The comments are as follows:
1. Briefly explain the time, place and results...
2. The language is concise and standardized, and the opening is attractive.
3. ...begins with ..., which is more innovative and explains the causes and consequences.
4. The opening chapter is concise, concise and orderly; the key description... leaves a deep impression on people.
5. The beginning is quite innovative with a scene as a metaphor for emotion; the beginning is a flashback to exaggerate the artistic conception.
6. Going straight to the topic at the beginning is also a way of writing.
7. The beginning is very lively, and the use of personification makes the beginning appear lively.
8. Begin with a rhetorical question to attract readers.
9. Go straight to the topic at the beginning, making it clear at a glance.
10. The wording at the beginning is very attractive.
11. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article.
12. Briefly describe the wonderful places; combine the details.
13. Briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph.
14. Situation description arouses suspense.
15. Make full use of language, action, and psychological description to make things concrete and vivid.
16. Briefly describe the antecedents and pave the way.
17. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part.
18. It is more appropriate to change… to….
19. It is a natural connection between the past and the following, and the detailed description highlights the character's quality, which is touching.
20. Scenes are included in the narrative to save people and compare their feelings with others.
21. Personified language makes the article more lively.
22. The description of the appearance is very interesting, highlighting the cuteness of..., and the introduction incorporates my own thoughts, which is contagious.
23. The method of listing numbers and giving examples is very vivid.