[Comment on Man Kong] Man Kong

Composition topic Read the following text and write as required. Zhou said: "we see the benefits, but we can't see the truth;" See everything, but not beauty; See the world, but not God. Our days are full, but our lives are empty; The mind is full, but the heart is empty. "

Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Full Empty".

Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.

Writing instruction

Structurally, the topic "Man Kong" is a coordinate phrase. In writing, both "fullness" and "emptiness" are involved, and neither side can be partial. From the content point of view, the proposer intends to guide candidates to pay attention to society, life, history and culture, and analyze and treat things and social life with dialectical and developmental eyes, which embodies a kind of humanistic care. We know that enrichment and emptiness can be both the enrichment and emptiness of real things and the "enrichment and emptiness" of abstract meaning and spiritual level. Obviously, the proposer's intention to write questions emphasizes the latter more. In order to facilitate candidates' writing, the questioner made an introduction. In today's society, what is "fullness"-interests, everything, the world, days and minds, and what is "emptiness"-truth, beauty, spirit, fate and minds. This introduction is intended to guide candidates to think about our social status quo: fame and fortune are everywhere, but what is lacking is truth, goodness and beauty and spiritual fullness!

When writing an argumentative essay, the argument should be clear and prominent, and the understanding of "fullness and emptiness" should be clearly expressed. A examinee draws lessons from Taiwan Province writer Zhang Lijun's "Holding the Empty Like a Surplus" and combines his own growth experience to divide his life into three stages: holding the empty, holding the empty and holding the empty like a full. He used various methods, such as reasoning, citing examples and comparing arguments. Although he uses the structure of a famous writer, his writing style has his own style! It can also be written as a narrative. A candidate expressed his views on fullness and emptiness in the first person and in the tone of A Bing, a blind man: Although "I" A Bing is poor in material and "empty", in the bitter wind and rain, there are also "two springs reflecting the moon" accompanying "me", but the spirit of "I" is rich and substantial. A candidate wrote about the process of being a "tumbler" with his father when he was a child. The "tumbler" was so full that it didn't work. Finally, he came to his own understanding: sometimes "fullness" is not necessarily a good thing. Only by leaving space and "blank" can he stand in the realm of "not falling down" ... In short, we should pay attention to the excavation of the theme of the article and pay attention to it.

Examination room masterpiece

Men and Kong Qiao Yimeng

There is an old corridor in the backyard.

The walls of the gallery are free and full. Carving dragons and painting phoenixes everywhere, prancing or lying still, with different expressions and colorful colors, is really beautiful. What about the empty space? The empty place is a small wooden window on the wall. Some people think that opening a few windows on this beautiful wall is too empty and abrupt, which damages the beauty of this whole picture. Empty, there is always no "full" to achieve; Windows are never as delicate as pictures.

Actually?

On a moonless night, a touch of moonlight shines obliquely into the empty window-it's nothing, it's empty-but when the beautiful image of Chimonanthus praecox outside the window gently and skillfully outlines a plum shadow picture on the window, you have to admire the ingenuity of the craftsman.

Branches and vines are twisted and twisted, and plum blossoms adorn them. Meiying is mottled, windy and moving, and lovely. At this time, if you can hold a pot of tea, invite three or two friends, stroll in this changing and flowing plum shadow, talk about some private things, or sing a song as you like, what a pleasant thing!

Pieces of plums with skylights, windows and windows connected together, even if one side is gorgeous and full, I am afraid it will never be as empty as the craftsman's ingenuity!

So is the human heart. When we walk in the corridor of life with a "full" heart during the day, we can often only see a picture of dragons and phoenixes, which is colorful and full, but when we admire it, we always feel empty. Only on the night of the full moon, walking in the corridor with a quiet "empty" heart and throwing away the messy mood, can we enjoy the proudly beautiful "thin plum screen moon shadow" in the empty window!

At this time, the craftsman's real intention is also clear. If you really have a clear heart, you won't miss the plum tree outside the window. The beautiful, refined, smart and elegant beauty will also fill your heart and make you feel safe and comfortable!

I also remember watching an artist do ink painting a few years ago. There was only a little ink left on the big canvas, but there were many blanks. Seeing that I was puzzled, he smiled and said, "This painting pays attention to blank space, so that people who really have a heart can understand the mystery of blank space. If it is full, no one can read the painting. "

Yes, this painting, you should leave some blank, so that this complete painting will be experienced and understood.

You can't paint all this wall. You have to open an empty window through which you can see every night when the moon is full.

This heart cannot be full, but it must be "empty". At this time, the "thin plum screen moon shadow" in the corridor of life will not be missed by you.

comment

At the beginning of this paper, with a refined prose style, it shows us a beautiful picture: an ancient promenade, free and full, patchwork and beautiful. Young authors are good at observation and diligent in thinking, not just depicting pictures, but based on this, diverging thinking, contacting with life, and depicting life with ancient corridors and paintings, thus subliming the theme and having far-reaching ideas.

Full and empty Zhang Jing

My friend has a small blue-and-white porcelain dish with patterns, orchids and butterflies, and smooth lines. It was a good product during the Xuande period of the Ming Dynasty, and I got it by chance when I was visiting an antique shop one day. This is a happy thing, but I didn't see him smile, but I was a little disappointed. After asking, I realized that this dish is the same as a tea lamp. Now there is another dish without a lamp. Isn't it disappointing?

After listening, I smiled indifferently. It is good for everything in the world to pursue perfection, but if you stubbornly leave no regrets, it is better to return empty-handed, carefree and comfortable.

I can't help thinking of going up the mountain to worship Buddha with my mother when I was a child. There are cigarettes in front of the Buddhist temple, and your highness's prayers are all mumbling, praying for Buddha's blessing. What's more, he knelt down for half a censer and prayed for blessing. It's mom's turn to clean her hands, burn incense, cross her hands and kneel down. Every step is concise and pious. When I went down the mountain, I asked my mother, "What do you want?" Mother smiled stupidly: "I don't want anything, just buckle my peace of mind."

When I was young, I didn't understand my mother. Since I don't want anything, why should I climb three thousand stone steps to worship Buddha? Now I understand my mother's "unrequited" heart.

Busy markets and bustling crowds are all for the benefit of the future. Housing, cars and tickets have become everyone's ultimate goals. Look at our life, we are so full of desire that we don't even have room to catch our breath.

Read a book! The bookstore is full of bestsellers: Shortcut to Success, Secret to Becoming a Billionaire ... I'm looking for Bitter Tea by Zhou Zuoren and Elegant Room by Liang Shiqiu, so I have to pull myself out of the crowd. There was a long line in front of the checkout counter, holding a secret book in my hand, and I seemed to hear a long sigh.

Drink tea! I looked everywhere in the streets of this city, but I couldn't find it. Unwilling to go deep into seclusion, I really found it. I stepped in happily, and there was no one inside, and the rattan chair was covered with a fine layer of dust. The owner of the tea house heard the sound and came out of the cupboard. "We are going to close our doors." He waved his hand and saw my doubts, so he had to explain it again: "Without guests, it is really impossible to maintain." "Where are people?" He pointed to the guests coming in and out at the entrance of the luxury hotel across the street.

An overly fulfilling life makes reading and drinking tea a luxury. We think that richness, when prosperity is exhausted, leaves loneliness and sadness. Give yourself a little leisure, a chance to breathe, and ask for nothing else, and your heart will be truly enriched.

My friend told me that the food was given away. I asked, would you like to?

He smiled and felt empty, but overall he was happy.

comment

It is better to be free and empty than to pursue material enrichment stubbornly, which is the argument of this paper. However, the little author was ingenious and did not express his views directly. Instead, I got a small blue and white porcelain dish through a friend, but I still want to pursue perfection. "It's disappointing to have a disc without a lamp", which is related to the life of worshipping Buddha with my mother when I was young, and my own thinking about the present: an over-fulfilling life makes reading and drinking tea a luxury. It is pointed out once again that the materialistic society is full of "enrichment" and spiritual emptiness. Finally, I will go back to the matter of a friend sending a plate, take care of the beginning and confirm my point of view.