Dai Wangshu in Rain Lane

1, the original text of Modern Shiyu Lane

Holding an oil-paper umbrella,

separate

Wandering in the long,

long

Lonely rain lane

I hope to see

Like cloves.

A girl with a grudge.

She does.

Clove-like color

Lilac fragrance

Lilac sadness

Mourn in the rain

Sad and confused

She lingers in this lonely rain lane

Hold an oil-paper umbrella

Like me

Like me.

voicelessly

Indifference,

Sad,

Disappointed again

She approached quietly.

Approaching,

Throw it again

Breathing eyes

She floated by.

well

As sad and confused as a dream.

Floating like a dream

Dingxiangyuan

I missed this girl.

She walked away silently,

remote

A ramshackle hedge.

Walk through this rainy path

In the sad song of rain

Remove her color.

Scattered her fragrance.

Dissipated,

Even hers.

Breathing eyes

Lavender melancholy

Holding an oil-paper umbrella,

separate

Wandering in the long,

long

Lonely rain lane

I hope to float over.

Like cloves.

A girl with a grudge.

2. Appreciation of Dai Wangshu's Rain Lane

The rain lane is hazy but not obscure, and "I" is a dreamer. Melancholy is based on self-awareness of limited life and detachment from the finiteness of perceptual existence. Lilac girl is the poet's ideal self-the self beyond reality; Is the hope for the future; This is a call to fellow travelers. Lilac girl is as sad and hesitant as "I" "Hesitation" not only means confusion, but also explains the persistence in finding a way out, giving people in hesitation inspiration and courage to move toward the light, and making us care about the value and significance of our own survival in a far-reaching sense. Rain Lane is the poet's "self-liberation" to cover up the ugly truth with beautiful imagination, and it is "deceiving himself and readers with some gorgeous illusions like soap bubbles". Apart from the artistic beauty of harmonious melody, it "has no merit in content". "Rain Lane" uses symbolic lyric techniques. The narrow and gloomy rain lane in the poem, the lonely traveler wandering in the rain lane and the girl as sad as lilac are all symbolic images. These images constitute a symbolic artistic conception, which implicitly implies the author's confusion, sadness and expectation, giving people a hazy and profound aesthetic feeling. Musicality is another outstanding artistic feature of Rain Lane. Repeated repetition, repeated sentence-making and repeated singing are used in the poem, which produces a cycle of melody and a pleasant sense of music. So Mr Ye Shengtao praised this poem as a new era of syllables in China's new poems.