Teaching design of modern poetry

First, the teaching objectives

(A) the main points of knowledge teaching

A novel idea, a way to express things and feelings.

(2) Key points of ability training

Cultivate the ability to read aloud with emotion and express vivid, concrete, implicit and profound feelings.

(C) moral education penetration point

Love for mother.

(D) the starting point of aesthetic education

Understand the affectionate beauty of the beloved mother in this poem.

Second, the guidance of learning methods

On the basis of a brief understanding of the writing background and the author's situation, we can enjoy the text itself. Focus on appreciating the uniqueness of this poem in expressing maternal love.

Three. Key points, difficulties, doubts and solutions

1. Key point: Explain the deep affection between mother and daughter.

2. Difficulty: the writing method of pleading lyricism.

3. Doubt: The third verse of this poem.

4. Solution: explanation and debate.

Fourth, the class schedule

2~3 classes

Verb (abbreviation for verb) Prepare teaching AIDS and learning tools.

Multimedia and related software (pictures of sailing at sea and dubbing or reading aloud), tape recorders and related music reading tapes.

Sixth, the design of teacher-student interaction activities.

1. The teacher used multimedia pictures to show the sea, boats and corresponding sounds, and read poems in the background.

2. Read the poem, summarize the content of the poem, find out the sentences that I feel the most or like better, and discuss their functions.

3. Let the students fold paper cranes and boats and write down their wishes to their loved ones. Or write a poem to express your feelings.

Seven, teaching steps

Introduction Speaking of poetry, students will immediately think of many well-known masterpieces by Li Bai and Du Fu, but seldom think of Bing Xin's poems. Bing Xin is a famous female writer in China. She has created a large number of literary works that reflect social life and have a unique artistic style. Her problem novels attracted the attention of literary circles as early as the early stage of new literature; Her fresh, meaningful and philosophical poems once formed the era of popular poetry. She wrote many new chapters with a lot of ideas and colored pens.

Today, we learn a poem by Bing Xin, a paper boat for my mother. 1923 In August, Bing Xu set out from Shanghai to study in the United States. In the long journey, facing the vast sea, she felt lonely and missed her dear mother day and night, so she wrote this poem.

Clear goal

Read and feel the thoughts and feelings of this poem again and again, and realize the meaning given to the paper boat by the author.

(B) the overall perception

1. Read the poem with emotion and ask the students to mark the new words.

New words

Overlapping throw pāo

New words

Tianfeng: the wind of nature.

Zoom in: zoom in.

No reason: no reason; For no reason. Example: Nothing interesting.

Love: extreme, extreme; Most. Exodus: You are very welcome. Beloved: favorite.

2. Read the poem aloud, understand the content of the whole poem, and understand the ideological connotation of the article.

3. Read freely and choose your favorite sentences; Emotional praise, focusing on its spiritual essence.

(3) Summary and expansion

1. The teacher asked: What mood does this poem express?

This poem expresses the author's feelings of missing his mother.

1923 In early summer, Bing Xin graduated from yenching university. On August 17 of the same year, she went to the United States by Yorkshire mail in Shanghai.

When I was studying in China, I wrote this poem on a seagoing ship heading for the other side of the ocean. The sparkling waves and surging tides revived the poet's childlike innocence of loving the sea; Green sea water and flying seagulls make the poet close to nature again. In Ten Days at Sea from Wusongkou, the three pillars of Bing Xin's early outlook on life and love-mother, childlike innocence and nature-are revived and reappeared at this time, but maternal love cannot be close because she is far away from her mother. Therefore, the poet misses his mother very much, and even gets sick because he misses his mother, and recovers because he sees his mother in his dream. This poem expresses the poet's deep affection for his mother.

2. Q: This poem is divided into three sections. What is written in each section?

The first verse of the poem begins with his childlike behavior of folding paper into a boat, saying that he refused to abandon a piece of paper on a seagoing ship and kept folding it into a boat and throwing it into the sea. Seemingly dull quatrains pave the way for the outbreak of feelings.

The second paragraph of the poem describes the whereabouts of paper boats thrown from the ship, some of which were blown into the windows of the ship by the wind, some of which were wet by the waves and stained on the bow. All these destinations are not in line with the poet's sincere wishes. She always wants a person to flow only where I want him to go. Because of this, she is still not discouraged, and she breaks it every day, which shows her strong and sincere desire. As for where the paper boat is expected to flow, the poet did not make it clear in this section, which caused suspense and thought-provoking.

The poet naturally understood that the paper boat could not flow to his mother, so the third verse of the poem turned out new ideas. The poet dreamed of seeing a small paper boat in his mother's dream. If this phenomenon is still common, don't wonder that he dreamed for no reason, which shows the strangeness of the poet's imagination. So, why not let mom be surprised by the dream of the boat? At the end of the poem, the poet pointed out that the imaginary paper boat that entered her mother's dream was folded with tears, and she prayed that the paper boat would bring her love for her mother and the sadness caused by being away from her mother to her side. This ending is the climax of the whole poem.

3. Q: What are the writing characteristics of this poem?

(1) This poem is novel in conception, and the poet expresses his feelings by means of supporting things, so the expression of feelings is vivid, concrete, implicit and profound. The poem has a long verse and a slow intonation, which echoes the long-term yearning for the mother. (3) Poetry is based on a white and light paper boat, which is conducive to the expansion of imagination. Poetry is a free body, but the tide of feelings is free to churn, and the style is simple and euphemistic.

Eight, homework

1. Exercise after class 1( 1)

2. Fold a paper boat or crane or write a poem and hand it in.

Nine, blackboard writing design

A paper boat for mom

Ice core

X. Practice in class

Star array/group

floret

I also want to look up.

Thanks for the love of spring.

However, deep goodwill

On the contrary, he finally became silent

Mom.

Were you that spring?

Think about a problem

1. I wanted to thank Chunguang, but in the end I was silent. Why didn't you say it? What kind of thoughts and feelings are contained in this.

The last sentence implies a special gratitude to your mother, which can be supplemented by the last sentence to show this gratitude and give full play to your imagination.

3. This poem is very close to the idea expressed in Ode to a Wanderer by Meng Jiao in Tang Dynasty. Can you write that poem from memory?

answer

1. Because he realized that a few words of thanks were not enough to return the love in spring, and silence contained deeper gratitude and respect.

2. I am that little flower.

3. But how much affection does it have for an inch of grass to get three spring rays?