What is the reason for Xiangling's success in learning poetry? Be willing to learn, eager to learn, study hard and be good at learning.
First, Xiangling has a good qualification. Although she was busy with housework before entering the park, she was able to "find time" to read a few poems, which proved that she was by no means a "layman". Secondly, there are good guides, whether Dai Yu or Baochai, who guide Xiangling by inspiration, point out the key points in a few words, let Xiangling know what to choose and gradually understand the samadhi in the poem. Thirdly, the Grand View Garden is a beautiful place, which is in sharp contrast with the dark and dirty environment outside the garden. Xiangling's coming here is like coming to another world, especially the care and praise given to her by Baoyu and Tanchun, which made her feel the warmth of the world. She was liberated spiritually, and her intelligence was finally revealed. As Baoyu said, "This is exactly' outstanding people'. People who are born with beauty are really affectionate." Fourth, it is inseparable from Xiangling's own efforts.
What places in the article can reflect Xiangling's efforts and dedication in studying poetry?
The students are looking for something good. Let's enjoy the wonderful paragraphs (wonderful appreciation on the screen) and talk about your comments.
Wonderful appreciation (fifth paragraph of the text) (projection)
Discussion and induction: This paragraph describes Xiangling's concentration in her second effort. Under the guidance of Daiyu, Xiangling's vision is constantly expanding. When she entered the state of creative impulse, her image was dazzling: "She didn't even enter the room, just sat under a tree by the pool, or sat on a rock, or squatted underground to dig soil, and people coming and going were surprised"; When writing the third draft, I "searched my heart, but I didn't listen or read it", and even shouted in my dream, "But if I had it, wouldn't this one be very good?" For this figure who is devoted to poetry creation, the author accurately describes her words, deeds and expression changes. Linked to Xiangling's painstaking poems, the sincere gathering of Jingxue and her tragic life experience, how can we not sigh the injustice of the creator!
This paragraph also wrote Baoyu and Baochai. Xiangling studied poetry hard, and Baochai read the most and felt the deepest because she lived in Wuhu Garden. Her words such as "This man must be crazy", "What a poet" and "Your sincerity has become immortal" are all set off from the side. In addition, Baoyu's "it's a pity that he is so vulgar, who knew there was today" can also be regarded as a reflection of Xiangling's bitter poems in the hearts of people around him.
This artistic technique of expressing psychology through characters' language and gestures is an excellent tradition of China's classical novels, and A Dream of Red Mansions has developed it to the extreme. The whole work has created more than 400 vivid characters, all of whom have different voices, smiles and unique personalities. It gives people a strong artistic aesthetic feeling and is worth learning.
Seven, our harvest (screen display)
This paper mainly uses the combination of positive description and side contrast to shape the characters. On the one hand, Xiangling's obsession with painstakingly studying poetry and forgetting to eat and sleep is expressed through detailed descriptions such as delicate and accurate language, movements and demeanor. On the other hand, through the reflection of people around her, she praised Xiangling's spirit of hard study, making the characters more plump and vivid.
Extension: What thoughts and feelings did you place on the author when you created Xiangling?
In this article, the author eulogizes Xiangling, an unlucky woman who is loved by the essence and delicate spirit, with affectionate pen and ink. People like Xiangling actually live with Xue Pan! He humiliated me. That Xue Pan can only talk nonsense about "my daughter is worried that there is a big monkey in the bridal chamber", and it is extremely vulgar. Xiangling's situation deserves sympathy and regret. In feudal society, men and women were so unequal! Cao Xueqin is full of strong sympathy and praise for the female images in A Dream of Red Mansions, and puts forward new ideas of respecting women and improving their status. It is a fierce attack on the "men are superior to women" ethics advocated by the feudal ruling class, which fully embodies Cao Xueqin's superhuman courage and foresight in opposing feudal ethics.
Excellent literary works often reflect the essential meaning of life through distinctive artistic images. Therefore, readers who are good at appreciation will not only reproduce the image of the work, but also be satisfied with getting some feelings from the visualized world of the work, and will further think about why the author wants to create this character and reflect the author's ideological tendency and aesthetic point of view.
Eight, Daiyu teaches poetry
Xiangling's success in learning poetry is due to her own efforts and Daiyu's guidance. Let's take a look at how Daiyu instructed Xiangling to learn poetry. (The picture shows Daiyu teaching poetry)
How did Daiyu instruct Xiangling to learn poetry? (On Poetry (Explaining Theory), Selecting Poetry (Exemplifying Model Essays), Commenting on Poetry (Research and Discussion) and Writing Poetry (Concrete Practice)) When Dai Yu gave Xiangling advice on the way to learn poetry, he mainly talked about four aspects: emphasizing conception, not hurting meaning with words; Focus on content. Style and rules are the last things; Re-recognize and advocate famous artists to become high-grade; Only study and discussion can make progress.
Daiyu's teaching method is very unique. She pays attention to cultivating students' self-confidence. "What's so difficult about learning poetry?" You are a very smart person, you don't need a year's work, don't worry about not being a poet! In teaching, she actively guides students step by step, pays attention to accumulation and sentiment, reads Wang Wei's poems first, realizes the unity of scene and enters the poetic realm; Reread Du Fu's Seven Laws and realize "true scenery, true feelings"; Read Li Bai's seven poems to cultivate the personality and imagination of poetry. She emphasizes self-study, practice and inquiry, attaches importance to the cultivation of ability and advocates innovation. "Just be bold and do it."
What are the characteristics of her teaching methods?
Dai Yu's poems are very targeted. At the beginning of the lecture, she pointed out that beginners are easily bound by meter, and if there are strange sentences, they can ignore meter.
From this, talking about the importance of "conception" not only dispels doubts for Xiangling, but also clarifies the essentials of reading poetry. Then, according to Xiangling's tendency to love shallow poems, she made a bibliography. According to the idea that poetry must flourish in the prosperous Tang Dynasty at that time, in order to improve Xiangling's taste in poetry, Wang Wei, Du Fu and Li Bai were put in a prominent position. After Xiangling finished reading Wang Wei's five-character poem, Daiyu "paid attention to discussion" with her, and went deep into the artistic conception of the poem step by step, which was really convincing.
Daiyu taught Xiangling to write poems, which is also quite distinctive. For example, after the proposition, she specified the rhyme department, which seems a bit strict, but there are many words belonging to "fourteen cold", which gives her great freedom. Another example is Xiang Ling's first two drafts. Her criticism was severe, but she encouraged Xiang Ling to "make another work", but she said nothing about how to "make another work". This kind of guidance can be described as strict but not demanding, which is very suitable for Xiang Ling, who is "studying poetry hard".
What is the guiding significance for our study?
First, read more books. "Reading a poem a hundred times, its meaning is self-evident", reading aloud is the foundation, and it is also very correct and necessary for us to learn. With the increase of reading items, your ability to perceive language will become stronger and stronger, and your reading level will become higher and higher.
Secondly, if you want to learn, you must learn first-class. When reading, you should also choose works with both literary quality and beauty, which is very beneficial to cultivate sentiment and cultivate pure literary interest.
Third, we should boldly create and dare to imagine. Xiangling studies poetry, the first one, which means "the bright moon is in the sky" throughout. Therefore, Daiyu said that beginners read less poems and use indecent words, so they should be bold and imaginative. This is also quite right. Engels emphasized when commenting on the German poet Plato that "writing poetry must have bold imagination." It can be said that without imagination, there is no thinking in images, and there is no poetry. The process of thinking in images runs through rich artistic imagination from beginning to end, and bold imagination can make extremely ordinary life scenes glow with peculiar beauty and quality, which is refreshing.
Throughout the whole text, the poems I wrote by Xiang Ling and Dai Yu, teaching and learning, can all be summarized by one word "goodness".
Extension: What are the personality characteristics of Lin Daiyu in the text? How to understand?
Lin Daiyu's main characters in A Dream of Red Mansions are sentimental, sickly, aloof and sharp. However, in this article, we see a poet-like Miss Lin, who enthusiastically guides Xiangling, never takes pleasure in suffering and shows a bright mind regardless of fatigue. Judging from the bibliography she gave Xiangling, how profound her knowledge accumulation is!
Part of Lin Daiyu's spiritual life is brilliant, mainly reading and writing poems. The vast land of literature can be used for her orphan girl to soar freely. Lin Daiyu sympathized with Xiangling, an orphan without father and mother, and had a good impression on her. So when Xiangling asked her for advice, she took up the responsibility of a teacher with great interest. She said, "If you want to write poetry, you should worship me as a teacher. Although I don't understand, I can probably teach you. " She put forward the essentials of poetry simply and clearly, which made Xiangling dispel many worries and quickly shortened the distance between teaching and learning.
On the enlightening significance of xiangshi.
Be a conscientious person and increase your interest. I have been transferred to many departments and I am not ashamed to ask questions. Diligent in practice and not afraid of failure.
Xiangling's endless interest in poetry confirms the three realms of scholarship that have existed since ancient times. The first stage is the stage of "doubt": "Last night, the west wind withered the green trees, and I went up to the tall building alone and looked at the horizon." . The second stage is the "bitter rope" stage: "I am thin for Iraq, and I don't regret widening my belt." . The third stage is the "epiphany" stage: "Looking back suddenly, the man was under the dim light." . Cao Xueqin not only provides us with a reference to learn poetry, but also provides us with a shortcut to become a great scholar. What the text brings us is worthy of repeated thinking and lifelong thinking. ...