The quoted scenery is well described and close to reality, that is, the order of the scenery arrangement has not formed a picture scroll, and some scenery has a sense of repetition. For example, after the swallow flies, the birds follow, so it is best to write a poem about the scenery at a time. Are you writing about the scenery when the snow and ice melt in early spring or the scenery in March? A short poem, warm words used four times, shows that your vocabulary is still not too much. However, compared with the students in Grade Two, it is still quite good. Still hope to continue to refuel.
spring scenery
Thunder calls everything, and misty rain enters the breeze.
The water by the river is blue, and the ducks are very happy.
Xiaoyan was busy looking for mud, and it was too late to return to the flood.
Orioles sing new flowers and butterflies dance to welcome spring.
Tourists are happy to go hiking. Their shirts are pink.
Spring is nowhere to be found, which is why it comes here.
This poem is a personal revision, not necessarily the best, I hope it can help you.