Climb high and see far, just like a vast "sea of gold", the autumn wind sweeps away, leaves fall in succession, and some dance like butterflies; Some fly like orioles; Some people spin lightly like dancers.
The fallen leaves on the ground are like a thick golden blanket. Autumn is not as vibrant as spring when flowers are in full bloom, but it is not as vibrant as summer when trees are shaded. But it attracts people with attractive autumn colors and golden fruits.
I love the bright moon in autumn; Love to see the beautiful autumn chrysanthemums in Yingze Park; Love to watch the uniform geese fly south; Love to see the clear Fenhe River reflecting the blue sky; I prefer to see pearl-like grains piled up in the granary and heavy apples covered with branches. In autumn, chrysanthemums stand upright against the wind, graceful and proud.
There are red, white, yellow, purple and pink.
Colorful, make autumn look beautiful. There is not such a saying that "chrysanthemum is not preferred among flowers, and this flower is even more flowerless."
In autumn, towering mountains are covered with red leaves, which are like flames and sunset clouds, and seem to disdain cold and autumn. It's really "frosty leaves are redder than February flowers". How can this beautiful autumn color not be liked? When we enter autumn, the ears of rice, sunflowers, apples, grapes, corn and sorghum are all ripe, and the beautiful wild chrysanthemums also fragrant the narrow paths in the fields.
The ears of rice are ripe, and the golden face is like beautiful gold, shining in the sun. When sunflowers are ripe, they all bow their heads as if they were walking with their backs bent.
The apples were cooled by the autumn wind, and everyone put on a red cotton-padded jacket, as if red lanterns were hung on every branch. Cut off every branch.
Grapes were also cooled by the autumn wind, and they were all covered with a purple robe, as if grapes were also cooled by the autumn wind, and they were all covered with a purple robe, just like beautiful purple pearls. How beautiful these strings are! Corn happily holds the red tassel, as if forgetting the troubles of a summer. Sorghum blushed and smiled as if she had been praised by others.
Wild chrysanthemums are also very fragrant in autumn. I walked on the narrow path in the field and gently smelled the fragrance of wild chrysanthemum, which was as beautiful as roses, honeysuckle, morning glory and cactus flowers. Autumn, there are golden ears of rice, autumn, there are golden ears of rice, shiny sunflowers, red apples, purple grapes, yellow corn, red sorghum, so beautiful! Ah! How colorful autumn is! How glorious you are! How noble you are! You are not only a beautiful season, but also a harvest season.
I want to thank autumn, because autumn brings us food and fills the world with beauty. Ah! How wonderful you are in autumn! Today is the sunset. After dinner, my friends and I are playing in the yard. We played for a while. When we are tired of playing, we lie on the soft beach and look at the sky. Suddenly, a sunset glow floated into my sight. I looked around and saw more sunsets. I looked at it carefully and found that it was like many things.
Some sunset clouds are like an old hen, the chicks are covered with yellow feathers, and the sunset clouds behind them are like a vicious dog. Suddenly, the hen turned and pecked the evil dog and drove it away. Some sunset clouds are like a dozen horses. They fly on the Yuan Ye and seem to run faster than anyone else. After a while, a horse crossed the finish line first. It is the strong in the group and the leader in the group. I think in life, no matter what you do, you must strive to be the first and not lag behind others.
Some sunset clouds are like children playing together. They sometimes swim in the river. Sometimes picking up stones by the river; Sometimes they wrestle in the shade, sometimes they pick fruit on the tree ... they have a good time. The sunset glow is so beautiful that I didn't notice it before! In the early morning, in grandpa's yard, a silvery birdsong awakened the sleeping earth.
I opened my blindfolded eyes, put on my clothes and went to grandpa's farmhouse. I looked up at the sky. The sky in the east was a fish-belly white, and the small courtyard gradually became active against the rising sun.
Look, the rooster held his head high, straightened his chest, strode up the courtyard wall and shouted "wow, wow"; Birds stand in the treetops, chirping like happy notes; The smoke from the chimney is very warm. I think grandma must have started cooking. After breakfast, the sun has risen very high.
The yard suddenly lit up. Peony, rose, Clivia ..... one by one to meet the sunshine and compete to open.
Peony flowers are blooming brightly, like the bright smiling faces of children. Red, yellow and pink roses are dancing in the breeze, just like a graceful girl.
Clivia is in full bloom in the corner, but it doesn't make public, as if to show its gentlemanly demeanor. There is an apricot tree in the middle of the yard, which looks so tall and straight among the flowers. It stretches the notes hard.
On the branch, the small oval leaves are green. Pushing away the dense leaves, I also saw small apricots, like beating little hearts, showing us its exuberant vitality.
What surprised me even more was that a small drop of water hung on each tip of a clump of bamboo at the gate of the yard. I asked grandpa why every bamboo leaf was hung with crystal dew.
Grandpa told me that bamboo absorbs water as much as possible at night to meet the needs of growth until it reaches the tip of the leaf. I suddenly realized that this thick green color is the embodiment of its vitality.
Time gradually arrived at noon, and in the moist earthy atmosphere, I smelled a burst of fragrant fragrance. Looking up, it turned out to be floating down from the locust tree outside the yard.
White Sophora japonica is covered with branches, like a silver mountain. It's really "like the spring breeze, thousands of trees bloom at night"! The buzz of bees adds vitality to the yard.
This is grandpa's yard, a vibrant yard! Look carefully! This is 4 articles! Don't speculate.
2. Describe a scene, and pay attention to learn to use the techniques of dynamic and static combination, positive description and side description. At 7 o'clock in the morning, familiar footsteps and loud door calls will always ring in the corridor. "Here comes the milk! Every time I hear this voice, I know it's the milkman, and I will get up and open the door.
The milkman is an ordinary man, an uncle in his fifties. The uncle's dark skin can be seen at a glance as the result of years of sun exposure. Under his gray hair, there are a pair of small and intense eyes. But it stayed in my mind deeply.
Because the milk he poured out was thick and fragrant, many residents on the floors ordered it. One of them is on the sixth floor, and the subscriber on the sixth floor is our home, on the 12 floor. It's tiring enough not to carry things up and down, not to mention round and slippery milk bottles, which will break several bottles if you are not careful.
Winter snow covers the earth, everything is covered with silver fashion, and the long and lonely winter day comes early. But whether it's windy or snowy, uncle will always come to deliver milk.
In the morning, it is still as cold as usual. The doorbell of Ding Ling rang again. I still want to sleep under the quilt, but I have to open the door. I slowly opened the door among the gangsters. Opening the door, I saw standing at the door as usual, smiling, wearing a black coat, with deep wrinkles on my forehead, as if I could catch mosquitoes, but I also looked energetic. I took the bottle at hand and fell heavily on the ground. I said to myself in disappointment, "Hey, today's milk flow is ruined!" " "Uncle smiled and said," it doesn't matter. I will fill another bottle for free today. " I took the milk and thanked her.
It's the morning when the cold wind is howling again, and grandpa has come to deliver milk again. He handed me the milk carefully. When I took the bottle, I found that his hand had been frozen and cracked by the ruthless cold wind. His skin is wrinkled like that of an old pine tree, and there are holes in it. His hair was slightly shaken by the cold wind I saw his mouth shaking. Obviously, he is cold, although he is still smiling. I asked him, "Don't you wear gloves in this cold, or should I ask my father to give you a pair?" As he spoke, he pointed to the bottle: "Look, there is a layer of ice beads outside this bottle. If I wear gloves, the bottle will easily slip, and I am used to it. " When he left, I put my parents' black gloves in his box when he wasn't looking.
Another morning, "the milk is flowing!" " When I called the door, I saw those hands wearing a black glove and the other person was smiling. Of course, I am also smiling happily in my heart.
3. Writing skills, what is the combination of static and dynamic is a very important writing method. In an appropriate way, turning moving things into still life, or writing static things vividly to set off static, produces wonderful writing effect, makes still life show birth and vitality, makes moving things appear heavy and solemn, thus showing different expressions. If we properly use this method of combining static and dynamic in our writing, we can get rid of the monotonous defect of the article and make it vivid.
When writing, we should pay attention to both static modality and dynamic modality when observing things, and combine them to highlight the overall sense and vividness of things. For example, when we wrote about Zhouzhuang in the snow in the article "The Water Rhyme of Zhouzhuang", "In the dazzling sunshine, snow can be seen everywhere in the ancient town. On the roadside, the roof, the treetops and the stone steps by the river, pools of snow reflect the sunshine and are dazzling. Ancient masonry and fresh white snow are interlaced, black and white, like a print with strong color contrast. In the sun, the snow is melting, and the sound of dripping water and running water can be heard everywhere. It drips under the eaves of the small street, the stone arch bridge and the railing of bridge opening are submerged ... Listen carefully, the sound of water is overlapping, like crying, like mysterious and distant Jiangnan silk and bamboo, wrapped in all kinds of tenderness, rising from the ground. " When describing the scenery here, the author adopts the method of combining static and dynamic.
In the same way. When writing people, you can also write in the way of combining static and dynamic, that is, describing people's appearance, expression, posture and so on. And then write from the perspective of action and language, fully highlighting the characteristics of the characters.
In addition, when writing, we should be bold and innovative, skillfully use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification, combine dynamic and static, integrate our unique feelings and create unique effects. For example, in the article "Three Gorges in Badong", when the author wrote about the mountains, "The peaks there are high and low, and they are layered like countless horses running." Here, the author uses the rhetorical device of metaphor to compare the quiet mountains to "countless horses galloping", vividly describing the dynamic situation before and after the mountains and vividly describing the momentum of the mountains. When writing about mountain peaks, "this peak is very high and that peak is higher." A row in front, a row in the back, and countless rows in the back, layer by layer. You surround me, I surround you, you bite me, I bite you. " Here, anthropomorphic techniques and verbs "surround" and "bite" are used to outline the modality surrounded by mountains, which reflects the preciseness of mountains. As can be seen from the above examples, rhetoric is an important way to turn static into dynamic. However, when writing, we should pay attention to the internal relations between things, especially the verve and likeness between them, because they are more mixed with the author's feelings and emotions. If it seems stiff and reluctant, the expression effect will lose its color.
Of course, we should choose according to the actual needs of the article, flexibly choose the method of combining static and dynamic, and innovate, so as to write a personalized article, write my heart and express my feelings with my pen.
4. Write a short composition of about 65,438+000 words by combining static and dynamic methods. You have to write it yourself, be humiliated, stay or not, take out the yellow paper and sip the tea. At that time, it was cool and bright.
Just like when you are indifferent, you can smell the melody dancing outside the window, and your heart is quiet and dust-free, and the chrysanthemum fragrance is overflowing. This is an easy road.
Go your own way, impassioned, holding Huang Qingcang, bowing and shooting at the moon, The River of No Return was magnificent at that time. Just like the figure of fighting and forging ahead between wind and rain, the blood is bitter, but the male soul lasts forever.
This is the way to be strong and excited. There are always people who take pains to impose their responsibilities on others.
They seem to be gods with a halo, which means that only the road they like is flat, thinking that if they repeat it a thousand times, some roads will be deserted and some roads will be crowded. As everyone knows, everyone is on the road, and everyone has their own way.
Have you forgotten the prosperity of ideological confrontation more than two thousand years ago? Confucius stood gracefully in the apricot altar, and Laozi lived quietly in the forest. Mozi tried his best to "benefit the world", while Xunzi held the scale of "Heaven has its own rules". If we inscribe Han Fei, who takes the law as his teacher, and Zhuang Zhou, who is one of man and butterfly, aren't they all safe travelers? Isn't the scene of contention far better than the sameness? Otherwise, what's the difference between people and trees side by side in the field? What kind of roads, what kind of scenery, what kind of pedestrians are singing what kind of songs.
Open the memory, and how many colorful roads are tangled. I think of Violet's Cliff White Deer Plain, Liu Yong's Willow on the 1st, and Nalan Xingde's Honey trap.
Think of Nietzsche's metaphor for the sun, think of Van Gogh's Golden Paper, and think of Tolstoy's labor spirit. At all times and all over the world, how many people have to bear a heavy burden and stick to their long road full of thorns, and how many people follow the footsteps of others, doing nothing in a bleak life, being buried deep in the choking smoke of history and losing their perishable bodies and immortal souls.
If Microsoft's Bill didn't have his own seemingly tortuous road, but followed everyone's footsteps on the avenue, then there would be no Windows system, no OFFICE software, and no long-term monopoly of his position as the richest man. If the thirteen righteous men in Tangshan had not gone south to Chenzhou and enjoyed the New Year at home, then perhaps there would not have been so many followers who took pains to save people in the snowstorm in the south of China this winter, and there would not have been so many tears and smiles that touched them.
The beauty and richness of this world are all because people walk tirelessly on the road, and everyone is going their own way. So-some roads are full of flowers, and some roads are misty; Some roads are devastated, and some roads are full of bumps; Some roads are full of gold and iron, some roads are calm ... everyone is walking on the road.
Everyone has his own way.
5. Write a scene that combines static and dynamic. If a 50-character flower is a landscape in the light, the color of lotus is different. But what if it grows on the back of the rockery and grows in the leisure place of the courtyard? Unapproachable
Because the tickets for this park are not cheaper at all than those in other places, I will go everywhere, every corner.
The rockery was hazy in the shallow fog. The angle of twists and turns is endless, looming. There is a wet green leaching out. This stone is very beautiful.
I approached and turned my back. What kind of plant is this? At that time, there was neither day nor moon in the sky, which was a bit of stagnation of time and space, faint fog and thin coolness.
Clusters are cold, inclined and warm my sight. Under the dark green leaves, purple-blue and sapphire flowers are woven. Three or four huge, one medium, one or two bracts. Lying quietly on the ground, a few dark, twisted, like in * * *. The song flows into my eardrum.
6. The composition of birds in the forest adopts the scheme of combining static and dynamic. In China's ancient poems, poets paid special attention to dynamic description to create Taoist ethereal artistic conception. The combination of static and dynamic is a commonly used method of scenery description.
In the use of this technique, it is unique, with "every word is the best" and "the realm is the best". As a combination of dynamic and static scenery, it often depicts the dynamic and static in an artistic conception, and it is mainly static, with the dynamic setting static (the "dynamic" here includes dynamic and sound, such as "the sound of bamboo in the Qing Dynasty, the sound of lotus leaves in front of fishing boats", "noisy" is sound, and "dynamic" is dynamic), forming a harmonious unity of artistic conception and image.
Therefore, the combination of dynamic and static scenery writing techniques can not be completely separated from the foil Writing articles about scenery, writing dynamic or static in isolation is often not impressive.
If we can combine dynamic description with static description, we can create vivid literary scenes by writing static and reacting static to dynamic. A typical example is Wang Wei's famous Autumn Night in the Deep Mountains: "There is moonlight in the pine forest and crystal stone in the stream."
The spotless pine trees on the mountain, the bright moonlight and the mottled shadows left by the moonlight through the gaps in the leaves all give people a quiet feeling-this is to highlight the tranquility in the mountain through static description. The second sentence says that after the rain, the mountain spring is full of water, and the flow potential increases, gurgling through the stone-this is a dynamic description, which reflects the tranquility in the mountain with movement.
"Birds in the Stream"-Wang Wei "When people are idle, osmanthus flowers fall, and the night is quiet and the mountains are empty. When the moon comes out, it surprises the birds and sounds into the spring stream. "
This poem is mainly about a quiet night in spring. Flowers fall, the moon rises and birds sing, all moving. The author uses the dynamic technique to contrast the quietness, and receives the artistic effect of "Tonamiyama is more secluded".
Classification of techniques ① Turning motion into stillness and writing motion with stillness means writing moving things into static things, imagining and describing the form and expression of static and dynamic things. For example, Li Bai's "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" and "Looking at Qianchuan Waterfall" are the first images of seeing waterfalls from a distance. The flowing water is regarded as a static cloth, and the waterfall hangs on the mountain like a huge white practice. The word "hang" has become static, vivid and vivid.
(2) Turning static into dynamic and writing static with dynamic means writing static things into moving things, imagining and describing the shapes and expressions of static things when they are moving. For example, the word "send" in Wang Anshi's "Mr. Yin's Book on the Wall of the Lake" brings the still mountain to life.
(3) The combination of static and dynamic is to describe static and dynamic things at the same time, so that static and dynamic scenes complement each other, complement each other and are interesting to each other. For example, Du Fu's "The city is full of meaning", "The heron on the sand head is silent, and the fish at the stern is whistling", which is a clever combination of visual silence and auditory movement.
④ It is a contrast technique to contrast the static by describing and rendering the dynamic and highlighting the static. For example, the scenery painted in Jia Dao's poem "Li Ning Ju You" is very quiet, and the famous sentence "Monks knock on the moon door" and the word "knock" is full of movement, movement and sound, with movement as the background and sound as the background. In the quiet moonlight, a "thump" came, making the environment quieter and depicting poetry more accurately; In Wang Ji's "Into the Xi", "Cicada makes Lin Jing quieter, and Yin Gong Shan is quieter", which is a model of calm by sound.
⑤ It is a contrast technique to contrast the dynamic by describing and rendering the static. As Tang's poem "Qin Ge" says: "Once it is played, there is no other sound: there are spells on the banquet, and the stars are getting thinner."
This is how you feel about the beauty of music when you write and listen to the piano. It is written from the perspective of hearing, moving with silence. The next sentence says that the stars fade away when listening to the piano, which shows that the listener has long been intoxicated with the beauty of music, and the feeling of time passing has been forgotten without a trace. ⑥ Moving by moving means moving things by moving things (including moving things when they are stationary).
For example, Su Shi's "Looking at the Mountain on the River": "The ship looks at the mountain like a horse, and there are nearly a hundred regiments. The front mountain is suddenly different, and the back ridge is like running.
Looking up, the path is oblique and there are pedestrians on the street. Raise your hand and talk in the boat, sail south like a bird. "
It stands to reason that people stand in the boat, the boat is moving and the mountain is static, but the author turns it upside down, gives the mountain movement, lets the mountain fly in front of him and watches the mountain rush behind him. The whole poem presents a brisk and magnificent rhythm. ⑦ Dynamic and static contrast is to describe both moving things and static things, so that one sets off the other.
7. Write a composition in the park in winter by combining static and dynamic methods. Winter is coming again. Of course, the snow that has been raging has also fallen from the gloomy sky with the change of the weather. Scattered in every corner of the city.
The next morning, rays of sunshine fell from the sky covered with red clouds. A group of children in big cotton-padded clothes and big hats ran to the park like big bread.
I saw the park was strangely quiet, and there were not even birds singing. On the ground, bare branches and under street lamps, there is a piece of white everywhere, like putting a white coat on the earth. Even the evergreen pine and cypress trees in winter and summer are covered with fluffy white snow.
Not long after, the arrival of the children, the park showed another scene. Some of them are making a snowman, some are having a snowball fight, and some want to record this beautiful scenery with their cameras. Look, the little girl standing next to the snowman with a red bow is me. My friends and I are enthusiastically repairing the body for the fat snowman. The little friend next to him is also "exercising", with a smile on his face and big drops of sweat dripping down his head.