Beginning: 1 "Lei Feng travels thousands of miles on business, but good deeds make a train". There is a saying among people. Yes, he is the person I admire most-Lei Feng. The great name Lei Feng is a household name, and its spirit has become the conscious practice of hundreds of millions of people. Encourage generations to study hard, work hard and contribute to society. It is his touching story of helping others that drives me to become an inviolable idol in my heart. 2. In the vast world of books, I have many admirers, but what I admire most is (). 3. Growing up, there are too many people I admire, such as Liu Hulan, the heroine, Mulan who joined the army instead of her father, the great leader * * * … but the one I admire most, alas! My thoughts kept rolling in my head, and I kept thinking and thinking. Oh, by the way, it may be him-(). Although he is not as "hot" as she and Jay Chou, I worship him and his spirit and wisdom. 4. In today's highly developed society. Some outstanding people swarmed out, both celebrities at all times and at all times, and artists with high popularity, which attracted many people's yearning and love. Of course, my curiosity is no exception. Want to know who I admire? Tell you what! He is (). I believe everyone has his own hero in his heart! But my hero is a helpful hero-()! I admire him very much. What he did impressed me deeply. One thing impressed me the most. 6. "People are inherently mortal, or heavier than Mount Tai or lighter than a feather!" Who can live long, who can live forever! () Give yourself up to save others, an ordinary life, a great life! 7. If you ask me, who do I admire most? I will tell you without thinking: "Lei Feng!" He leads a
2. Describe the beginning and end of the composition of the character when the rain falls on my shoulder. At this moment, his face reappears in my mind. He is an ordinary and extraordinary person. He is ordinary and pursues a happy life; He is extraordinary in a unique mind: when he falls, he will stand up without hesitation; When watching others feel sad, he will feel worse than others; When I feel inferior, he will accompany me.
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He is such a person, a person who always thinks of others. In his dictionary, the word "retreat" never appeared.
I wrote it myself, get more light! ! !
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The days slip away quietly, and we all grow up inadvertently. When I close my eyes and look back, everything seems to have happened yesterday, and it appears in front of me in a hurry, and it seems to have happened a long time ago, so that when I open my eyes, I can't find a trace. There are more things in childhood than the stars in the sky. Some make people happy, some pout, some make people cry, some make people cry. . In my mind, there is a stupid thing that happened to me, which I have never forgotten.
Time flies. In a blink of an eye, five years passed. How much bitterness and bitterness, five years of success. They all passed away and disappeared into the deepest memory.
Example 1: Teacher Xiao Mu.
Start:
When I first met Miss Xiao Mu, she was wearing a white T-shirt, dark black pants and beige sneakers. The feeling is not gentle or sharp, but calm and gentle.
This newly graduated female college student teaches mathematics.
Ending:
I looked at this young woman with cool and intelligent eyes, and my heart failed.
That's great.
Example 2: "Dad who likes to brag"
Start:
My dad can really be regarded as the super invincible braggart in the universe. "What?" "shh! Keep your voice down. If my father hears us, we are both finished. " If you don't believe me, I'll tell you now.
If you lend him a mirror, as long as you don't go back, he can shine until he falls asleep; If you give him a comb, he can turn those hairs on his head into several hairstyles in the shortest time.
Ending:
If one day "smelly king" is tried by my father, this is my smelly father, how about it? "Who said that? Who is the king of smelly people? " It's dad! Run! Help!
Example 3: "Brothers"
Start:
I haven't seen my brother for a long time and miss him very much. I think that guy has been a soldier for more than a year, and now he is as strong as an ox! His strong appearance suddenly appeared in my mind, and I couldn't help laughing.
Ending:
Scene after scene, endless, my brother and I will never finish telling this story, I know that his love for his sister will be eternal. My brother chose to join the army and receive strict training in the military camp, which is very rare in a person's life. I am proud of my brother. I wish you all the best, sister. I believe that happiness will accompany you for a long time.
3. Describe the title of the character's composition and the title at the beginning and end of the composition: "My father".
First, the direct opening method My father is short, slightly hunched on his back, and walks like a cripple ... This is the most used opening method for students and the simplest one. This straightforward beginning often makes the article seem boring.
Here are four vivid ways to open it. Second, start with a classic sentence 1 and a poem.
"Don't be idle, you will lose your head." My father is over forty and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary ...
There is a saying in China that "three sticks don't fart." My father is a person who doesn't like to talk ... You can also use couplets, starting with idioms and so on.
Third, the appearance description begins: Example 1: "My favorite little friend" I have a good friend who is inseparable. Her fleshy little face has a pair of slender arch eyebrows, and there are a pair of watery big eyes under the eyebrows.
There is a smooth cherry mouth under the delicate nose. All in all, this is a lovely little face.
You know who she is. To tell you the truth, she is my good partner-Zeng Yushu. Example 2: "My favorite person" My favorite person-mother.
Mom is tall, fair-skinned, thin but not thin, plump but not fat, with thick curved eyebrows and big bright eyes, always shining with wisdom. This is my mother. How's it going? She looks beautiful.
1, description of appearance+characteristics at the beginning: Example 1: My grandma is a middle school teacher. She has bright eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her chubby body is always so busy.
Grandma is very serious and responsible for her work, and I admire her very much. Example 2: "My Dad" My dad is tall and thin, with two thick eyebrows and a pair of special round eyes, which often shines with wisdom and alertness. He can sometimes make people feel humorous.
He is only in his early forties, and his black hair has somehow fallen off very little. What I respect and admire most is his fighting spirit.
Example 3: The lovely gardener-my teacher. She has bright eyes, a mouth that can teach us thousands of knowledge, and a motherly smile on her face. Who is she? She is our head teacher-Miss Liu.
Example 4: "Little Musician" My little friend Zhang Mengyao has big eyes and neat white teeth. She's cute. Tell you, she is still recognized as a "little musician" by her classmates! Example 5: "My grandfather" My grandfather is over sixty years old. At noon, he has a thin face and a tall nose. Although his temples are gray, he looks very energetic.
He always has a smile on his face. My cousin and I both like to be naughty with him and tease us.
I nicknamed him "the old urchin". 2, voice description+character characteristics at the beginning: Example 1: "My Good Partner" has not arrived at her home, she heard a crisp and melodious reading sound. I don't have to guess, I know it's her-my good friend and good partner who studies hard.
3. Describe the characteristics of the characters at the beginning: Example 1: "My companion" I have a good companion. She is a Chinese learning committee member in our class. She was told to be serious and responsible for her work and never be careless. The tasks assigned by the teacher are meticulously completed. The most special thing is that she cherishes the collective property.
Ex. 2: After Grandma became the general manager, people called my grandma a strong woman. Although she has watched it for half a century, the bones are still hard.
After she became the general manager of the supermarket, a few crow's feet climbed on her forehead, and there were many silver threads in her black hair. Usually, a pair of bright eyes are often bloodshot. And those who ask for help to send gifts, like running water, flock to my door one after another, to my exhausted grandmother.
Fourth, the direct narrative begins: Example 1: "Mom, you made a mistake." I was sitting at the dinner table and soy milk splashed all over me. I cried sadly.
Example 2: After My Mom was finished, I walked quickly on my way home, because I kept singing Empty City Strategy in my stomach. I walked happily, thinking: at the moment, maybe my mother is cooking something good for me! Thinking, thinking, I seem to smell the tempting fragrance of the food, and I can't help but speed up the pace.
5. Various voices start with 1 and start with songs. "Smile sweetly, you smile sweetly, like flowers in full bloom in the spring breeze.
"It's almost eleven o'clock in the middle of the night, and my father is still singing online with a broken voice in front of the computer. I tossed and turned in bed and couldn't sleep. I'm really upset. There will be a Chinese exam tomorrow ... 2. Start with a noise. " Pida, Pida.
"There are dull and lazy footsteps in the quiet stairs at night. Dad must have come back from playing mahjong. He may have lost badly this time ... You can also use dialogue, piano, wind and thunder. Anything that can make noise can be a start. Six, from one thing to another.
Every time I go back to school after school, I think of my father when I see an old and permanent bike parked downstairs. It was this bike that he used to send me to kindergarten ... 7. Let's talk about the results first.
My family is having dinner, and my father is watching TV while eating. He suddenly stood up and shouted, "Bingo, Bingo.
"It turned out that he won the lottery of 5 million. The whole family danced, laughed and cried, and everyone was so happy that they didn't know where to put their hands and feet.
My father's fascination with lottery began ten years ago ... these five methods can be derived from various methods. If these methods are used well, the beginning of the composition will become easy, and the composition will catch people and be vivid and colorful. Typical start: 1, flashback always begins.
Explain the results first, and always start with the full text. Exodus 1: Thank God and bless the Bodhisattva! This terrible big German shepherd was finally taken away from the campus by his master.
The students gave a long sigh, and a hanging heart fell back to its original place like a stone. "Terrible Big Wolf Dog" Example 2: The classmate who won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school was actually Feng Guangze, and the principal of the school gave him an award.
"Wow," the audience suddenly burst into thunderous applause. This troublemaker's.
4. The heroic composition in my mind should be written in a comparative way at the beginning. How to write "My Hero Gold"? I believe that everyone has his own hero in his heart! But my hero is a helpful hero-Lei Feng! I admire Lei Feng very much. I remember everything he did. One thing impressed me the most. I remember one day in May, 196 1, Lei Feng went to Dandong on business and left the company at five in the morning. On the way to Fushun Railway Station, I saw a sister-in-law carrying a child and catching up with a six-or seven-year-old girl in her hand. None of them wore raincoats. The little girl was covered in mud because she fell into the mud pit and cried as she walked. Seeing this situation, Lei Feng immediately thought that the purpose of our army is to serve the people wholeheartedly, and the difficulties of the masses are my difficulties. Lei Feng hurried forward, took off his raincoat, put it on his sister-in-law, immediately picked up the little girl and walked to the railway station together. Lei Feng bought her a ticket and got on the train together. When Lei Feng saw the little girl, her clothes were not dry at all, and her hair was still dripping, making her tremble with cold. Lei Feng's clothes were wet, so he quickly unbuttoned his coat, thinking that the sweater next to his body was still dry, and immediately took it off and put it on the little girl. I heard that the mother and son came out without eating in the morning, and Lei Feng gave them three steamed buns he had brought. At nine o'clock in the morning, the train arrived in Shenyang, and Lei Feng led the train. The three of them have been sent out of the station. Lei Feng's spirit has a great influence on me. It has taught me to be willing to help the workers who are in trouble around me, to take the initiative to help the poor students in my class, and to learn from Lei Feng's spirit of not being afraid of hardship and fatigue. My hero is a helpful hero-Lei Feng.
5. The beginning and end of the composition describing the characters are half of the Chinese exam, which can't be ignored.
How to attract the attention of the marking teacher? I think creating a wonderful beginning and ending is the most critical link. So how to guide students to write the beginning and the end? The author summarizes several methods to share with you in teaching practice.
■ Method 1: Imitate the sentences in modern poetry. [Example 1] Sometimes, the pursuit is a short wooden bridge, with troubles at one end and happiness at the other.
Sometimes, the pursuit is a graceful lotus with ugliness below and beauty above. Sometimes, the pursuit is a cup of strong coffee, bitter outside and sweet inside.
(Beginning) [Comment] The young author obviously copied the poem "Homesickness" written by Yu Guangzhong, a poet in Taiwan Province, and turned his pursuit into a wooden bridge, lotus flowers and coffee, which was vivid and vivid. ■ Method 2: Quoting poems and compiling poems, that is, cleverly embedding ancient poems into their own expressions.
[Example 2] Chasing the wind, "Good wind, with its strength, send me to Qingyun"; Pursuit is a sword, "a sword blocks a million divisions, wins fame and shows majesty"; The pursuit is water, which "pushes the dance of Qian Fan River, and never stops". Learn to pursue, my friend! Seek and you will find that life is a little happier; Seek and you will find that life is infinitely beautiful.
(End) [Comment] Quoting poetry in an article can increase literary talent and show one's cultural heritage. ■ Method 3: Use parallelism to enhance language potential.
Parallelism is not only rich in formal beauty, relaxed rhythm beauty and Wang Yang's imposing beauty, but also has the functions of concrete and vivid scenes, rigorous and clear explanation, and real and enthusiastic expression of feelings. [Example 3] Learn to pursue, we are the generals who strategize; Learn to pursue, we are the guides who show the way and have lofty sentiments; Learn to pursue, we are the helm of the boat of life; Learn to pursue, be good at pursuing, and be a comfortable and successful modern person.
(End) [Comment] These whole sentences are catchy and lyrical, which can enhance the language potential and have strong appeal. They are a beautiful scenery in the article. ■ Method 4: Clever and vivid use of metaphor.
Metaphor can turn abstract into concrete, abstruse flowers into simple, vivid expression and easy to understand. Life is like a bag of walnuts. When you find that one is broken, don't be angry, don't be discouraged, and look at the next one patiently, because there are both good and bad things in this bag, and there are pains, troubles, happiness and hope in life. I can't give up the opportunity to be happy because of temporary pain. This opportunity depends on us to strive for, discover and pursue.
(Beginning) [Comment] The author compares life to a bag of walnuts. How ingenious and novel it is, it naturally leads to the truth that life is both painful and joyful.
6. The title of the composition at the beginning of the character description: "My father".
First, the direct start method
My father is short, slightly hunched and walks like a cripple. ...
This is the most commonly used and simplest way for students to open it. This straightforward beginning often makes the article seem boring. Here are four vivid ways to open it.
Second, start with a classic sentence.
1, starting with a poem.
"Don't be idle, you will lose your head." My father is over forty and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary. ...
2. Start with a proverb.
There is a saying in China that "three sticks don't fart." My father is a quiet man. ...
You can also use couplets, starting with idioms and so on.
Third, the appearance description begins:
Example 1: My favorite little friend
I have a good friend who is inseparable. Her fleshy little face has a pair of slender arch eyebrows, and there are a pair of watery big eyes under the eyebrows. There is a smooth cherry mouth under the delicate nose. All in all, this is a lovely little face. You know who she is. To tell you the truth, she is my good partner-Zeng Yushu.
Example 2: My favorite person
My favorite person-mother. Mom is tall, fair-skinned, thin but not thin, plump but not fat, with thick curved eyebrows and big bright eyes, always shining with wisdom. This is my mother. How's it going? She looks beautiful.
1, appearance description+opening features:
Example 1: My grandma
My grandmother is a middle school teacher. She has bright eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her chubby body is always so busy. Grandma is very serious and responsible for her work, and I admire her very much.
Example 2: My father
My father is tall and thin, with two thick eyebrows and a pair of particularly round eyes, always shining with wisdom and alertness. He can sometimes make people feel humorous. He is only in his early forties, and his black hair has somehow fallen off very little. What I respect and admire most is his fighting spirit.
7. A work that describes the beginning and end of a character.
1, Flashback always begins. Explain the results first, and always start with the full text.
Exodus 1: Thank God and bless the Bodhisattva! This terrible big German shepherd was finally taken away from the campus by his master. The students are very long
With a sigh, a hanging heart fell back like a stone. Terrible big German shepherd.
Exodus 2: The classmate who won the honorary title of "Little Master of Civilization" in this school is actually Feng Guangze, and the principal of this school is Qian.
Award awards. "Wow," the audience suddenly burst into thunderous applause. What a change this troublemaker has made!
What a surprise
2. suspense. Ask questions to arouse the appetite of readers.
Who is she? That skirt, that beautiful little face, looks so familiar. My cousin
3. Lyrics always start. I began to express my feelings through the scenery, and then I always started the full text.
Example: childhood is like a river, rippling with joy in the morning sun. It's really interesting to catch cockroaches at the seaside in the crisp autumn season. Interesting things by the sea
4, always like people. Write a general sentence first, and then describe the appearance of the characters.
Exodus: My brother is really cute. A pair of big eyes are embedded in a small round face, and when you smile, you will see two.
Dimple. My little brother.
5. Portrait always begins. Write a description of the characters' appearance first, and then quote the full text in the general sentence.
Example: Open the photo album and there she is: short black hair, rosy mouth, arch eyebrows, naughty smile.
Look at that. She is a lovely and earnest Li Xiaohong. My classmate
6. The sound always begins. I began to write "songs, laughter, wind and rain" to pave the way, and then I have been writing the full text.
Example 1: "Only mothers are good in the world, and children with mothers are precious." Whenever I listen to this song, my eyes turn to me.
Show your mother's shadow, unforgettable mother
7. Compare the total tense. Compare many things with people and one of them or one thing, and highlight one of them.
Exodus I have almost forgotten my childhood. Only one thing looks like a knife, and I will never forget it. Unforgettable event
8. Cut to the chase. Tell people and things directly.
Example: On Saturday again, I braved the cold to go home and met my grandfather. Grandpa's crutch
9. Scene import.
Example: The blue water is under your feet, there are groups of seabirds flying outside the window, and there are large reeds growing on the beach. Qiang Qiang's favorite grandpa's cabin is here. An ordinary reed leaf, after three folds and two rolls by grandpa, became a reed flute playing melodious tunes. Grandpa's reed flute
Second, the end.
1, summarizing anaphora. This is the most commonly used ending. At the end of the paper, the full text is summarized, the center is pointed out, and the topic and the beginning are taken into account.
Example 1: Please! The owner of the German shepherd must take good care of this terrible German shepherd. This is really terrible.
Today, I am often awakened by this terrible big German shepherd in my sleep.
Ex 2: What a surprise! Yesterday's troublemaker, today's Feng Guangze won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school. Isn't this warm applause a heartfelt admiration for him? What a surprise
2. perception. Write your own inspiration by writing about people and things.
Example: The teacher smiled and laughed happily. I have always realized that the best gift for students to give their teachers is to keep working hard and making progress! a present
3. Natural style. End naturally with the result of things.
Exodus: I learned to ride a bike and felt like honey. I learned to ride a bike.
4. Lyric style. Express your feelings in a lyrical way.
Example: ah! Teachers are selfless candles, burning themselves and illuminating us;
Ah! Teachers are ordinary bridges, sending off groups of students without complaint.
5. Memory type. Write down the people or things you don't want to forget and keep them in your heart forever.
As if it happened yesterday, my concern and love for my parents are unforgettable. Parents who are far away from home, please give me more advice.
Take care, son, you will live up to expectations. Parental love
6. Lenovo. Draw associations from the people and events written and write your feelings.
8. How should the composition start in my eyes? My name is Liu Dieyu, an ordinary little girl who belongs to the dragon.
I, a tall man who is not outstanding in appearance, cut a "mushroom head" of super Kawaii. Let people know at a glance that I am a lively and cheerful sunshine girl.
I have a wide range of hobbies: I like swimming, reading books and surfing the Internet.
Among them, I like reading best. I read books and forget all about eating and sleeping. My mother bought some books that day. I was so excited that I immediately picked up the book and read it hungrily. From time to time, I laugh at the humorous events in the story and cheer for the heroes in the book. I was so fascinated by reading that I forgot the time. Suddenly, my mother shouted in the next room, "10: 30, why don't you sleep?" "Wait, it will be ready soon!" I closed the book reluctantly. When mom came back to her room. He looked up again. Mother saw that the light in my room was still on and came to see me again. "ah! This little book fan doesn't sleep enough if he doesn't sleep! " Mom said "pa" and turned off the light. Helpless, I had to go to bed.