Composition! ! Enlarge "Zhu Mo Portrait Poetry"

We learned a painting poem-painting poem. The author of this poem is Zheng Banqiao in Qing Dynasty. This poem was given to the superior by Zheng Banqiao when he was the magistrate of Wei County. The first sentence, "Yazhai lies listening to the rustling bamboo", was written by the author when he was lying in the study of the county government and heard the breeze blowing the bamboo forest outside the window. The second sentence "Doubt is the voice of people's sufferings" is the author's association with the sound of bamboo. The author thinks of the sufferings of ordinary people from the sound of bamboo leaves blown by the wind in nature, which seems to be the sobbing of ordinary people struggling in hunger and cold, and fully embodies the feelings of loving the people in the author's heart. The third sentence, "some small officials in Caozhou County", shows that all "parents and officials" should solve their worries for the people, which broadens the connotation of this poem. The fourth sentence, "One branch and one leaf always care about feelings", not only cares about Feng Zhu's paintings and poems, but also expresses deep affection for the people's every move. Bit by bit, it is closely connected with "parents". Zheng Banqiao's poems on paintings are linked with the sufferings of people's lives through the sound of bamboo leaves blown by the wind, which expresses the author's deep concern and sympathy for people's fate. I think at night, many people are asleep. Teacher's comment: The little author introduced a poem inscribed by Zheng Banqiao-"Poem on Map of Zhu Mo". Every introduction in this paper explains the meaning of this poem, so that readers can understand the general idea of this poem and understand Zheng Banqiao from it. The poem recommended by the little author is good, but the little author didn't explain it in his own language and didn't show his understanding of it. No matter how good other people's opinions are, they can't replace their own. It is suggested that young writers use their own language to express the pictures in the poem, and they can also express their own views. At the same time, the author should also pay attention to dividing the article into paragraphs, so that the level of the article will be clearer.