1, at the end of the text.
Reasoning questions: such as "having a grateful heart will make our society more tolerant and understanding, and less responsible and entrusted;" More harmony and warmth, less quarreling and indifference; More sincerity and unity, less deception and distraction ... "("Have a grateful heart ").
Voting topic: For example, "What is certain is that no matter whether the road ahead is sunny or steep, I will be firm-painful and happy." ("Pain and Happiness")
Forward-looking topics: such as "I, my future is not a dream!" " "("My future is not a dream ")
Sentiment topic: for example, "She taught me tolerance and learned tolerance." (tolerance)
Step 2 echo from beginning to end
(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. ("Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season")
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!
(End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! ("Guarding the Fire of Spirit")
3. Express feelings and wishes.
For example, the "concern" at the end of the article: "The sun is shining outside the window, and the fragrance of cauliflower rushes into the classroom. Spring is so beautiful. Premier Zhou cares about us so much that we feel warm and happy. "
For example, at the end of the article, "Prime Minister Shili": ... The hearse gradually faded away and finally disappeared into the boundless night. People still stand quietly with their backs to the direction of the hearse, as if waiting for Premier Zhou to come back. "
Step 4 call call
Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. ("Give love to others")
Step 5 ask clever questions
Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? ("Ha ha me in the mirror")
6. Quote good sentences and lyrics
"Wild incense is fragrant, beautiful wood is cloudy, wind and frost are noble and clean, and the water comes out." In the past 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! (Thinking from the sky)
Thinking of this, I remembered a famous saying: "There are many books around me. If you find them, you will certainly learn a lot ... "("Reading People Around You ")
Zola said: "Life is only two and a half minutes, one minute to smile, one minute to sigh, one minute to love …" In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with admiring my mother's dress, that minute's smile was not forced. After that minute of sigh, it is no longer a sigh, but a transfer of love. My mother integrated her love for life, life and relatives into her daily life.
7. Lyric discussion
In fact, peace is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud floating across the horizon, gently dotted with blue sky, fresh and natural.
Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (In the Mood for Love)
8, scene contrast, scene unity
The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun gradually disappeared in the distance and disappeared in the sunset glow. There is no distance between the two. (reading in the rain)
At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Growing up in the Sun)
9. Repeat this point
"winter's personality", the main part appears "I love winter. Winter is a sacred symbol ","I love winter. Winter is a respectable strict teacher ","I love winter. Winter is the cradle of spring. Click the sentence again: "I love winter. I love the sanctity, strictness and selflessness of winter, and I love her unique personality! "
10, From Syria to Love
The title of the composition for the senior high school entrance examination somewhere is When I am Conquered. A examinee used the first person "I" instead of the brave and unyielding little ant in the form of fable, describing the process of tenacious struggle between "I" and various atrocities that killed "I", which concealed the author's attitude of love and hate. In the end, the hidden feelings finally broke out: "That little guy, he foolishly thought he could conquer me, a little ant, but he didn't know that the desire for freedom and life could not be extinguished by violence!" " .
1 1, this and that
What is said here is the meaning there, which is the expansion and sublimation of thought. A candidate intends to write the topic of "ears are picky about food" in his composition, and write three major changes of ears by analogy, such as "eating soft but not hard", "eating hemp and not eating spicy" and "eating fat and not eating thin", and then end up like this: "If ears become more picky about food, I am afraid the truth will disappear!"
12, inversion or accident method
The key is to take a sudden turn. In the composition "Thanksgiving", a candidate wrote a touching life story between a terminally ill uncle and aunt. During the intermission, there was a quip made by menstruation before his uncle fell ill: "Your uncle knew he was talkative and an empty talker. He hasn't written a word, and he hasn't even read a love letter when he is old. " At the end, my uncle died suddenly, but the author didn't stop there, but unexpectedly pointed out the following contents: "On the third day after my uncle died, we saw my uncle's" love letter "in the column of" personals "and wrote in bold:" My wife, 32 years old, has lived with her for five years, testifying that she is the best partner, yes. My aunt took this love letter and burst into tears. "
13, response title
The article "Walking with Poets" chooses the poems and life stories of three poets, Tao Yuanming, Li Bai and Su Shi, as its own writing materials, thus showing its own extracurricular reading achievements and highlighting the theme of "more gains from extracurricular reading". All three fragments are well written, so there is no need to go into details at the end. So he shouted with a call: "Poet! I am willing to walk with you! " .
14, leave blank.
"Xiangming" expresses the theme that "the weak always make excuses for themselves" by drinking tea and listening to the dialogue between father and daughter across the hall. At the end of the article, I wrote: "The conversation through the door made me think a lot. I took another sip of green tea, which was really bitter, but soon I tasted a heartfelt fragrance, which made me very comfortable. I suddenly remembered something, turned around and took out a bottle of green tea from the refrigerator and walked across the hall ... "
15, clever use of postscript
You can quote poems, provoke discussions and express your feelings; It has the function of strengthening expression and deepening theme.
For example, "Fish and Water" uses anthropomorphic techniques to write the story that fish are ungrateful, always want to jump out of the sea, get freedom, and wait until they leave the sea to regret it. At the end of the story, add the following words: "The sea creates life and protects life, so there will be happiness when fish get water." Philosopher said: Fish know that water is the source of happiness. "It's wonderful to state the theme concisely with the postscript, highlight the topic of' gratitude', change the writing object, be free and flexible, be natural, and deepen the theme.
16, clever use of rhetoric
Clever use of rhetorical devices, especially parallelism, metaphor, truth, duality, quotation, etc.
For example, at the end of Looking at the Mountain and Becoming a Peak: "Innovation is a stone that sparks a single spark; Innovation is fire, lighting the lamp of hope; Innovation is a lamp that illuminates the way forward; Innovation is the way, guiding us forward! "
17, go to the back
For example, at the end of Kiss and Understanding, "Plato betrayed his teacher and said,' I love my teacher, especially the truth'." When Brutu pierced Caesar's last sword, he said,' It's not that I love Caesar less, but that I love Rome more. How admirable their words and actions are when emotional intimacy conflicts with the truth of the matter! "。
18, fully expressed
Comprehensive use of narrative, description, lyricism, discussion and other expressions, the ending can also be boldly used.
For example, at the end of "Communication": "So a picture came to my eyes: my mother walked carefully step by step in the sunset glow, walking steadily and comfortably. The wind is blowing gently, beating a place with Phnom Penh in Ye Er. The water gleamed and looked into the distance. Birds frolicking in the air ... Walking is the communication of love. -I firmly told my mother that we would come for a walk tomorrow. "
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Writing ending skills
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said, "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting the fragrance."
Ming, memorable. "Like the beginning, the end is also very important. If an article with a clear theme and a novel angle is read to the end, it is
It's a pity that the ending is not good! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", so that
Speaking of which, the ending is even harder to write. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although there is no need to have an article.
The endings are all "leopard tails", but the endings are also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ①.
Gild the lily. Is the full text has ended, intriguing, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, hand over the whereabouts of people who do not need to explain.
Stay, the meaning that could have been realized was broken. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted that it had nothing to do with the content of the article.
Shouting, this ending is a big theme. 3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following closing technique,
Are commonly used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
1, natural beam. No matter what style the article is, after expressing the content, it is natural to collect the full text without designing the connotation.
A philosophical statement with profound implications is called "natural ending" without carving out rich symbolic forms. Completely avoided gilding the lily.
The end fault of foot moaning without illness is simple, lively and unpretentious, which is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce.
It is impossible to pay too much attention to "form" and "law" because of fierce competition. As long as you are passionate and comfortable, you can write wherever you want.
It is a good article to express your feelings in different categories, but paying attention to "nature" does not mean arbitrariness and rashness, but nature that develops with literary thinking.
The trend is over. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write sentences that echo the beginning, and don't simply repeat. This way of ending is varied.
The common beam acquisition method in this paper. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. such as
"A Precious Shirt" begins with "At my home, there is a very cool white shirt". At the end, it reads: "In the past four years, this work
Precious shirts, I carefully collect, I am not willing to wear them once. "Praise of Poplar" echoes from beginning to end: "I want to praise Bai loudly.
Poplar! "
3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending depends on the content of the full text and puts the theme at the end of the article in concise language.
Express your thoughts clearly, or explain your writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this ending method is also called "making the finishing point"
Type ". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it said, "Changing nationality does not mean changing national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are. "
Yes At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears in a scattered form.
At the end of the article, narratives and essays, in a few words, express a profound and thought-provoking philosophy or warning content, which is deeply imprinted on
In the reader's mind, there is an effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings in the author's heart, arouse the emotional waves of readers and cause
The voice of the reader has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in the narrative of writing people's notes, but also in discussion and discussion.
Writing of literature. There are various forms of lyric discussion ending, which makes the ending more free and a good "lyric discussion" ending.
The ending is bound to give readers a real and full feeling. For example, the end of "Flower Market" wrote: "She stood in a hundred flowers with a smile, too.
Like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid. "Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Memories of Mother, which is a typical lyric argument.
The end of.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of the composition is different from the beginning, but it is also
There are rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the exam.
Students' usual solid training lies in the improvisation and "extra-poetic merit" of candidates.
Please look at the end of the examinee's composition:
If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it, why not take action to protect green and the environment, so that we can have green forever. At that time, green will sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If Life is Without Green")
Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then starts a topic around "If life is no longer green". Starting with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", the article emphasizes that the environment is deteriorating and the green is decreasing, which will naturally lead to anxiety. Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which triggered thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination. Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on. Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! How to make the ending profound and powerful, lingering and memorable is the key for us middle school students to practice ending writing. The following are several training questions for students to learn from.
Segment training questions:
1. Write a composition on the topic of "reading".
Writing Tips: "Books are the nourishment of human beings" and "Books are the ladder of human progress". The master said that books are the crystallization of human wealth and wealth, and they are also our teachers and friends. We students must have something to say about this broad topic. How to do it better, we should also pay attention to the following points: ① The angle should be new and small, and the story of reading a book and a problem in reading will be written deeply and thoroughly because of the small angle. (2) Write your own experiences and feelings, write real feelings, do not write false and empty content, and do not write cliches. (3) Give priority to one expression, and avoid disunity in style. At the end of this composition, you only need to summarize the full text and ask questions at the end of the article. At the end of the article, for example, life tells me that only those who can really read "extracurricular books" are outstanding children of the times! I seem to feel the wind of the times passing by my ears, leaving a sentence: be careful! I would also like to advise thousands of colleagues in Qian Qian: read more carefully and distinguish carefully! For our beautiful tomorrow! ("I watch extracurricular reading")
2. Lyrics writing skills in winter: An article can express strong feelings, soft feelings, deep feelings and light feelings. The key is from what angle the author writes. This lyrical article. When writing, we should inject the author's true feelings, so that the article can have life and vitality. We encourage students to write stories and express their true feelings, so that the ending can naturally play a finishing touch and sublimate their feelings. Otherwise, the empty lyric at the end will only make people feel like a poster posted casually, which is very uncoordinated.
Example at the end: "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?" This famous poem has been quoted repeatedly for decades and is nothing more than a symbol of hope. In this transparent winter, people can clearly understand the road under their feet with a clear head. Walking step by step, lying still or taking detours will delay the realization of hope.
3. Write a composition on the topic of "window" from your own point of view. Except poetry, the style is not limited, and the topic is self-made
Writing Tip: Building projects must have windows. The human eye is called the window of the soul ... There are too many connotations attached to the window and too many extended meanings, which are worth exploring. As a topic, there are many ideas to elaborate. Write from a familiar angle according to your own feelings. At the end of this kind of composition, you can use the finishing touch. The ancients compared the ending to a bell in order to produce the artistic effect of lingering sound. If the ending can leave readers room for imagination, it will be memorable and will undoubtedly add luster to the article.
Not long ago, grandma left, taking away laughter, greetings, windows and my heart. I know, that window is the most beautiful memory in my life ... ah! Old people, true feelings, small windows ... ("Grandma's Small Windows")
Fan Wenxuan analysis
Ruthless character
Reading Zhu Ziqing's back reminds me of my parents' back. But it's not completely different, because Zhu Ziqing's article shows his father's concern for him, and my parents' back leaves me only ruthless regrets. When I was five years old, I was taken to court, and my grandmother held me in a chair. When I saw my parents, I called them loudly, but they ignored me. My father and mother argued endlessly in court. Finally, I heard that it was awarded to my mother, and my father left the court. I shouted "Dad-",but the "shadow" left me without looking back. Since then, I have lived with my mother and grandmother.
But a few days later, my heartless mother also left me. Grandma wanted to leave me, but she couldn't bear it, so she left me, so I was like a child without mom and dad, living with her all day.
In the days when my grandmother accompanied me, I often remembered the scene of living with my parents: my father rode a car, took me to play in the street and took me fishing by the river; My mother took me shopping and bought me clothes. I can't stop crying when I think about it.
Later, my grandmother sent me to school, and the tuition was provided by my uncle. When my classmate invited me to his birthday party, I really envied seeing other people's parents give their children beautiful gifts and make wishes in front of candles. I thought about my birthday more than once. I don't want that sweet and delicious cake, and I don't want that exquisite gift. I just want my parents to make up and wish me a happy birthday, but I've been looking forward to today, but I haven't.
When I learned from my uncle that my mother remarried and my father got married, I cried bitterly. Grandma came over and said, "Don't cry, son. They are heartless things. They don't deserve your grief. You should study hard and do something big for them. " At this time, grandma's tears flowed down unconsciously.
Dad, mom, I want to have a home, a warm and happy home, I want to have the love of my parents, but I can't get it. Dad, mom, you know, your departure has brought me infinite sadness and resentment, made me feel the pain of losing my loved ones, and made me a child with parents but not caring for them experience many ups and downs in the world! Once again, I call from my heart: "Dad, Mom, have pity on me and marry again ..." However, all I can answer is the echo and the shadow that is getting farther and farther away from me and getting smaller and smaller in my eyes. ...
Final comment: Parents' divorce has brought indelible trauma to children's minds. The little author expressed his yearning for his parents in the article, especially at the end, which was touching and tearful. The real call for parents to remarry seems to haunt us for a long time, leaving endless thoughts and aftertaste.