Ding Yujia, experimental primary school, class 4, grade 5.
If I were a small tree, I would take root in Taiwan Province Province, the highest mountain in Taiwan Province Province, and watch the cars coming and going, the beautiful Sun Moon Lake and the first red flag rising in Taiwan Province Province. ...
If I were a small tree, I would take root on both sides of the Yellow River, and I would use my powerful claws-densely intertwined, firmly grasp the naughty' sediment' and prevent them from flowing into the surging Yellow River at will, endangering the people.
If I were a small tree, I would take root at the mouth of Qiantang River. I will listen to the thunderous tide with my own eyes, see it with my own eyes, and experience the grandeur and grandeur of the Qiantang River tidal water.
If I were a small tree, I would take root at the foot of the Great Wall and attract Mama Yun and Aunt Feng to say hello to tourists. The leaves are my hands. I want to touch the brick wall eroded by wind and rain on the Great Wall and feel the vicissitudes of history and the sweat and wisdom of the ancients.
If I were a small tree, I would take root in the vast desert. I will stop the terrible sandstorm and terrible heat, protect farmers' fertile fields from being buried into mountains by sand, and create a green country so that those lost travelers can have water to drink.
If I were a small tree, I would take root in the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. I want to see the Yarlung Zangbo River Grand Canyon, snowy areas and towering Mount Everest, and feel the refreshing snow-capped mountains.
If I were a small tree, I would take root in my hometown-Wuchang, adding a piece of spring to my hometown and making it more colorful.
If I were a small tree, I would travel and take root in many places. ...
The author's heart:
I really want to become a small tree and make contributions to mankind!
Parental comments:
The child's composition is full of scenery and emotion, and the beginning is quite innovative.
Teacher's comments:
The uniqueness of this article lies in expressing his correct outlook on life and values with reasonable imagination, and letting readers see that the little author is a caring person.