(Untitled)
The distant Han Dynasty pays tribute to the guests, and the moon is exquisite.
Excite and watch the rest, and talk about the world of mortals.
Taste the taste of life carefully and take a leisurely look at the essentials.
There is beautiful scenery in it, so there is no need to take advantage of it.
Rhythm
Because the title of the title is called Five Rhythm, naturally we will look at the oblique and oblique rhymes first.
In the beginning of the sentence "The distant Han Dynasty entertains the distinguished guests", the pingqi is "pingqipingpingping", which is the "Ziqiqifa" pattern with no restrictions on the first word. We list this format and check it accordingly.
廄廄平廄, 平平廄廄平.
Ping, Ping, Ping, Ping, Ping.
廄廄平廄, 平平廄廄平.
Ping, Ping, Ping, Ping, Ping.
It can be seen that the third sentence of "the excitement and the sight are all left" is "ping ping ping ping ze", but this is not a rhythm. This flat and cheed pattern is called "carp turning waves", in metrical poetry 中 is a large number of declensions.
Then the seventh sentence "There is a beautiful scenery in it" is changed to "廄平廄廄廄". Although the key positions are not changed, the whole poem has only one flat sound, which makes it not good to read. If you don’t want to change the third oblique tone for “there is a beautiful scenery”, it’s actually best not to use the oblique tone for the first word.
Note that the first sound of "kan" in "Yuankan Yaolujin" is flat.
The last characters of the 2468 lines in rhyme rhymes with the "Eleven True" part of Pingshui rhyme, and there is no rhyme.
Although the contrast between the chin couplet "Excitement and sightseeing is exhausted, talk about the world of mortals" and the neck couplet "Taste the taste of life carefully, and take a leisurely look at the road" are not neat, they are still reasonable, not to mention that the rhythmic poetry has now relaxed the chin couplet. The rules of combat. So there is no problem with the contrast in the whole poem.
In general, there is nothing wrong with the meter. But it could be better and recited more smoothly.
Content
This poem contains many allusions, which may be a bit difficult to read if you don’t understand them well.
The first couplet: "The distant Han Dynasty entertains the guests, and the moon is round." "The distant Han Dynasty" comes from Wen Zhengming's poem "Sitting at Night": "The distant Han Dynasty is three degrees away, and the empty court is full of sounds." Probably It is a distant river, which here refers to the "Galaxy". Late at night, there is no good wine to entertain friends, and the stars are as bright as an ice wheel. This is probably what it means, inviting friends to watch the stars and the bright moon together at night.
The chin couplet: "Excitement and sightseeing have done all the rest, and talk about the world of mortals." The chin couplet follows the first couplet, what do you do when you look at the stars? Let's write poetry. "Xingguan" should be taken from Confucius's "The Analects of Confucius: Yang Huo": "Poetry can be exciting, it can be observed, it can be grouped, and it can be complained." It means observation and association. We admired the moon together, imagined together, and composed poems using oblique and oblique rhymes, which were pure and sweet to the ears.