Lan Shu
Thirty years ago.
You look at me from the top of the willow tree
I am young.
Niyuan
People are also round.
Thirty years later.
I look at you from the top of the coconut tree.
You are a glass of country wine.
You are a man.
Homesickness is also full.
Appreciation This is a colorful, light and strong modern poem. Say it's faint, faint poetic, faint wine fragrance, faint moonlight; It is said to be strong, strong in poetry, strong in acacia, and strong in homesickness. This cup of "country wine" is really sweet and bitter when tasted carefully, and it wakes up when drunk.
The layout of poetry ranks is the development and innovation of Song poetry, which is symmetrical, even, simple and pure. I naturally thought of "Health Mistakes": "Last year's Lantern Festival, the flower market was lit like a day, and the willow shoots were on the moon, and people made an appointment after dusk. On the first night of this year, the moonlight was still there. I didn't see people last year, and Man Chun's shirt sleeves were in tears. " "National wine" is the national sentiment of contemporary people, which draws the essence from the excellent heritage of national culture and is brewed with traditional aesthetic forms. This leap in time, the leap in space distance, and the change in the position of "you" and "I" can change the scene and mood, although the words are different. Their feelings changed from sweet to bitter, their thoughts woke up from drunkenness, and the land left their hometown, resulting in deep acacia and infinite homesickness.