The author Yang Du tells a series of stories about how "I" wandered the Jianghu in the first person: by chance, Yang Du, who is known as "hidden weapons is the first, and his flying skills are the first", got the secret book of sea flowers and learned the art of hiding places, which is even more powerful. However, he suffered a series of assassinations, and the secret organization "Heaven and Earth Society" on the Jianghu surfaced. ...
Brief introduction of the author
Yang Du, born in Wenling, Zhejiang Province in August 1, is now a junior two student in Wenling No.3 Middle School. He started literary creation at the age of eight, started writing short stories and poems at the age of nine, published fantasy novel's The Magic of Happy Candy at the age of eleven, and created a long juvenile martial arts novel Crossing the Jianghu at the age of eleven or twelve. Many other works are being created or planned.
The first paragraph of the book attracted me like a magnet: "I made a rough calculation." Now, I have four stab wounds, three sword wounds and one poisonous wound. " However, there is no hidden weapon to hurt me. "
I can't help secretly surprised, what a powerful brushwork, such two opening remarks, like a high-energy heavy shell, so powerful and weighty, how much foreshadowing and suspense it should contain! If you don't have a plan in mind, how dare you start with such boldness and provocation?
Suddenly ignited my eager reading desire.
After further reading, my heart failed. In the novel, the martial arts expert known as "the first flying skill in the world and the first flying skill in hidden weapons" and the title of "sharp knife" is Yang Du, and the author of this book is only thirteen years old. Obviously, he did it on purpose. This not only gives me a refreshing feeling, but also makes me admire in surprise, because it is really rare and difficult to describe it in the first person in martial arts novels. It can be seen that the young author Yang Du not only has a funny sense of humor, but also has enough confidence.
Reading and reading, gripping stories come one after another, which is really overwhelming. Moreover, big stories are stacked with small stories, which is really like opening a treasure chest. It is colorful and surprising. There are many anecdotes in Jianghu Wulin, which are dotted with sparkling pearls.
I'm a little worried after reading less than half. Can such a strong momentum continue from beginning to end? Will it be anticlimactic like some works I have seen before, such as a long-distance runner with insufficient skills, who takes the lead at first, runs full of energy, then slows down, and finally stumbles, gasps and struggles?
However, my worry soon proved to be completely unnecessary.
The more you read later, the better. I only feel that the climax is repeated, the highlights are constant, and sometimes the swords are shadowed, and the adventure is fierce; Sometimes it is a city by the sea, strange and unpredictable; Sometimes laughing and cursing, witty and witty, let me applaud one after another.
In this way, I almost read the whole book in one breath. If you want to ask me how I feel after reading it, it is two words: good-looking.
This is really a good-looking book. I believe that not only young readers will find it beautiful, but also their parents, grandparents and so on.
I remember that when Children's Literature held an activity in Shangyu, Zhejiang not long ago, the editor Sun Yuhu introduced us to a boy 12 years old beside him, saying that his name was Yang Du, the youngest author attending the meeting, and his recently completed martial arts novel would be published by the Children's Literature Publishing Center of Zhongshaoshe Society.
I think this young man has fair skin, regular facial features, fine features like a girl, and quiet manners. I guess he must be the child of a scholar. When sitting in a meeting with us, he looked so shy and shy, without the publicity I often see in some literary teenagers. He never seemed to hear what he said, but looked at the speaker unblinkingly with dark eyes.
I was a little skeptical at the time. I'm a little skeptical. Can such a young junior high school student really write a novel, and it is a long martial arts novel? Even if you can write, how can you write?
Now, I have finished reading his novel Walking in the Jianghu, and I have to admit that my original idea was too narrow and shallow. He once again verified the two sentences left by our ancestors with his wonderful work: "judge a person by his appearance" and "a hero makes a teenager."
One of the reasons why Yang Du's novels look good is that they are rich in content and full of unique and wonderful imagination.
For example, in his works, "Yang Du" can crush rocks hard, and then use these flying rubble to form an instant "air road", and he climbed to the top of the cliff on this "air road". Is this romantic enough?
For example, in his works, "Yang Du"' s most terrible opponent laughed at the launch of hidden weapons in heaven and earth, slapping the skin at the waist first and spitting out a mouthful of venom from the skin. At the same time, with a wave of his hand, he let many hidden weapons pass through the venom, so that every shot hidden weapons was stained with the venom and became a poisonous hidden weapons. This is absolutely amazing!
These extraordinary imaginations make you feel serious after reading them, as if they are justified. This is not something you can do out of thin air, but you need to have a wisdom and foundation.
Second, the plot is tortuous and the story is tortuous.
A good martial arts novel must have a good story, so that people can't put it down as soon as they open it, and they must read it all at once. Therefore, the story is the core element of martial arts novels.
Yang Du's martial arts novels are "good-looking" because there are one fascinating and gripping story after another. These stories are novel, tortuous and delicate, and they can always bring you to the reading realm of "winding paths leading to secluded places" and "mountains and rivers are full of doubts and roads, and there is another village with a bright future".
For example, the main line of the novel consists of a series of stories between "Yang Du" and an assassination organization "Heaven and Earth Alliance" controlled by a mysterious man named Xiaotiandi.
"Yang Du" first encountered a small world killer who pursued him again and again. Each killer has a different identity, different kung fu and different movements. Therefore, every decisive battle between them is a unique and thrilling story.
"Yang Du" sorted out the clues, found out the details, went deeper and deeper, and finally became one with the laughing world. In the end, of course, Yang Du won.
But who is this mysterious world of laughter? The result is greatly unexpected, which can be concealed. After careful consideration, it seems completely reasonable. At this point, I have to admire Yang Du, a young author, for his ingenious conception of the story and arrangement of the plot.
Third, the image is vivid and vivid, and all kinds of characters are vividly on the paper.
The success of a novel mainly depends on whether it successfully portrays typical characters, and martial arts novels are no exception. The reason why classic martial arts novels become classics is that they have created a series of typical characters with distinctive personalities and vivid images.
The reason why Yang Du's martial arts novel is "good-looking" is that some characters in the novel are lifelike, which can leave a very deep impression on people after reading it.
For example, Yang Du, the hero portrayed by the author with pen and ink, is almost invincible. Although his flying skills are the first and hidden weapons is the first, he is by no means as perfect as Gao Daquan. He has many common problems of ordinary people, such as greedy mouth, laziness, love to listen to good words, often play pranks, and sometimes trust others, and so on. Therefore, this chivalrous, upright, but kind-hearted figure gives people the feeling of intimacy, three-dimensional sense and realism.
Another important character in the novel is Bai Daxia, whose strength is almost equal to that of the protagonist, and he is also the character that the author tries to portray. When Bai Daxia first made his debut, he always flaunted the title of "the first in Wulin", openly declared that "life is not about fame and fortune, as long as you live happily", and assumed a lofty style of disdaining to attend the Wulin conference. But as soon as he heard someone say, "There will be a new Wulin conference this afternoon, and it will be too late if you don't sign up."
In this way, the author outlined such a mysterious figure with a few strokes, which is inconsistent in appearance, changeable, elusive and calculating, and also laid the groundwork for the future performance of this white soldier with the development of the story.
Of course, the little author is still a junior high school student who is only thirteen years old. When he mastered such a novel with hundreds of thousands of words, there were still some shortcomings, and there were bound to be some shortcomings.
In my humble opinion, as a novel, there is naturally a main line and a core, and all chapters should serve this main line and revolve around this core.
However, in this work, although several chapters are well written, they are not closely related to the main line and seem to be somewhat detached. Even if they are removed, it will not hinder the overall situation.
In addition, as a novel, a group of characters will appear on the stage. I think this work may involve too many characters, which is a bit complicated. Some characters just mention a name and pass by; Some characters appear, but they don't have much effect. They can't leave a deep impression on people, but they waste pen and ink.
It is suggested that young authors should further simplify the characters in their future creations, so as to concentrate their brushwork and highlight key points.
Also, the young author is not only gifted in language and writing, but also very aura, and the novel is very smooth and comfortable to read. However, I think if the words used in some places can be more precise, more convergent and more concise, perhaps the effect will be better.
Of course, this is just my personal feeling. It may be because everyone's reading habits and tastes are different, and there is an objective "generation gap" in age, so this view is not suitable and not enough to cultivate.