This poem expresses the author's understanding of happiness.
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It seems that your vocabulary is not very rich, and you pay too much attention to parallel sentences in rhetoric.
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Happiness
Happiness is eternal
Like the depth of the universe and the dazzling sun,
The sky is vast and the stars are bright,< /p>
More like the silence of the night, the loneliness of the clouds,
No worries, sorrow and sorrow~~·
Happiness is short-lived
Like the wind drifting by, like the clouds disappearing in a blink of an eye,
Like flowers and grass turning to zero, like the fragility of dewdrops,
It disappears in a blink of an eye, withers away in a blink of an eye,
There is no time for trouble, sorrow and misery~
You are the ones who are happy,
In the eternal loneliness of heaven and earth,
In the vast and heartless world
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Embracing each other’s troubles, sorrow, and misery
Tasting the joy of love~~~~~~~
I only made changes to the sentences, but not the content Keep it as it is! Because of time constraints, no adjustments were made to the rhyme!
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