Appreciation of the Poetry Translation of Ye Nocturne (Shen Yue)

Shen Yue Nightsong Series: 300 ancient poems. Night songs are vertical and horizontal, and Beidou is horizontal and straight. Xing Hankong is so empty, why have no memories? The lonely lamp is not clear, and the cold machine is still woven. The crow sighed, "Who did Zero Tears say to?" The milky way flows vertically and horizontally, and the stars move vertically and horizontally; Both the Milky Way and the Big Dipper circulate in ignorance and ruthlessness. How can I know that I am missing someone in my heart? In the empty room, the angel's lonely lamp is half bright, no matter how cold it is, I still set foot on the loom to weave. Tears come down, but who can you tell? I can only listen to the cock crow and let out a sigh. Night Watch Song is a kind of Yuefu miscellaneous song founded by Shen Yue. "Yuefu Solving Problems" says: "Night music hurts loneliness." Shen Zuo has two songs, both of which are about the same theme. This is the first song, written in great detail, about a person's desolate situation in an empty room. This poem has eight sentences, divided into two paragraphs, each with four sentences. The first two sentences of each paragraph are dual, and the last two sentences simply express the melancholy and self-pity of thinking women. From the first stage to the second stage, Sifu's feelings developed and changed, and finally, a * * * was formed. The first two sentences of this poem imply the passage of time through the change of the orientation of the Milky Way and Beidou. "The river is vertical and horizontal, and the Beidou is horizontal." Write about thinking about women staying up late to watch the sky. In these two poems, the poet alternately uses three verbs: vertical, horizontal and straight, which makes people seem to see the milky way flowing vertically and horizontally and the stars moving horizontally. Although there is no direct description of people in the poem, the expressions of the characters can be imagined. In ancient poetry, there are many examples of reflecting women's feelings with the change of the position of stars. For example, "Nineteen Ancient Poems" says: "The moon is bright and clean, which promotes the weaving of the East Wall. Yuheng refers to Meng Dong, and the stars are vivid! Another cloud says, "All the way, Altair, River, Chinese women, delicate hands, firm ties, looms. Predecessors are all based on Xiaoya Dadong in the Book of Songs. For example, Shan Li commented on "Hehan Women" in the Selected Works: "There is a Han, and there is light in the prison. Three of the three, Vega, seven times a day. Even if the weaver girl is busy, she can't knit a stripe well. Ranunculus said, Han, Tianhe is also. Shen Yue's poem should be closely inherited from Nineteen Ancient Poems, rather than the major theme in The Book of Songs. Of course, the specific description is also different. The first two sentences say that the Milky Way goes from vertical to horizontal, and the Beidou goes from horizontal to straight, and the time delay is expressed by writing scenes. In a popular saying, it is a long time. In this long night, I miss my wife, and I must think something in my heart, so the poet said in her tone, "Xing Hankong is so, why don't you remember?" "Xing Han is an ignorant and heartless object, so why blame him? This kind of writing is what the ancients often said, "unreasonable and wonderful." "It seems to say: Galaxy, you are empty and self-flowing; Oh, big dipper, you are leaning in vain. How do you know that I miss someone in my heart? Next, write two sentences about Sifu's melancholy mood caused by the movement of Xinghan and the passage of time. The sentence of "Xing Han" summed up the above and made a step backwards, writing the word "empty", as if the first two sentences were pushed down at once, which made people feel incredible. The sentence "Ning Zhi" poured out a stream of resentment in Sifu's chest, and wrote the word "Ning", which closely echoed the word "empty" in front and led the feelings of the characters to the depths of their hearts. Both sentences are blurted out, and the sound is perfect. It does have the effect of hearing voices and seeing people. If in the first half, the sky scenery sets off the loneliness of the thinking woman, then in the second half, the indoor scenery sets off the lonely and boring mentality of the characters. The poet's brush strokes changed from the night sky to the boudoir. In the empty room, there is a solitary lamp, which is half-lit. The dim light symbolizes the yearning for women. Lonely and unbearable, regardless of the cold, she set foot on the loom and knitted cloth. Here, the poet did not copy the Book of Songs and ancient poems, but only wrote about the weaver girl in the sky. Instead, he moved the sky to the world and wrote about the thoughts of women and the care for the cold machine. So people feel more real after reading it. As far as duality is concerned, this couplet is more accurate than the last one. Because the pre-couplet juxtaposes two things with similar nature, its disadvantages are like "crossing hands" when later generations evaluate modern poetry. However, this couplet is not important, it is promoted layer by layer. The previous sentence said that the lights were unclear, and it was midnight; The last sentence says that while you were still weaving, it was dawn. From late at night to dawn, the thinking woman has changed from guarding the lonely lamp alone to caring for the cold machine, with distinct levels and clear movements, which just shows her loneliness. The last two sentences inherit the above. When I think of a woman who stayed up all night, I think of people who are ethereal, staring at the lonely lamp, and my hands are cold. My heart is particularly uncomfortable and I can't help crying. Despite the rain of tears, no one sympathized with her, and she could not tell people the anguish of being single and lonely. She just lamented herself and sighed in vain. The word "crow" at the end of the sentence follows the word "Xiao" in the previous sentence, and the word "disciple" reflects the word "empty" in the previous paragraph from a distance. At this moment, the heroine's loneliness reached its peak. Whether it is the stars in the sky or her own memories and sighs, everything is illusory and futile. She just silently shed tears and chewed her sadness alone. She couldn't help sighing when she heard the cock crow.