Sixteen-character order? Rain (self-drafted) (12 lines from Jishui Poems)

It rained suddenly on the way to work today. After a while, everyone holding umbrellas got wet. There is a lot of water on the road, and pedestrians are rushing to a warm and safe place...

Sixteen-Character Order·Rain

Turbulent, angry rain, wind and slanting coldness. The umbrella floats and sinks, and the accumulated water covers the shirt.

The solitary mountain has no reflection, and the accumulated water combines with the sky. ——From Tang Dynasty Xu Tang's "Sending Jinwu to Attend the Emperor and Envoy Ridong" (822 AD - died unknown, from Jingxian County, Anhui Province, solitary and unconventional)

To the west of the North Tower, there is a clear sky and water accumulation. The mountains are beautiful in the painting. ——From "The North Tower of Jincheng" by Gao Shi of the Tang Dynasty (Ask where the plum blossoms fell, the wind blew all over the mountain all night. "Listen to the flute playing on the fortress")

The accumulated water is not clear, and the pearl is not easy to find. ——From Tang Dynasty Wang Sunzhi's "Ode to Obtain Turbid Water and Seek Pearls" (Jinshi in 798 AD, one of the complete poems of the Tang Dynasty is included, his place of birth and life are unknown)

The vitality floats in the accumulated water, but sinks and sinks but does not flow. ——From Liu Changqing of the Tang Dynasty, "Fan Qu Ahou Lake, Jian Travels with the Dukes"

There is still water in the dry bei, and the dry marsh is more open. ——From "Late Autumn Happy Rain" by Li Qiao of the Tang Dynasty

("Wind": Three autumn leaves fall, and February flowers can bloom. Thousands of feet of waves across the river, thousands of bamboo poles leaning into it. Hebei people, 644 —713 years)

The road to Jiahe was filled with stagnant water and cold smoke. ——From Cui Dong of the Tang Dynasty, "Suzhou on the Twenty-Two Sends to the Qiu"

Looking out over the accumulated water, you can see the stars. ——From "Shui Hui Ferry" by Du Fu of the Tang Dynasty

The sun is spitting out over the chaotic mountains, and the accumulated water creates smoke far away. ——From "Early Journey to Yanfu Temple in Linshui" by Lu You of the Southern Song Dynasty

There is always stagnant water in the bei, and the river is as wide as the setting sun. ——From "Miscellaneous Poems of Living in the Mountains" by Yuan Haowen of the Yuan Dynasty

The accumulated water condenses into deep blue, and the setting sun spreads red. ——From "Nan Ge Zi" by Ni Xian of the Song Dynasty

The water accumulates close to the Tianque, sometimes causing ups and downs. ——From "Ehu Mountain" by Ye Mengde of the Song Dynasty

The stagnant water culverts are clear above and below, and several doors are quiet and the shore is flat. ——From "Inscribed on Xixi Wuxiangyuan" by Zhang Xian of the Song Dynasty

Cangwu Ballad·Tian

Song Dynasty: Cai Shen

Tian. Don't let the round toad shine on the guests while they sleep. Wherever the person is, Guiying comes from Chanjuan.

Cang Wu Ballad/Gui Zi Ballad Part 2

Song Dynasty: Zhang Xiaoxiang

Gui. Hunting and smoked wind and embroidered flags. Stop the teacher and lift the farewell cup again.

Formal pattern

Rhythmic comparison example: Yuan Laihua's "Sixteen Character Order·Gui"

Ping, middle level, level, level, level. Flat, flat, middle flat.

Returning, my eyes are broken by the small green of my house. Outside the setting sun, white birds fly near the mountains.

Changes of pattern

Rhythmic comparison examples: Cao Zhenji's "Cangwu Ballad·Tuanfan Jiu"

Pingzhongqi, Pingpingzeqiping. Flat, flat, middle flat.

The round fan is old, but still worthy of being given as a gift. When the autumn wind blows, it is difficult to fall in love with old friends.