The poem begins with "Fire shines on the heavens and the earth, and the red star spits purple smoke", showing a smelting scene with bright colors and warm atmosphere: the fire is raging, the red star splashes, the purple smoke transpires, and the vast world is illuminated by red flames. The poet used two seemingly ordinary words, "Zhao" and "Luan", but once refined into poetry, it made Yejing stand out. Through this vivid scene, it is not difficult to feel the novelty, excitement and wonder of the poet.
Then two sentences, "Lang night, Song moving cold Sichuan", turned to describe the image of smelting workers. With rough lines and a little outline, the poet's majestic and sturdy image of the smelter is vividly displayed on the paper. The word "Lang Lang" is novel and intriguing. "rhyme" originally refers to blushing because of shyness; Here refers to the fire reflecting the red face. From the word "Lang Lang", we can think of their strong physique and industrious, simple, enthusiastic, bold and optimistic personality. The end of the sentence "Song Dong Han Chuan" closed the characterization of the previous sentence. Smelters sing while working, and the loud singing makes the cold river ripple. What songs did they sing? If the poet doesn't add a little, readers can make all kinds of supplements and associations; Did this song really stir Hanchuan? Of course not. This is the poet's unique feeling, an exaggerated stroke, but extremely vivid. If the sentence "Lang Lang" only depicts the faces of smelting workers under the bright moon and fire, then this sentence reveals their inner world, their rich emotions and beautiful sentiments, and the lines are full of poets' admiration and praise.
This is a magnificent autumn night smelting map. Under the poet's ingenious pen, light, heat, sound and color are intertwined, and bright and dark, cold and hot, dynamic and static are in harmony, vividly showing the fiery labor scene and vividly shaping the image of ancient smelting workers. It is indeed an artistic treasure that radiates extraordinary splendour in the treasure house of ancient poetry. Respondents: Shangyi | 2011-4-509: 31.
Fire shines on heaven and earth, red star and purple smoke 2. Lang night three, the song moves cold Sichuan.
1 The fire of Taoist alchemists shines all over the world.
Splash sparks sparkled in purple smoke,
In the bright moonlight, the fire is shining and the smelters are working hard.
They let go of their voices and sang as they worked, and their voices echoed throughout the silent mountains and rivers. [Responder: Li Tianhua | Grade 9 | 201-4-5 09: 37.
The fourteenth poem of Qiu Puge has a very special theme, which is about smelting workers who are engaged in intense labor.
Fire shines on the heavens and the earth, and red stars are everywhere. At the beginning of this poem, people saw the scene of intense labor. The first sentence is panorama. I saw the flames blazing, reflecting the whole world, and looking from afar in the night, the scenery was spectacular; The second sentence is a close-up view. You can see thick purple smoke spewing out of the furnace, and sometimes scarlet Mars jumps out of the furnace happily. The whole picture presents a strong tone and a strong sense of movement, which gives people a visual impact. Through this unusual scene description, we can clearly feel the excitement, joy and multiple emotional experiences mixed with novelty and admiration brought by the poet's visit to this fiery labor site.
The next two sentences, "A Night with a Bright Moon", are the author's positive descriptions of the smelting workers who are working hard. The original meaning of the cloud is blushing, and Li Bai creatively developed it, thus producing a brand-new poetry vocabulary-Lang Lang, to express his sincere admiration for the hard-working people in front of him. Due to the baking of the fire and the tension of labor, the workers' faces are in the moonlight. They were all fresh and flushed, and heavy physical labor did not crush them. On the contrary, in this hard and creative work, they felt a kind of heroism and excitement from the heart. As a result, they can work hard and sing songs with high spirits. The high-pitched labor chant resounds through the night sky one after another, weaving into a rough hymn of labor creating everything, and even the optimism, unity and mutual assistance of the workers have given the already sensitive poet a strong inner shock. If the first three sentences of the poem mainly express the visual impact on the poet's heart through pictures, then at the end of the poem, the auditory shock felt by the poet at that time is reproduced through sound effects, and even the poet can't help it, let alone Li Bai, who is naturally romantic and affectionate. At this moment, he has completely forgotten his white hair, and once again feels the value of life and the sublimity of labor, so his heart can no longer be suppressed, and his inspiration breaks out again. So with a stroke of his pen, he created a magnificent panorama of Autumn Night Smelting, which concisely and incisively expressed the author's sincere praise and admiration for creative labor and simple workers.