment mentioned by the ancients. It is when sorting out his relics that his first sentence is realized through the king of sex and responsibility. Wandering weeds and cool water are not human activities. If we must continue afterwards, it is the romance in the girl's heart. The naturally prosperous summer has passed, and the arrival of autumn has become quiet. On the other hand, most people should keep silent and listen to the voice of the soul. After listening to the flute of the bull market in summer, the shepherdess suddenly stopped listening, and the soul in a corner began to sprout, which really shook "Ye Xiang is like the root of a hot summer" (He Qifang's poem "Summer Night"). What's good about writing his favorite early poems about love? This time, he once wrote a more subtle and wonderful article. This part is the only five elements, writing, writing a position where love transitions from the beginning to the inside story. The poet chose shepherdess's eyes from this particular angle. Although eyes are not written, readers see the pure, clean and special love of the kingdom, and all the girls who have loved love the eyes of love. Comparing the three poems, we can see that the first two parts are mainly about the external scenes and the soul of the personnel department, and the sense of gathering in the whole poem is really subtle. If you don't write, it's hard to become love. You are ecstatic, and the poem "floats".
In a word, this "Autumn" depicts different scenes and pictures, creating a refined atmosphere in this world. The atmosphere here is quiet, clear, sweet and subtle. After writing it in a busy summer relaxing scene, there is a quiet atmosphere, so write it as a paradise-like life, not some hard hatred on the farm, so Qingyuan atmosphere; Boys and girls write hazy and pure love in such a sweet atmosphere; Like He Qifang's poems, it writes beautiful images in soft language, avoiding the noisy scenery and clumsy weight, such a delicate atmosphere. Therefore, there is no discordant unity between every picture and screen image of this poem; Relying on this peaceful and quiet atmosphere, Qingyuan, sweetness, beauty and many other functions have risen to the extreme. Technology makes up for this, and non-experts can't. However, this poem written by He Qifang was written by a 20-year-old college student!