Attach importance to students' initiative, enthusiasm and creativity. If there is no "person" in education, it is destructive education.
The primary school stage does not necessarily follow the pattern of writing a whole composition. Appropriate to students to increase a certain amount of practice.
Formally, it is not necessarily limited to narrative, but also allows students to try to write poems and fill in Song Ci. With the diversification of forms, students' interest in writing is growing.
Therefore, a composition teaching class is designed. The process seems simple, but the wonderful and simple atmosphere of the students has formed a beautiful scenery in this class. The second sentence: My mother never tires of saying "study hard" to us every morning. Besides going to work, she has to do housework.
Mom is so tired, I love my mom! Health 1: Parallelism is smoother and smoother. Health 2: Reading parallelism, I seem to be able to express my love for my mother better.
And it is more emotional to use parallelism. Learn to write parallelism sentences by imitating sentence patterns 1. Teacher: Can you imitate the following sentences and say more sentences? Hope is the grass sticking out in spring; Hope is a swallow returning in spring; Hope is ... health 1: hope is the grass that has just come out in spring.
Health 2: Hope is a kite flying in the blue sky. Health 3: Hope is a butterfly that comes out of its cocoon.
Health 4: Hope is singing and running to a distant stream. 2. Teacher: The students speak very well! Then write this comparative sentence neatly in the composition book and read it to your deskmate! Third, expand the use.
1, show the parallelism sentences in many texts, and let the students find out the general characteristics of parallelism sentences. Student summary: (1) Several sentences are the same; (2) There must be three or more sentences with the same sentence pattern.
It's friendship ... Health: Every sentence in this parallelism is a rhetorical question. Health: metaphor, personification, questioning, etc.
After thinking and discussion, the students answered: Third, create a situation. 1, Teacher: There is such a true story that happened in a tourist area. A family of three happily sat on the cable car, enjoying the scenery of the surrounding mountains.
Suddenly the rope of the cable car broke and three people fell into the pool at once. Just then, the father raised his daughter above his head with both hands and tried to lift it out of the water. My daughter didn't drown, but her favorite parents left her forever ... (Playing "Dawn" by "Flash" Han Hong) Students enjoy 2. Teacher (affectionately): Afterwards, the little girl always falls into deep pain, which includes missing, guilt and sadness.
If, at this moment, you are by the little girl's side, how will you comfort her? Please use parallelism. 3. Students think and write.
Health 1: Did Dad leave you? No. You are the continuation of his life; Did mom leave you? number
She watches you live well in heaven; Did the teacher leave you? No. He (she) wants you to cheer up and study hard; Did your classmates leave you? number
They are all looking forward to your coming home. Health 2: Don't be sad anymore! Yesterday has passed, today is a new day; Don't be sad! The nightmare has disappeared and the world is still beautiful; Don't be sad! My parents didn't leave, just went on a long trip.
2. How do primary school students write comments with parallelism at the beginning of their compositions? 1. Comments should pay attention to emotions. The composition of primary school students truly reflects their thoughts and practices, and is a natural expression of their innocence.
Infecting students with teachers' true feelings can arouse students' voices and improve their ideological understanding. For example, a student in our class has poor academic performance and is usually very withdrawn.
After reading his article "Speak from the Heart", he confided that he often caused troubles and fights because he felt bitter and bored after his parents divorced. This article is very true. I almost cried after reading it. When writing a review, it is like this. Although the article is short, every word is golden, because every sentence reveals that you are a student with great personality. Every day you don't think and make progress. Your bitterness and annoyance are your motivation. As long as you don't play fighting, I believe you will succeed. If you have teachers and classmates around you, will you still suffer and be bored? Secondly, comments should be encouraging. As adults, we all hope that others will appreciate us warmly and sincerely, not to mention being children of students. In the process of writing, whether students write well or not, the length is the result of their labor.
Therefore, teachers should look at students' writing content, feelings expressed, languages and methods used, and their outstanding achievements or personalities. The evaluation of students' compositions should focus on praise, so that students can gain new knowledge and successful experience in the process of composition evaluation.
Third, comments should focus on enlightening writing. Composition evaluation pays attention to encouragement and does not exclude criticism, because comments also play a role in pointing out the maze. However, we should pay attention to euphemism and goodwill, and we should not directly accuse, let alone be cynical. For example, when a classmate was writing the composition "My Teacher", there was a passage: Her black and shiny eyes seemed to be able to talk, inspiring us every day, sometimes making you blush and sometimes making you happy.
Such an article can't simply write down unspecified comments. This is what I wrote. What did the teacher's eyes say? Can you write it specifically according to your usual observation? After reading it, the students will add it immediately. Fourth, there should be discussion-oriented comments. Pupils are just beginners and beginners. Most of their compositions are semi-finished, so naturally there are many shortcomings and problems. This is very normal for them to lie and lie.
We can't use literary standards to demand students. If students use discussion-based comments, they are more likely to accept the shortcomings in their compositions.
For example, when a student was writing the composition "Spring is bursting", he wrote a sentence at the beginning: Spring is the season when everything is fluffy, and nature is full of vitality. In this sentence, the word fluffy is not used properly. I first wrote him fluffy meaning: describing grass, leaves, hair, fluff and so on.
Then I wrote a comment. Do you think,' Mao Mao' is appropriate here? What is a more appropriate word? When the student saw the comments, he found me with a composition book and told me that he knew that the word Mao Mao was not used properly and should be changed to recovery. I affirmed that discussion-based evaluation can achieve a harmonious and democratic atmosphere, encourage students to study actively, improve their enthusiasm for revising their compositions and improve their ability to revise their own compositions.
3. Comparative sentences of inspiration; Comparative sentences in writing inspiration.
1, there is no splendor like sunset, no elegance like clouds, but there can be crystal purity and transparency. Not as lofty as a mountain, not as gentle as a lake, but as firm and steady as a rock. There is no vastness like the sea, no waterfall, but it can be as simple and easy-going as mud.
2, the stream is brave, it is not afraid of the obstacles of mountains and mountains, not afraid of the rugged road under its feet, go forward bravely. The tree is strong, it is not afraid of storms, cold and heat, and it stands tall. Lighthouse is fearless, it is not afraid of endless darkness, not afraid of loneliness all year round, and it shines forever.
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You can't change your appearance, but you can smile. You can't control the weather, but you can change your mood. You can't predict tomorrow, but you can grasp today. You can't do everything smoothly, but you can try your best.
The heart is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; The mind is a calm lake, occasionally rippling; The mind is a snowy area, reflecting a colorful world.
2. Pain-pain gropes in the dark, and the road ahead is bumpy; Pain is a kind of sadness that no one understands, and it is helpless in the face of all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, and it cannot be confessed without tears; Pain is a natural expression and a devil in trouble. 3. stupidity-stupidity is a natural helplessness, an acquired laziness, a bad result planted by oneself, and a moth in good fruit.
4. Lies-Lies are moths of the mind, eating people's hearts beyond recognition; Lies are a deep quagmire in which people can't extricate themselves; Lies are an endless black hole, which makes people fall into the abyss of sin. 5. insidious-insidious, is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing activities that can't see the sun; Sin is a good enemy and a jealous friend; Insanity is the iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel chill through clarity.
6. Selfishness-Selfishness is a mirror, in which you can only see yourself forever; Selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and can't see the pain of others; Selfishness is a layer of glass, which looks transparent, but always separates each other. 7. Love-love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.
8. Beauty-still life is the beauty of solidification, and moving scenery is the beauty of flow; Straight line is smooth beauty, curve is euphemistic beauty; A noisy city is a prosperous beauty, and a quiet country is an elegant beauty. There is beauty everywhere in life, as long as you have a pair of eyes to find beauty and a heart to feel beauty.
9. accumulation-the old saying goes: "if you don't accumulate, you will be thousands of miles away; If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become rivers and seas. " Those who have made meritorious deeds are well-known in the world, starting from a small place, paying attention to the accumulation of dribs and drabs, consciously cultivating their moral talents and constantly improving themselves.
If there is no persistent perseverance to smell chickens and dance every day, how could Zu Ti be famous for his northern expedition to the Central Plains? If Wang Can Xizhi didn't spend many years drawing water with dragon and snake ink, how could he be honored as a book saint? How did Chen Can Jingrun win the pearl and become famous in the world without studying calculus hard for half his life? 10. mistakes-Galileo, Newton and Edison are all human beings, and their shortcomings and mistakes are inevitable, but this does not prevent them from becoming "giants." Who can deny that the laws of falling objects, inertia, motion of throwing objects and pendulum vibration in physics were established or discovered by Galileo? Who can deny Newton's position as the founder of classical physics? Who can deny that Edison was a great inventor who made great contributions to human material civilization? 1 1. Firmness-If you have all kinds of "fish" hearts and have no intention of "netting", you will definitely accomplish nothing.
Although this truth is simple, it is not clear to everyone. Some people want to be Edison's "king of invention", but they are afraid of the difficulty of delving into scientific knowledge; Some people want to win the title of "king of short stories" after Mo Bosang, but they are afraid of the hardships of practicing calligraphy all the year round; Some people want to become a "master of music" by making a blockbuster, but they are too lazy to bury themselves in the field of staff; Some people want to be sports stars themselves, but they are too lazy to "smell the chicken and dance" for training.
So ambitious, and it is a sparrow trip, even a small fish can't be caught, let alone realize that grand ambition! 12. Choose-choose is a brand-new beginning. Choosing a steep cliff towering into the sky requires the belief that "the road is long and Xiu Yuan is awkward, and I will seek it up and down"; Choosing a choppy sea requires the lofty ambition of "straightening clouds and sails to help the sea"; Choosing a desert with a cold wind requires a broad mind of "get drunk in the sand, don't laugh, and go out several times in ancient times"-13. Life-what is life? Different people have different opinions. Some people say life is like wine.
Childhood is like a cocktail, colorful and sweet. Youth is like chilled beer, deep in color, cold and bitter; Middle age is like spirits, pure and colorless, and the spicy taste makes your insides burn; Old age, like wine, has been stored in Micari for a long time. Didi makes you feel the sweetness in the fragrance. (What is Life) 14. Sunflowers-from early summer to late autumn, flowers bloom forever.
A brocade has always maintained a bright color-the morning glory has withered in the hot summer sun, the canna is tired and weak, and the rich peony has long lost its look. Only sunflowers have no reservations about the scorching sun. The hotter the sun, the more gorgeous, enthusiastic and vigorous it is.
(Sunflowers Full of Life) 15. Honesty-Honesty is the smile on the children's faces when they hand over the penny they found to the police uncle, and the flash in the young pioneers' eyes when they take the oath. Honesty is the spring breeze that Jiao sent away from the villagers in Chai Men village, and the deep affection of covering his frostbitten feet with his arms.
Honesty is the call of "China people stand up from now on" issued by the founding leaders in the face of the first light of new China. Honesty is the decision made by the leaders who look down on the West that "China should achieve great rejuvenation".
16. Choice-choosing fraternity means choosing to cherish emotions. To choose fraternity is to choose persistence in everything.
To choose fraternity is to choose lofty life aspirations. 17. Hope-don't give up hope, hope makes people face up to difficulties and failures.
Difficulties and failures are not terrible. The terrible thing is that a person loses the hope and courage to fight against them. Qu Yuan is patriotic, "seeking up and down"; Once the state of Chu perished, it lost hope, leaving only the desperate road of jumping into the Miluo River.
Don't give up hope, hope to make people look forward to a bright future. With hope, there will be yearning for the future and the pursuit of a better life.
Heine, a German poet, wrote emotionally in a poem: "Everything plundered in winter will be returned to you in the new year." Don't give up hope, hope will increase people's motivation.
How many people with lofty ideals are there at all times and in all countries.
5. Growth at the beginning of two compositions about "friendship" and "growth"
Fifteen years have passed, I have laughed, cried and hurt, but I have always moved forward with a firm heart. Every footprint I grew up was soaked with persistent sweat. They followed behind me, reflecting dazzling light and witnessing my every transformation. Persistence has turned me from a young and ignorant kid into a wise and studious teenager; Persistence has turned me from a naughty "bad boy" into a three-good student with excellent grades; Persistence has changed me from a loser who has fallen countless times to a lucky one who has won success. Yes, I insist on growing up. Without it, there would be no me now.
Since primary school, I have been a "sports". People are "developed limbs and simple minds", but I am just the opposite. My academic performance is among the best, but sports often lights up red. I don't know whether it's congenital poor constitution or acquired too little exercise. I can't even do a standard push-up. Therefore, I am often regarded by teachers as a "negative textbook" to educate my classmates. But that time, I didn't flinch as usual, but chose to stick to it.
That day in physical education class, just after fifteen laps, the teacher asked us to stretch out five fingers and do twenty push-ups with our hands. Standing in the line, I was flushed and sweaty, and I couldn't even breathe. My throat is dry, as if there is a fire burning. Looking at the stiff students lying on the ground, I hesitated to ask for leave to have a rest, but there seemed to be a voice shouting in my body: "No! You can't be so cowardly. Can twenty push-ups kill you? " However, I ... I don't care that much. I will bite the bullet and do it. I put my hands on the ground, gritted my teeth, leaned down and tried my best. One, two ... twelve ... Oh, no, I'm sweating all over, and I feel weak and prostrate, as if I can't breathe. Finally, my hands went soft and I collapsed. The students around us burst into laughter. I can't care about this. Now that you have decided to do it yourself, you must stick to it. I took a deep breath, patted the sand on my hand and did it again. "One, two ... nineteen, twenty!" "I kept encouraging myself, while counting in my mind," hold on! Hold on! Persistence is victory! "At that moment, I felt that I had exhausted all my strength and finally completed twenty." Haha, Shen Yan finally succeeded! "
6. Composition materials useful for writing articles. Belief supports life. It is inconceivable that people can live without faith. Faith is the air to breathe, the water for travelers in the desert, and the sun in our hearts. People with firm beliefs work hard for it, have no regrets, and are even willing to shed their last drop of blood. No force in the world can break up groups bound by faith. * * * The same belief is forged. * * * The long chain of common beliefs can climb steep mountains and steep peaks. Of course, faith can also be divided into right and wrong, great and small. The younger generation should take the development and progress of all mankind and the prosperity of the motherland as their beliefs, study hard, master scientific and cultural knowledge, and make their beliefs come true. There is a famous saying that people must have firm beliefs when they are alive, not just for their own food, clothing, housing and transportation. We must also make contributions to society. (Zhang Zhixin) The enemy can only cut off our heads and never shake our faith, because the doctrine we believe in is the truth of the universe. (Fang Zhimin) Faith is essential to support a person. Even the length of life often depends on faith. (Zhao Xinshan) The camp based on interests always wavers. However, what is mainly faith is inseparable. (Balzac) Your faith should be your armor, which will drive you forward without being killed. Only faith can make happiness come true. (Montaigne) Faith is the bright light of spiritual pursuit, illuminating the road. Although the dangerous environment sneaks in the shadows, I am afraid to go to the "magic forest" (Helen, I sang a song. (Tagore) Faith is a private capital kept in my own home. (Goethe) The worst enemy is that I have no firm belief. (romain rolland) As long as people have faith and pursuit, they can endure any hardships and adapt to any environment. (Ding Ling) I stick to my beliefs and walk silently and stubbornly the way I think I should go. I don't care about fame. Honor and disgrace are irrelevant. (Li Zehou) It would be sad if my faith wavered with my heartbeat. (Schiller) Faith is precious only because it is realistic, not because it is ours. (belinsky) The typical case "Pear Flower Without Owner, My Heart Has Owner" is contained in the History of Yuan Dynasty. During the Song and Yuan Dynasties, the times were in chaos. Xu Heng, a scholar, was in chaos.
7. Good sentences in Grade One plus the requirement of imitation are useful for writing. I compare autumn to a fairy dressed in gold. Her light sleeves took away the heat of the sun and shed light and freshness on the earth. She blocked the cold with wide clothes, but lifted heavy fruits and gave them to the world. You all love autumn. Her sky is crisp, her clouds are bright and sunny, and her fragrance is everywhere. Autumn makes farmers smile brilliantly.
Imitation: I compare spring to a little girl with a color palette. Her colorful oil paintings have erased the pallor of winter and brought green and hope to the world. She used the brush in her hand to bring a breeze and golden sunshine to shine on the earth. You all love spring, her flowers, her grass, her rain and everything. Spring makes people feel particularly happy.
Flowers invited me to be a guest and bees invited me to sing.
Imitate:
Birds lead me, butterflies lead me to dance;
The grass nodded to me and the poplar spoke to me;
Crayons draw with me, erasers wipe with me.
The frontier fortress poem is a song of Leng Yue in the desert battlefield. Magnificent, magnificent, yellow sand, snow peaks, bonfires, bows and knives, full of lofty sentiments.
Imitation: Li Bai's poem is a long knife, whistling around the sky. It is soaring, flying, and there are mountains, waterfalls, wine and hibiscus everywhere.
Du Fu's poem is a plaintive guqin erhu, full of melancholy and depression, with huts, Sha Ou, fallen trees and lonely boats.
Landscape pastoral poetry is the new rain in the depths of the empty mountain, which is smart and moist, with clear springs and bright moons, lotus fishing boats and quiet berths.
Life is Wen Tianxiang's lofty spirit, "Who has never died in life since ancient times, keeping a pure heart to shine on history".
Imitation: Life is Su Dongpo's detachment and openness.
Life is the helplessness and sadness of Du Fu's "falling into tears like a lonely bird".
Life is Li Bai's "Oh, let a man with spirit take risks where he likes, and never point his golden cup at the moon!" " .
Life is Fan Zhongyan's concern for the country and the people, and it is "worrying about the world first and worrying about the world later".
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Time is like a breeze, which can help us blow away the melancholy clouds in our hearts;
Imitation: time is like a drizzle, which can help us wash away impurities in our hearts; Time is like a pool of clear water, which can help us wash away the dirt in our hearts; Time is like running water, which can help us to dilute the painful memories in our hearts; Time is like a good medicine, which can help us alleviate the pain in our hearts; Time is like a sharp knife, which can help us get rid of cancer in our minds. ...
Maybe Van Gogh is not the best, but he is the most unique. He seems to be a scale on the dragon, shining with unique light. In Europe where dust and erosion are rampant, he is a cool breeze. He created his own impressionist style. Different from Monet's gentleness and serenity, and Cezanne's fluency in realism, Van Gogh stretched freely in the palace of art with the most unruly spirit, playing his unparalleled creation.
Imitation: Maybe Vitas is not the best, but he is the most unique. He seems to be a feather on the head of a phoenix, shining with unique brilliance. He is an elegant fountain in the music world where a hundred schools of thought contend and impetuous winds sweep. He created his own soul treble. Different from Pavarotti's tactfulness and Domingo's generous lyricism, Vitas sang his unique voice charm with the most incredible range on the music stage.
I don't know what it means to be useful for composition.
I hope it helps you. If you are satisfied, I hope you can adopt it in time ~ ~
8. Write a composition with love (comparative at the beginning and better at the end).
Love is a sweet spring, which makes unfortunate people forget the bitterness of life; Love is a beautiful ballad that makes boring people feel the joy of life. Love is a flowing spring, which makes thirsty pedestrians feel the sweetness of life journey; Love is a beautiful ballad, which makes people who walk alone feel the beauty of life; Love is a clear spring flowing in my heart, which makes people immersed in pain feel the sweetness of the world; Love is a ballad that reverberates in the ear, making lonely people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring that knocks on the ice door and shakes the heart of stone; Love is a beacon shining in the dark, which can let the lost ships find the harbor; Love is a drizzle in spring, which makes lonely people enjoy the nourishment of their hearts; Love is a tear flowing in a clear spring on a summer night, which makes people who are hot and sleepless appreciate the poetic peace; Love is a small umbrella held up on a rainy night, which allows people wandering in a foreign land to get the shade of family; Love is a rainbow flying from the horizon, so that people full of sadness can see the beauty of the world; Love is a glass of ice water sprinkled on the top of your head, which makes people feel dizzy and dizzy with high fever. Love is a piece of milk candy in the mouth, which makes people who drink coptis chinensis for a long time taste the sweetness of life.
Caring is a look, giving students a silent blessing; Caring is a green wind, which gives students physical and mental comfort; Caring is a spring rain that moistens students' hearts; Caring is a greeting, giving students the warmth of spring.
Be grateful
If love is the spring breeze in March, gratitude is the new green exposed by grass;
If love is the sunshine of early summer vitality, gratitude is the thick green of wood growth;
If love is snow in winter, gratitude is wheat with full grains;
worship
You are not rain and dew, but you bring the hope of a new life; You are not spring, but you bring the sweetness of life; You are not the sun, but you bring the warmth of the world.
You are like a stream, without the rushing waves of the river and the grandeur of the sea, but the tinkling among the rocks is your cheerful melody.
You are like a star, without the dazzling light of the sun and the charming romance of the moon, but the light in the night sky is a flash of your life value.
You are like gravel, without the vastness of mountains and the leisure of streams, but a little bedding between mountains and rivers is your silent dedication.
Your smile is the warmest spring breeze in the world, your tears are the most precious pearls in the world, and your wrinkles are the scars of hard times. Your portrait is a symbol of courage and tenacity; Your concern makes us feel the care of our elders; Your encouragement made us raise the sail of struggle; Your profundity makes us bathe in the sunshine of knowledge; Your dedication has made me appreciate the elegance of teachers' morality.
You are like a shuttle that can take us across the long river of history; You are like a key, which can help us unlock the lost heart lock; You are like a morning star, leading us to a sunny paradise.