Essay title 1: The story of rain
Purpose of the essay
1. To enrich students’ spiritual understanding and guide them to observe and experience the charm of nature.
2. By collecting relevant information, increase your knowledge, broaden your horizons, and exercise your information collection and processing abilities.
3. Read and recite Shu Yu’s literary works to improve literary appreciation and recitation skills, especially appreciate the artistic conception of “situation blending” in lyrical works.
Training requirements
1. Write in multiple styles, themes, and angles to expand thinking and inspire spirituality.
2. Observe carefully, listen attentively, grasp the characteristics of the scene, embody emotions in the scene, blend the scenes, and express your true inner feelings.
3. Use various rhetoric appropriately when writing to enhance the effect of expression.
4. Use a variety of expression methods, narration, description, discussion, and lyrical organic combination to narrate inner stories, describe rainy scenery, express inner true feelings, and elaborate on clear opinions, etc.
5. Use association and imaginative thinking appropriately to express positive and healthy emotions.
Tips for ideas
Question 1: Listening to the rain
Tips:
"Rain" is a natural phenomenon, itself Nothing special. But there are big differences in the eyes of different people. For frustrated people, the rain adds to the melancholy; for proud people, the rain has a unique taste. These differences are all caused by people's moods. This is what the saying goes, "Looking at things from my own perspective, everything has my color." When we communicate with nature attentively, we will discover the splendor of nature. To write this article well, you must first have a pair of discerning eyes and a loving heart.
1. Write down the characteristics. Rain in different seasons has its own characteristics. Spring rain is moist and soft, summer rain is violent and rigid, and autumn rain is lingering and cold. Even rain in the same season will be different. Pay attention to these when writing and avoid ambiguity. This requires careful observation and careful understanding.
2. Blending of scenes. The description of rain should be combined with personal emotional expression. This combination is not the addition of one plus one. It is best not to write a description plus a lyrical paste form. Emotions should be permeated between the lines, so that every word is marked. The imprint of emotion makes the rain "alive".
3. True feelings. The emotions in love should come from the heart, come from the sincerity, and be natural. Don't be happy without joy or sad without worry. Avoid either straightforward narration and pale emotions; using modal words to compose it and being pretentious; repeated slogans and clichés; or political commentaries that teach people from a high position. If you don't really express your feelings, don't "express your emotions" easily. True feelings in the true sense can only be obtained on the basis of repeated understanding and observation of objective things. If you want to impress others, you must first impress yourself.
4. Express positive and healthy emotions. While elaborating your own opinions and describing your own experiences, you should avoid writing about life in a gray tone, viewing life in a negative light, and expressing your personality with a rebellious mentality.
5. Study the reader’s psychology. Before writing, you might as well think about it from the reader's perspective, rather than just from the author's perspective. Think about it, if you are a reader, what do you hope to get from it, what kind of content and expression "I" like, what kind of content "I" are tired of the most... Only in this way can it be possible to impress the readers' hearts.
6. Use appropriate rhetoric. As the saying goes: "Thirds of beauty, seventy percent of appearance." The same goes for writing essays. As long as it is dressed up with "everything is right", why worry about it not being "unparalleled in the world"? There are many ways to dress up, but the most important and effective way is to use figures of speech. Clever use of various rhetorical formats will make your composition language radiant and magnificent. At the same time, we cannot seek form for the sake of form, otherwise we will fall into the misunderstanding of formalism. Title 2: The Story of Rain
Tips:
This article is mainly about narrative, training the combination of narrative and lyricism.
1. Think from multiple perspectives. Before writing, you should fully activate your mind and think from all angles. Don't just limit yourself to writing about "rain" directly and directly, as long as it is related to "rain", such as stories that happen in the rain, such as several stories surrounding "rain". Personal stories and more.
2. Arrange the structure. Such as the relationship between paragraphs and levels, the transition and anaphora of each part, and the processing of the beginning and end. Especially the beginning and end. The opening can be in the following ways: opening the chapter with a topic, setting a question in the first paragraph, clarifying the motivation, exaggerating the atmosphere, opening the way with famous quotes, creating suspense, etc. The ending can be in the following ways: summarizing the full text, revealing the theme, enlightening the theme, looking forward to the future, inspiring, full of philosophy, thought-provoking, etc. "Writing is like looking at mountains but not liking the plains." In the process of narration, you can use a variety of narrative methods, such as flashbacks, interludes, supplementary narrations, etc., to make the structure ups and downs, so that you can tell a story well and be attractive. Of course, all structures must express the center: "The Story of Rain".
3. The narrative and lyricism are properly blended. The relationship between the two is that there is a main and a secondary one, with narrative being the primary one and lyricism being the secondary one.
Of course, the master is indispensable, and the deputy is also indispensable. If the narrative part of a narrative is the "dragon", then the lyrical part is the "eyes". If the arrangement is improper, the "dragon" cannot take off, and the "eyes" have nowhere to place. Only when the arrangement is reasonable can it be fascinating.
4. Related materials
1. Poppy Tingyu
Jiang Jie (Southern Song Dynasty).
Young Man Tingyu Gelou
The red candles dim the tents
The strong man is listening to the rain in the boat
The broad clouds in the river are low and the wild geese are calling the west wind.
Now listening to the rain There are stars on the temples of the monk's house
The joys and sorrows are always ruthless.
From before the first stage, until dawn.
2. Light rain
Qiu Fengjia
Light rain and light clouds sweep the tomb sky,
News of the east wind continues for years.
Tangli blossoms bloom into thousands of forest snows,
I am alone in the spring mountains and feel at a loss.
3. The night rain is sent to the north.
Li Shangyin.
You asked about the return date but there is no timetable.
The night rain in Bashan swells the autumn pond.
Why should *** cut off the candles from the west window?
But talk about the rainy night in Bashan.
4. "Mountain Rain"
Weng Juan
One night the forest was full of stars and the moon was white, and there were no clouds or thunder.
In the middle of the day, I suddenly saw a rushing stream and knew it was rain coming from another mountain.
5. "Mountain Rain"
He Shaoji
Short hats are bundled together to avoid the branches, which is suitable for outdoor activities in the early cool weather.
Streams and clouds gather together everywhere, and mountain rain comes suddenly without anyone noticing.
The clothes and towels on the horses are getting wet, and the melons and beans are not draped by the village.
When the new clear sky comes, the peaks and mountains come out, and thousands of waterfalls fly together, which is another wonder.
6. "Good rain knows the season, and spring will happen. Sneak into the night with the wind, moistening things silently" (Du Fu's "Spring Night Happy Rain")
7. "Outside the Sky" The black wind blew up the sea, and the flying rain came across the river from east Zhejiang" ("Heavy Rain in Youmei Hall" by Su Shi of the Song Dynasty),
8. Couplet of Hanxu Hall on South Lake Island in the Summer Palace
Bitong The path is clear and moist; the green emerald green peaks are covered with rain.
The Summer Palace is in Haidian District, Beijing. Nanhu Island is located in the southeast of Kunming Lake in the garden, corresponding to Wanshou Mountain. The Hanxu Hall on the rockery in the north of the island is the main building on the island. It is the place to watch the water scenery of Kunming Lake. Cixi once reviewed the Beiyang Navy here. One theory is that it was written by Qianlong, Emperor Gaozong of the Qing Dynasty. This couplet describes the distant and near scenery of Nanhu Island in the early morning after the rain. The first couplet describes the close shot, and the second couplet writes the distant view. Fresh and neat.
Example 1
The Telling of Rain
Wang Ling
Listen, I am listening to the clever voice between the tiles on the eaves; look , my strange form floating in the forest and wilderness; enlightenment, my clear mind resting between my cheeks...
Listen to my voice! Like beads embedded in glass, like pieces of music blowing into my heart, like rolling waves pouring into the shore, close your eyes, listen to the sound of my footsteps, and guess carefully, is it a poem blown away by the wind? Is it a flower knocked over by the waves? Or a rushing stream? ah! It turns out to be me, quietly coming to you, bringing you the sound of flowers and weeds shaking gently, covering you with a refreshing and comfortable coat. I am willing to talk to you in front of this window. Do you hear it?
Look at my body! Like a sharp sword, like a flower needle, like silk thread, like light yarn, knocking on your window, falling down, turning from silk into drops, from drops into strings, sliding down, I am dancing, I am flying, in the child In front of them, I also have some childishness. I am not willing to dissolve between the soil and the water, so I splash water or make noise. In front of the adults, I am not willing to be outdone and use my body to moisten the cheeks of passers-by. , wet their clothes, decorate their glasses, knock their foreheads, but the tangible me will eventually merge into the rivers and lakes, become invisible, and disappear indifferently. And the form at that time, have you seen it?
Enlighten my soul! When the land is dry, I want to moisten the soil; when there are floods, I keep myself well, and would rather turn into steam than let the disaster spread. Therefore, my heart is clear and kind, and I use my life to exchange for the truth, goodness and beauty in the world. Abandoning falsehood and ugliness, I would like to refute a poem: "The sound of wind and rain at night can tell how many flowers have fallen." How can my arrival cause the flowers to wither? It should be changed to "The sound of wind and rain at night tells how many flowers are blooming." That's right. Have you realized the clarity of my soul?
I, the rain, sprinkled my heart, soaked the earth, and watered my heart. In the days of spring, summer, autumn, and winter, I walked gently, but never went back. Do you understand me? —Rain’s heart song?
Brief review
The rain is written in the first person, full of emotions. And strong lyricism is precisely one of the characteristics of the first person.
Write it from three aspects: the sound of rain, the shape of rain, and the god of rain. It achieves multi-angle characterization, which makes the possession of materials appear full and avoids the problem of repeated procrastination of the same type.
The writing of "rain" from outside to inside, from form to spirit, not only reflects the author's detailed observation, but also shows the author's deep understanding. It is a kind of spirituality.
The language is beautiful and full of emotions, which adds to the beauty.
Example 2
Autumn Rain
Xu Yang
Some people in the world like the vigorous spring rain, while others like the poetic summer rain. . But I only like mature Qiu Yu.
When it comes to autumn rain, it is not as light as spring rain, but appears deeper. Speaking of autumn rain, it is not as hot as summer rain, but much calmer. It comes from the kingdom of heaven, diluting the summer heat; it comes from the light wheel of time and space, ringing the bells of autumn; it comes from the edge of the rainbow, painting the earth with a light golden color. Waves of cold wind hit from behind, making people unconsciously feel the indifference of autumn rain. Then clusters of dark clouds turned the clear blue sky black, and then huge raindrops fell from the sky. With a crash, the earth exploded, and the sound of hemp rain was as clear and sweet as pearls falling into a jade plate. They slam the earth with their plump bodies, leaving imprints on the earth, as if to warn the earth not to forget them due to the cold winter. When I woke up, I was surprised to find that the ground was covered with frost, which made people suddenly feel solemn and suddenly turned into a scene of "the dew is white tonight". The vegetation on the roadside, after being baptized by the autumn rain, has already faded its color and turned into a mature yellow; the chrysanthemums in the garden are gradually blooming with the rain. The fragrance of the earth mixed with the coldness of the rain spreads everywhere, which can be described as a unique atmosphere.
Recalling the sound of Qiu Yu, it was like hundreds of warriors fighting on the battlefield, appearing majestic and powerful, not like the childish face of Chun Yu that could not stand the test; recalling the strength of Qiu Yu falling on the body, it was like Like countless ice particles falling on the body, it looks strong and strong, not like the tenderness of summer rain, but like water that is fragile and vulnerable; recalling the temperature of autumn rain, it is even colder than previous rains, which makes people realize what true love is. rainwater. It is that kind of coldness that makes Qiu Yu more mature. If Chun Yu is a lovely child, Xia Yu is a delicate and beautiful lady, then Qiu Yu is a strong, mature, powerful warrior. Use your strong, hard body to rush forward and ring the bell of autumn.
I like Qiu Yu precisely because it has a strong, mature, and powerful national spirit, which makes it so unique and unique.
Brief Comment
This article is dedicated to Qiu Yu. This single object requires the author to have a unique and profound understanding of the object of writing. Otherwise, it will easily become verbose and verbose. This article has become a masterpiece precisely because of its profound and unique insights.
"Spring rain", "summer rain" and "autumn rain" are compared everywhere, highlighting the uniqueness of autumn rain. The angles of comparison are different: there are differences between "light" and "deep", there are differences between "fiery" and "calm", and there are differences between "childlike" and "strength". Through the contrast of various angles, the image of "Autumn Rain" is highlighted and plump.
The structural characteristics are also very distinct. Thematic parts appear in parallel, and the correspondence between the beginning and the end makes this juxtaposition appear smooth and avoids rigidity.
Synchronous guidance
Topic 1:
Rain has always been a symbol of sentimentality in the writings of literati throughout the ages. Rain also moisturizes the earth and brings vitality to the world
Please write an essay on the topic of "rain". The title should be of your own choice, no restriction on style, no less than 700 words
Guidance:
The theme of "Rain's Song" is innovative, and it uses materials from literary works to write about rain
Rain is a word that easily produces romantic emotions. There are wonderful stories behind rain, from Coming to us in yesterday's classics. It was sung in the night rain in Bashan, mourned in the silk rain in the south of the Yangtze River, played in the joyful rain on the spring night, and played in the continuous rain in autumn; it was murmured in front of the window of the sentimental girl, and it was played in the window of the sentimental girl, and it was played in the poet who had no hope of serving the country. Crying in the poems, singing in the hearts of people who have been in drought for a long time
When it rains, describe the feelings in the rain in the form of lyrical prose
When it rains, it is the season when lychees are ripe. , this nasty rain. When I was wearing a hat and a raincoat like everyone else, standing under the roots of a tree and learning to shake off the rainwater on the lychees, I suddenly felt that everything in the world had become peaceful and silent because of the rain. This kind of satisfaction and happiness of fighting against nature surrounds me and nourishes me
"Rainy Night" is conceived from multiple perspectives, using the rain to write about the friendship between classmates
Waking up in the middle of the night, I heard the rain and thunder outside. Most of the roommates were awake and couldn't fall asleep listening to the sound of rain and thunder. The windows made of several pieces of rotten wood were unable to withstand the raindrops carried by the strong wind. Yingzi's bed, which was facing the window, got wet. After a lot of fuss, everyone finally settled down. The wind, rain and thunder outside the window are still there, but it is very warm inside
"Rainy Season" has similar associations, linking rain with the troubles of adolescence
I don't know when it started, but my heart felt like it was raining. Rain, wet, gloomy and cold.
Who said that "young people don't know the taste of sorrow"? There are too many worries and bitterness in adolescence. Use an optimistic and positive attitude to hold an umbrella for your soul! After the rainy season, there will be a brilliant sunny day
Topic 2
"Good rain knows the season, and spring will happen. Sneak into the night with the wind, moistening things silently." This is a poem from Du Fu's "Spring Night Happy Rain". Please write a narrative essay with the title of the poem "Moisturizing Things Silently".
Requirements:
1. The content must be relevant. There must be characterization.
2. There must be appropriate description of the scenery.
3 Appropriately quote the poem "moisten things silently".
Guidance:
This article can not only write about rain, but also about people.
"Joyful Rain on a Spring Night" is a masterpiece by Du Fu that depicts a rainy scene on a spring night and expresses his joyful mood. In life, "good" is often used to praise those who do good things. Now using "good" to praise rain can arouse people's associations with people who do good things. The poet uses personification to say that rain "knows the season", that is, this rain knows how to meet objective needs. When everything sprouts in spring, it starts to rain just when it needs rain - how wonderful! The good thing is that in addition to "knowing the season", it also lies in its ability to "moisten things". Spring rains are usually accompanied by mild winds to moisturize things. Although some rains are accompanied by cold winds and turn into snow, and some rains are accompanied by strong winds and turn into showers, these are not typical spring rains. The poem combines the "sneaking into the night" and "silence" of the spring rain, which not only shows that this spring rain is a drizzle accompanied by the gentle wind, but also shows that it only comes to moisten things, not to please. If you want to please, , it will come during the day to create some momentum so that people can see and hear clearly. Just because it has no intention to please, it chooses a time like "night" that does not hinder people, and comes quietly; in people's sleep Middle, silently.
Based on this understanding, which materials should be chosen to be consistent with the meaning of the text?
We can choose from the details of ideological work, caring for others, silent dedication, inspiring thinking, teachers, parents, gardeners, cleaners, etc., as materials to write in our own compositions. , the key is that we should grasp the overall characteristics of gentle breeze, drizzle, meticulousness, softness and warmth, and make some appropriate descriptions. For example, when describing scenery, you should highlight the moistness of spring rain, which is light, pattering, and fluffy. The rain and mist, the flowers and plants in the rain, and the pedestrians in the rain; the tranquility after the rain is moist, quiet and fresh; the grass that breaks out of the ground sucks the buds of the rain and dew, the color of the grass is seen from a distance but is not visible... Ingesting such scenery and characters, Only in such a tone and atmosphere can it be colorful to describe a person with the characteristics of "moisturizing things quietly".