Song Zhongshu
Shili Qingshan is far away, and the tide is flat and the road is sand. Several birds cried and complained about the years. Another bleak moment of the end of the world.
The Millennium gathers the waning moon, and the breeze scatters the clouds. Green Di Yang asked Lotus: Remember the family that sold wine in those days?
Note ① home: modal particles at the end of the sentence, strengthen the tone.
(1) What expression is used to write the scenery on this word? Try to combine verse analysis. (4 points)
(2) What kind of thoughts and feelings does this word mainly express? What is the basis of your thinking? (3 points)
Examine the expression skills and appreciation ability of the works' thoughts and feelings, and the ability level is D.
(1)① scenery writing adopts the method of combining far and near. Shili Qingshan is a distant view, and Shachaoping Road is a close view; ② Adopt the method of audio-visual combination. The first two poems are visual descriptions and several birds are auditory descriptions. (3) Use personification rhetoric. In fact, the phrase "singing birds and complaining about the years" is an expression of the author's inner sadness.
[4 points. Answer two points. 65438+ 0 point for expression skills; Close expression skills combined with verse analysis 1 point. The answer is beyond the above three items, as long as it makes sense. ]
(2) (1) Expressed the author's sadness that his years are fleeting and his youth is easy to get old. You can see this by saying a few times that birds sing and complain about the years; (2) It expresses the author's weariness of wandering around the world, which can be seen when the world is bleak; (3) Expressed the author's mixed feelings when revisiting his hometown. Green Di Yang asked Lotus: I remember the family that sold wine in those years. It was written that the poet was standing by the lotus pond. It suddenly occurred to me that one year, at this time, he had been here, bought wine in a nearby restaurant, and watched the lotus while drunk. He couldn't help asking the lotus in the pond, lotus, do you remember the drunk who bought wine that year?
[3 points. The answer meets one of them. 2 points for thoughts and feelings, based on 1 point. Other answers, as long as they make sense. ]
Comment and analysis
As a travel work, Zhongshu has a unique expression of freshness and sadness. The beach road is wide and the green hills meet, which should be pleasing to the eye. However, in the eyes of poor pedestrians wandering around the world, they all turned into resentment. Even the singing of birds in spring is telling their inner grievances. In fact, this is the externalization of the poet's feelings. Tired pedestrians can't help recalling those who enjoy selling wine. That kind of warmth is in sharp contrast with the eyes. This word is beautiful and beautiful, which means smooth and accessible. Therefore, it also relieves the pain of leaving people and makes the whole word not boring to read.
Distinguish and appreciate
Minghua, surnamed Zhang. Anzhou people have introduced scholars. It is said that when he was young, he was charming and bohemian, so his wife was very dissatisfied with him and poisoned his food, so he could not be saved. From then on, he was disheartened, abandoned his family and became a monk, and lived in Chengtian Temple in Suzhou and Bao Yue Temple in Wu Shan, Hangzhou. However, although Zhong Shu became a monk, he did not follow the rules of Buddhism. Although he doesn't eat meat, he is addicted to honey and wine, and he drinks and eats honey every time. This word was written after he became a monk. From this word, readers can also see a self-portrait of a bohemian monk who became a monk in his early years.
The first part focuses on space, and the first two sentences directly describe the scenery, showing a picture of "the green hills are covered with water". "Shili Qingshan is in the distance" is a distant scenery. "Ten Miles of Castle Peak" already contains the word "far", and the word "far" is added here, which not only points out the artistic conception of "there are many amateurs in the spring mountain", but also reveals the melancholy and cold mentality of the poet who does not know when to return. "Beach attracts sand" is a close-up view. The poet's line of sight recovered from the prospect of "ten miles of green hills" to the scenery in front of him, and turned to painting water from Zhufushan, pointing out the specific environment of pedestrians. The third sentence changed from writing what you saw to listening to what you said. In the distant green hills, "a few birdsongs" can be heard occasionally, which is picturesque for happy people. Singing and dancing with birds is a great pleasure in its beautiful scenery, but for those poets who are full of feelings and endless hearts, the song seems to be a bird telling the fleeting youth and the aging youth. This is the empathy association caused by the poet's psychological emotion moving into the crow of birds. From the sound of birds, the poet suddenly surges up, which is another "bleak time" and a "distant" sigh, which is a reflection of the poet's long-term wandering and boredom with this life.
The next movie is mainly about time. "White dew" refers not only to the cool night dew in autumn, but also to the season and climate. The sentence "breeze" follows the previous sentence, emphasizing sunlight. End. These two sentences closely bear the fate of "birds singing for years" and vividly show the process of time passing. The sentence "Qingyang" is a link between the past and the future, and it is about scenery. Liuan, under the shade of trees, after the breeze, the lotus fragrance is fluttering, and the lotus is big and beautiful, which is exciting. Standing by the lotus pond, the poet suddenly remembered that one year, at this time, he had been here, bought wine in a nearby restaurant, and took advantage of the wine to see the lotus. He couldn't help sighing and rejoicing, so he asked the lotus in the pond, "Lotus, do you remember the drunk who bought wine that year?" This question is full of charm. In the eyes of Buddhists, the lotus is the most sacred thing, so the Buddha statues of Sakyamuni are all sitting on the lotus. Although the poet is a monk now, when he sees the lotus, he thinks of its secular beauty, and closely connects the lotus with his drunken flower viewing, which shows the poet's true mentality, although he is called a monk. Here, the poet recalls the past from the perspective of eyes, but still writes from the perspective of time, taking care of the last film "Another bleak time, at the end of the world".
The whole poem is conceived from two aspects: time and space, lyrical description of scenery, emotion in scenery, clear image and clear artistic conception. The lyrics are bright in color, harmonious in contrast, rich in color and full of beauty.
Appreciation of nan kezi's poems 2 original texts
The mountains are dark and cloudy, and the weather is cold and rainy.
Several branches were bright and wet, and they were red with tears.
Don't feel sorry for the east wind.
The hat faces outwards and ditches are everywhere.
Hard work is a problem concerning agriculture, countryside and farmers.
Get a plow and look forward to a good year.
Appreciate:
The traditional concept of division of labor and guarding the frontier has a profound influence on the creation of Song Ci. Common themes such as "Tian", "Tian Fu Tan" and "Transplanting Song Dynasty" are rarely involved in Song Ci. This word describes the working life of farmers and shows simple and upward feelings connected with them quietly, so it is worth cherishing. The first part begins with the scenery: the mountains are dark and cloudy, and the cold rain is coming. After writing about the environment and weather, I picked up my pen and talked about close-ups. I saw several condensed water drops, poor beautiful flowers. Down the river, it is necessary to write the heart and express emotion around "crying red", which is the proper meaning of the pen. But in the next two sentences, I advise poets not to cherish flowers and not to be depressed and worried. It can be said that the pen is flexible and exquisite. Open the next book, extend the brushwork to fields and buildings, and use the words "facing the sun" and "extending in all directions" to describe the life of farmers who work all the year round without avoiding wind and rain. This leads to the sigh that "hard work on earth is three rural issues". "Agriculture, countryside and farmers" refers to spring ploughing, summer sowing and autumn harvest. A bumper harvest of grain is the hope of farmers for a year. At this time of heavy rain, people expect to have enough rain to plow the fields. As for cherishing flowers and hurting spring, they have neither leisure nor leisure.
Whenever "flowers are deceived by the cold" (in Shi Dazu's Luo Qixiang's language) and "freezing clouds and cloudy days" (in Liu Yong's midnight song), literati often touch things and express their feelings of pity. These works, on the whole, are also things and people, and they also merged into a piece of Wang Yang in Song Ci. Although there are profound floating differences, it also has its own value. However, his persistence in personal experience and confinement to the narrow world are the common features of most of his chapters. This song "Nan Kezi" is different. The beautiful and bright red crying that is about to fall because of the wind and rain, and the farmers who have been working in the fields all the year round and are looking forward to the rain at this moment, are placed at the two ends of the author's emotional balance through witness or association.
It is not a chord in the old tune, but a new sound made in a different way. The author's eyes are not limited to the narrow self, and the emotional world is relatively open. Sweep Chen Si with goodwill.
Su Shi, Xin Qiji and others. I also wrote some words describing rural life, and I also devoted myself to loving the countryside and caring about farming. What they do is often like folk paintings, such as a group of Huanxisha by Su Shi in Xuzhou (such as five poems such as Watching Fish in the Deep Red Sun) and Qing Ping Le by Xin Qiji. The brushwork of the village residence is more nuanced. Wang Yan's first poem shows different characteristics. The author's feelings are not mainly cast on the screen, but focus on the direct expression of cognition, with a strong rational color. Therefore, when writing about farmers' lives, such as "flowers are facing the sun, and furrows are everywhere", it is also a more general way, not to win by depicting pen and ink.
There were two Wang Yan in Song Dynasty, both of whom had poems handed down from generation to generation. The author of this article is Hui Shu, a native of Wuyuan, Shuangxi (now Jiangxi). In the fifth year of Xiaozong Daoism (1 169), he was a scholar, and he had Shuangxi Poetry Collection. Its purpose of "not indulging in lust and wandering in the impossible" and the Preface to the Poems of Shuangxi Leisure are also fully reflected in the simple style of Nankezi. This word does not use flowery words or expensive things. The word used in the next word has also been tried. For example, the gesture of writing flowers in the rain is quite vivid. But this word also has defects, and the whole language is relatively simple and meaningless.