1. Parents are good at recording their children's poems with flashes of light.
Sometimes, the sentences that children inadvertently say are poems, and listeners (especially parents) will miss them unintentionally. Because children's world is different from that of adults, children's language is also different from that of adults. I remember Mr. Feng Zikai said that turning a child into an adult is like turning a caterpillar into a butterfly, and the life of a caterpillar is very different from that of a butterfly. Mr. Feng warned adults: "When dealing with children, don't put wings on caterpillars and teach them to fly with butterflies;" Instead, butterflies should fold their wings and crawl with caterpillars. "Children are born poets, but adults have lost their ears to listen to poetry. I hope parents can care for their children's "poetic heart" and understand their "poetic spirit". Please carefully record the sentences with children flashing. Don't crush one carelessly, just like "swatting mosquitoes", because you may accidentally kill a child's poetic heart! ?
I like painting.
Li Shuyu
Multicolor pigment
This is my sorcerer's stone
I want to be on the ceiling
Draw a blue sky with a high slope.
Go and fly a kite.
Fly to the horizon to see the sea.
Brother Hao often reads children's poems and nursery rhymes to Yu Shu. This poem was read by Yu Shu on the high slope of Huaxi, so free. Parents pay attention to the records and will see their children's poems and paintings. This constant creative impulse is also the source of good poetry writing.
2. Write a poem by observing the picture.
Children all like colors. When they are tired of studying, a colorful painting can also be used as a pastime. The picture here can be a picture book, a painting, a photo, or even a scene in life. It is a poem, recording what they observed and related to the truth. For example:
light
Cai xintong
The lamp illuminates me, so I'm not afraid.
Every room has thousands of lights and warmth.
They are like many bright little eyes.
Look at me and stay with me silently.
There is a lamp shining in the future.
Like infinite hope.
Bring the world to my heart
radiate brilliant light
This poem comes from the young author's observation and association with the illustrations of Children's Poetry. For children who have just started writing poems, the advantage of this book is that they can not only read excellent poems, but also practice illustration.
3. Create poetry from imitation.
It is difficult for a child to write a poem for the first time with depth and strength. They can start with formal imitation. We should allow children to learn and imitate and encourage them to take the first step in poetry. Children's poetry contains refined language, vivid words, rich imagination and pure childlike innocence. , charming. It is the most suitable composition for primary school students to learn language, and it is also the best enlightenment teaching material for training primary school students' language. The outstanding works of famous people include: Stars by Bing Xin, Fountain by Tagore, Moon Collection by mistral, Mother by Sai Walter, etc. They all give great and affectionate love to the weak life. These poems combine childlike innocence, love and poetic heart so perfectly and harmoniously. Children's poetry mentioned above is also a good choice. Of course, there are a lot of classical poems. It is the best way to pass on these excellent poems to children by reading aloud, because poetry is the art of rhythm. In reading aloud, accumulate words. Sometimes poetry just blurts out.
spring
Jia
The sun shines brightly in spring.
The branches are dotted with small flowers.
Walking in a sweat.
So tired, so tired.
Get drunk in the shade of a tree
Although this little poem doesn't strictly follow the melody like a dream, it has mastered the rhyme law and is full of childlike innocence. I happened to see this scene on my way home, so I can say it with rhythm. This is also because of reading more and accumulating more.
When one day the children lost this imitation crutch, they began to create. For example:
Moon, don't be old.
Cai ranran
moon
You are a poet's favorite.
You are the hometown of travelers.
look up
* * * Moonlight
Even though we live far away.
You guard the hearts of lovers.
Let the birds smell good there.
You soothe the sadness of leaving people.
Let it be full of light
moon
You are too affectionate.
I'm really afraid that you will get old.
what can I do?
Take advantage of this charming moonlight
I want to sit down and talk to you.
Moon, the sacred goddess in China's poems, I am not worried that children will face the vulgar problem of poetry appreciation in the future. "What does the intention of the moon represent in the poem?" Today, children have realized that Hometown of Travelers is a wonderful poem. I believe this is the experience after the accumulation of classical poetry.
Fourth, even if the poem is finished?
Poetry is a craft that needs to be carved repeatedly. When correcting students' poems, I saw that many poems were written casually, and even the typos were not changed. Because poetry is limited by space, even great poets are cautious about their own poems. In order to get the ideal effect, the poet had to make complicated efforts, just like Flaubert spent five days writing a page. Just like Oscar Wilde, he thought about his poems in the garden all morning, and the result was that the period was removed. Just like when Wang Anshi writes every word, he must weigh it carefully, weigh it out on the scale and sift it out from the sieve: Spring breeze has come, passed, entered, full and green Jiang Nanan! Only then can the final word "green" be wonderful. Therefore, parents are advised to guide their children to read more poems and learn to chew them repeatedly after writing. Mr. Zhu Guangqian said: On the surface, talking about words is just weighing the weight of words, but in fact it is about adjusting thoughts and emotions. Finding the words that best express one's thoughts and feelings is approaching a good poem. Sometimes you can even write classic poems. For example:
Thunder on the mountain
Arrive in Yoo Hyun.
The thunder on the mountain rolled like a drum.
Sleeping there, where does the music come from?
I don't need a guide, I know the way myself.
Remember that I am your servant, day and night.
The gunfire was loud and the lights were dim.
The sun is still shining and the north wind is still whistling.
For God's sake, have pity on yourself.
The first four lines of this poem are very good. We like the gentle spring rain and the wind blowing in the forest. The first four lines let me see the rolling thunder that loves nature. "Sleep there, where music comes from", and use ten words to express the relationship between nature and music.
There is no specific way to write poetry. The images, rhetoric, rhythm and prosody in those poetic languages are just skills in the face of true feelings. It is waiting for children to explore and acquire slowly in their future creation. It is our original intention to teach children to touch the world with warm palms and sensitive hearts. Finally, share a song: