At the beginning of each chapter, there are four sentences, such as "I am in Dongshan". Although this is the practice of music overlapping chapters, as far as the meaning of this chapter is concerned, this writing is not a simple repetition, but a layer-by-layer promotion. One chapter is about going home, the second chapter is about going home, the third chapter is about going home, and the fourth chapter is about going home. The first four overlapping sentences are the general outline. The first four sentences, from "Longdong Mountain" to "East", are from "no return" to "coming", and from the past to the present. It takes a long time to say "no return", but returning home is a climate feature. This is an impressive and unforgettable moment. Long-term depression, joy and ease now need not be said. In one chapter, like Focus Plane, Mao Mao turned to memories of the past as soon as his clothes returned to people. The first thing I remember is going back to the feeling at that time: I decided to go back, but I felt sorry for the west. You won't appreciate this without personal experience. Because people can't think of hopeless things; And when I want to see it, my mood will fluctuate immediately. So, he made a wish from the bottom of his heart: from now on, never wear military uniforms again! Then he brought his thoughts back to reality. The real life is that everyone still sleeps under the chariot like wild silkworms gathered under mulberry leaves! The second chapter repeats the first four sentences, and then shows the present scene, turning back to the desolate scene I saw on my way home: although the jackals are still spreading on other people's houses, there is no one left! Look: water turtles crawl on the edge of the room, cobwebs are at the door, the footprints of wild animals are left on the edge of the field, and the fire burns at night. Pictures, arranged into a desolate! But the recruiter feels that there is nothing to be afraid of, but it is worth thinking about. Think about what? Didn't say. But there was a desolate and broken scene in front of me. "Which one is it? Which one is it?" Isn't this the main content of thinking! The first four sentences in the three chapters are more closely related to the last eight sentences. One is a drizzle returning to people, and the other is a "stork singing" and a "woman sighing". The woman not only sighed, but also took action and was busy welcoming her relatives. She had just finished cleaning and repairing the house when the recruiter came in. It's really like bitter gourd hanging on a woodpile. They have suffered a lot! In the case of sadness and joy, there are thousands of words, and there is no way to talk about it. The only greeting is: "No see for three years!" Words are so light, but feelings are infinitely deep. The fourth chapter is after the recruiter gets home. Maybe for a while. Peace brings happiness to people. The marriage of young people is a sign. Orioles shine with beautiful feathers, more than Qi Fei; Young women get married, very lively, grand ceremony, a joy! The first chapter and the second chapter are in sharp contrast. Is this joy limited to young people? Finally, he said in a rhetorical tone: marriage is beautiful, but isn't it more gratifying for the old couple to meet after a long separation? There is no praise for peace, no praise for those who pay the price for peace, but the most practical and sincere praise.
The main feature of this lyric poem writing is to reflect the thoughts and feelings in a specific environmental experience through what you see, hear and feel. The starting point of the poem is the moment when I came home in the drizzle in the third chapter. Because it was the end of the three-year war. Four sentences, such as "I am on the East Mountain", summed up the whole process of the expedition, and the sentence "I am moving" was the turning point. From then on, there will be stages of no return, return, on the way and home; Since then, a new life has emerged. The specific writing time of the poem is, of course, after the scene written in four chapters, but the writing point is set in three chapters, because this is an expression summarized from all memories. It is particularly worth mentioning that this poem not only vividly describes the things touched by the senses, but more importantly describes the conscious activities of the characters. Conscious activities are the foundation of mental outlook and the soul of artistic works. An author can faithfully write what he sees, hears, feels and thinks through pictographic thinking, and it will become a masterpiece. We can get inspiration from the author three thousand years ago.