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To write a good close-up story, we must first be good at selecting and intercepting wonderful fragments. As long as it is meaningful, it can reflect the characteristics of the characters and the spirit of the times, and even go down in history, such as 1945 Mr. * * to Chongqing written by Peng Zigang, 1949 Boiling Beiping City written by Liu, 1949 Xu Shijie and Li Yongchang.
Some small scenes in life can be thought-provoking and typical, so they can also be written as special stories. For example, When You Are Sleeping written by Xinhua News Agency reporter 1957 is a close-up of a group of people who work hard at night. Secondly, the clip itself must be vivid, vivid and even dramatic, otherwise it is not suitable for making special stories to report.
When writing a feature, don't forget the basic requirements of news writing: truthfulness, accuracy and clarity. You can't embellish it in pursuit of vivid images, which goes against objective facts; Don't forget to explain news elements such as time, place, people and things. Because of the interception of fragments, otherwise people will not know when, where and who it happened when reading the full text, and they will lose the function of news to provide facts and information for readers.
2. 10 Among the writing skills, which 1 is most suitable for you to start with an inscription, that is, to write a short paragraph at the beginning as an inscription?
These words can be a summary of the article, an introduction, feelings and other forms. This can enhance the color of the article, start the topic and attract readers.
For example, at the beginning of "China people pass by me", it says: "Gently, you, China people, passed by me, leaving a string of wonderful notes that always surround me, encourage me, inspire me and edify me. The inscription is like the beginning of "Extraordinary-I am a Landscape": "I don't want to live like a question mark, I can't find my own runway in all directions, and now I am running for my dream. -always feel different.
—— Inscription The beginning of these two articles begins with an inscription that dominates the full text. As soon as they came up, they introduced readers into the emotional tone they created and played a leading role. Quoting classics means quoting poems, famous sayings, proverbs, famous sayings and aphorisms from all over the world as the beginning of the article.
This can increase the authority, knowledge, literary talent and profundity of the article, and at the same time play the role of ornament and decoration. This kind of accusation has two forms: direct accusation and indirect accusation.
For example, "The Taste of Jiangnan" begins: "The passionate Jiangnan haunts the dreams of many literati. No wonder Zheng Chouyu said,' I have walked through the south of the Yangtze River, and the appearance in the season is like the opening and falling of lotus flowers.
Full of love gave the hibiscus out of the water. "This is to quote famous prose as the beginning, which has played a very good role.
Another example is the beginning of "We are Hope": "I tried to shine for a moment/it was a flame that flashed across the horizon/I came to see you, I was desperate/I was here/it was here/it was as short as a surprise/as gorgeous as summer flowers". This is a new poem quoted at the beginning of the article. There are also lyrics quoted as the beginning, such as "Echo of the Soul": "Walking in all directions, the road is far away, the water is long, the mystery is boundless, and the village is endless." This kind of beginning can change with the times. It is a wise choice to quote the most familiar lyrics according to the needs of the content and the center.
The first is the description of the environment, including the description of the natural environment and social environment. And these descriptions have a specific role, or contrast the mood of the characters, or explain the background of the story, or render a certain atmosphere and so on.
In short, they are all to highlight the theme. For example, the beginning of "Remember Father's Pale Face": "The night is so quiet, and the soft moonlight is scattered everywhere; Night, so deep, my father's snoring echoed all night like a moving moonlight song.
Looking at my sleeping father's face, my thoughts drifted into the holy night sky-"This description of the night implies the author's deep gratitude to his father, so this description of the environment was very successful at the beginning, which brought us into the silence of the night and let us recall it with the author." Today, I am really happy. Night has fallen, in the deep blue sky. People in the street walked in twos and threes, and cheerful laughter broke out from time to time.
"This kind of environmental description combines nature and human activities, giving us a quiet night and a feeling of harmony, happiness and happiness. Starting with a parallelism sentence means starting with a group of parallelism sentences that can highlight the center, have neat sentence patterns, are magnificent and have profound meanings.
This can give readers a sense of unity, help highlight that strong and explosive emotion, and play a deterrent role in bullying potential people. For example, "Discovery, the Totem of Life" begins: "There is always such a totem, which is full of the flash of life; There are always such people, out of unique history and culture; There is always such a discovery, which engraves people's hearts and never rusts. "
Another example is the beginning of Chinese, my best friend: Chinese is like a cool and sweet spring. Drinking spring water will make my mind delicate. China people like the boundless sea. Listening to the sound of the sea will broaden my mind.
Chinese is like white snow. Appreciating the snow will make my heart noble. At the beginning of the above article, the sentence pattern is neat, the structure is rigorous, and the momentum is domineering, giving people a sense of beauty.
Starting with lyrical language is to express strong feelings at the beginning, and first mobilize the emotional factors of readers. This can grasp the reader's heart, improve the reader's interest in reading, lay a solid emotional tone for the article, and achieve the effect of moving people with emotion.
For example, I want to say "thank you" at the beginning: "When I saw this composition topic, I was so excited that I couldn't control myself. I want to thank my mother for raising me. " At the beginning of the article, I expressed my gratitude to my mother directly and sincerely.
Another example is the beginning of "Black Eyes, Black Hair": "I want to be ashamed, but I don't have a clear outline for a person who appears most frequently and is familiar with me in my life. In my memory, she is like a stone, she can bear hardships and stand hard work, and she has excessive physical strength.
Therefore, what she has done for me is natural, because she is my mother and has a responsibility to me. At the beginning of the article, I was said to be "ashamed". Why? Then he expressed his guilt for his mother in lyrical language.
It can be seen that this kind of opening is easy to produce emotional sounds with readers, arouse some emotions similar to the article hidden in readers' hearts, and achieve the purpose of emotional people. Start with suspense, deliberately set up a mystery, but deliberately ignore it, or make some guesses to arouse readers' curiosity and let readers continue to pay attention to the development of the event.
This kind of writing can bring readers into a specific situation and share joys and sorrows with the author. For example, at the beginning, there were many "curious" students in the class with endless questions.
After class, self-study in the afternoon, and even after school, we can always see them busy going in and out of the teacher's office, from a whole question to a punctuation mark, asking questions about every detail. If students don't understand, ask them, and then answer them: a gentleman's learning is bound to be easy to ask.
A gentleman's learning is to ask questions constantly, which is very good. How can he learn without asking questions? But I can't help wondering: Q, is it really good to have a few more months? At the beginning of the article, "The more questions, the better?" Of course, each of us has our own problems.
3. How to embody the close-up composition teaching courseware? But she is just a busy housewife, such as "choosing dishes with relish"
(3) Finally, we should also set a tone for the characters, be clumsy and be willing to practice with them. Go to a pen meeting in other places, such as "the manuscript fee naturally turned into chicken soup and flowed into my stomach", sitting in an old cane chair and saying "Oh, my God", and several things (2) Try to write about the character: The characteristic of this article is to write about several things about a person.
You can also write letters to people who have impressed you, and cover the door lightly. This "gain" can still compensate for the "loss", even if she cooks at home. People who write like this often have something to write. She patiently waited for me to grow up, or led me to grow up. Her pen stubbornly moved forward and solved the problem of "who to write". My mother made a bookcase specially for me. Her name is more misleading, but her inspiration is still in the smoke in the kitchen.
When mom smiles and prepares chicken soup? "Mom speaks amazingly, clamoring for mom to smile at me, and the taste is weak. Watering, several people doing one thing, getting along with each other day and night, someone asked her mother. Put down the basket.
The author's language also has some skills, but it only shows his son's deep affection for his mother, focusing on his "celebrity" mother's normal heart, and the mother is often full of flowers. My mother Shu Ting tasted it and had a rest.
Preschool class Generally speaking, I'm not impressed.
Avoid recording things: each person does one thing, supports the old wooden table with his elbow, and the pen tip begins to scratch gently on the paper, "decisively throwing concentrated chicken essence", spilling too much. The largest proportion is actually more than 20 pots of roses, and each person has several things: writing a person's requirements. After a period of time, maybe the appearance is more characteristic, that is, which aspect of personality is shown.
A brief comment Of course: (1) First of all, you have to choose a suitable object for your mother to enjoy. From time to time, she described the behavior of the characters in a relaxed and playful style, and found that the soup was too weak, "soaking mountains and rivers and mother."
Unexpectedly, the hand shook: poet, kind, flowing out of poetry, clear-cut. 4. Only in the event can the characters really "live". Sometimes, she is stubborn, and it is best to choose the person she knows best. This is actually a matter of material selection. They don't seem to be out of touch, watering flowers and raising children, and there are other typical examples to write. These people may have distinct personalities. I am proud to have such a mother. My mother wears 1800-degree myopia glasses and chooses dishes with relish from time to time. As long as conditions permit, my books are increasing day by day.
As for books and periodicals, eyebrows and beards grabbed a lot of information; In the narrative process, we should cultivate our feelings for nature, how to write a good person (1), put the characters in the event to write, never leave our "home" and look at the hazy sky with deep myopia, such as parents. The standard of material selection is typical.
Third, it is beneficial to show the personality characteristics of the characters, and there are well-known wives and mothers among relatives and friends. My mother is a writer, and some take English classes: "Learn to play, but not".
Secondly, I wrote about my mother's intellectual identity and behavior, which can show the mental outlook of the characters and the flash of the washing machine from trivial things. I envy my mother's sweet smile when she looks at flowers. Add more water quickly. I want to have everything. I am busy adding salt, such as "1800 degree myopia glasses". My mother specially built a wall for me as a pillar. "
I want to be an excellent writer. In the noisy vegetable market.
The author chose to buy food and cook around this center. Some children in the neighborhood learn piano, highlighting the center 3, and "slender fingers": "What do you want Chen Si to learn, my mother always takes pains to bring it to me. Suddenly.
Mother let out a cry and jumped up from the chair. Characters' personality characteristics and ideological morality always "pop up at once" at a specific time, writing about their mother's personality characteristics, "breaking into the kitchen for emergency rescue and disaster relief" and sitting at the same table.
Otherwise, it is off topic or tune, indifferent, so everyone likes her. Remember that the outline of the character is salty.
(3) Pay attention to the voice and appearance of the characters. Mother gently with slender fingers, so it is the easiest to write well and know their situation best. Her decisive throwing of concentrated chicken essence is conducive to revealing the ideological quality of the characters, and naturally she will not only "cheat" in chicken soup.
Serve. Sometimes I take time off to write a few articles, which makes my mother proud for a long time. Maybe I had a fierce conflict with myself. My mother's cooking can also be called "exquisite", so I can taste and bargain. I am outside the "pots and pans".
The author attaches great importance to the observation and appreciation of the "famous" mother's normal heart. Many people have the illusion that their elbows are propped up with an old mahogany table. She is not disturbed by "name".
It seems that I am afraid of waking up the "dowry child". I heard that in her dowry, she soaked the mother and son in the mountains and rivers.
Mom can't be "helpless", writers are all idle clouds and wild cranes. My famous mother is calm and clumsy.
When she panted up the stairs with a big vegetable basket. Mother never "urges" her son Jackie Chan and her own proposition 2.
I want to play football. Maybe I have seen some unusual behaviors with my own eyes. To write uniqueness, we should start from the following aspects and write a good article about people.
Form. (2) Next, you should choose "things" related to the characters.
Once. The manuscript fee naturally turned into chicken soup and flowed into my stomach, so it is very important to choose "things". Opening the window, the description of manners and etiquette was solemnly spread out: 1, my French uncle took a few sips, and a French scholar came to my house as a guest.
Four. When I was a child, I joked that she came back from studying market economy and praised China chicken soup for its delicious taste.
This should have a "number" in mind when choosing materials. If you want to break into the kitchen to "rescue and provide disaster relief", don't pull weeds with a soft face, be concise, and don't disturb the people with "name". My mother also complains that housework takes up too much of her time. My mother took off her glasses, and finally I became 150 degree myopia, practicing calligraphy.
4. What are the composition skills of primary school students: 1. The characteristic of the step-by-step method is that it can describe the building step by step, constantly change the foothold and observation point, and observe and describe the building in many aspects.
Looking at the same building from different angles, we will get different impressions. Therefore, when describing architecture by gradual transformation, it is necessary to make the observation point and foothold clear, so that readers can understand from which angle the architectural image you described is seen.
Otherwise, it is easy to confuse readers. Secondly, when describing architecture with the method of gradual transformation, we must grasp the most important features of architecture to write.
If described in a comprehensive way, the article can easily become a running account. 2, the characteristics of the introduction method When using the introduction method to describe architecture, we must first pay attention to the center identified in the article to make necessary explanations and introductions, and avoid rambling.
In the process of explanation and introduction, we should be concise and to the point, and avoid dragging our feet. When describing a building by description and introduction, we should also pay attention to the overall coherence, that is, after description and introduction, the article should return to describing the building and connect with the previous article.
The article should have transitional words or sentences from describing architecture to introducing architecture, or from introducing architecture back to describing architecture. 3. The environmental foil method is characterized by being surrounded by green, and a little red in the middle is particularly bright and eye-catching, so it is said that "a little red in the evergreen."
The proper description of the scenery around the building makes the building stand out. The purpose of describing the scenery around the building is to highlight the building, so it is forbidden to write close-ups without leaving the building when describing the scenery.
Cause a noise. When describing the scenery around the building, the observation points and footholds should be clearly explained so that readers can understand the location of the building.
4. The characteristic plants described by colored pencils are always composed of roots, stems, leaves, flowers and fruits. When drawing with colored pencils, write down the most important features of roots, stems, leaves, flowers and fruits, and write down their shapes and colors.
When describing plants in this way, you should observe them carefully. It is necessary to distinguish the colors of various parts of plants, which are also red, and to distinguish whether they are fiery red or pink; It is also yellow, whether it is orange or gold; It is also green, whether it is green or light green ... carefully distinguish the shape characteristics of each part; It is also a flower, and it is different from a blooming flower.
After careful observation and detailed description, the reader seems to see a color photo of a plant. To describe plants in this way, we should also use appropriate metaphors to write our own feelings.
5, the combination of far and near features the same plant, far and near are different. This is the same as taking pictures. If you put it in front of the camera and away from it, the size of the photos taken will be different.
Using the method of combining distance and distance to describe plants can reflect the characteristics of plant morphology and color from different angles and give readers a perfect impression. When describing plants in this way, the observation point should be clearly explained, that is, far or near.
Secondly, we should pay attention to the order of narration, from far to near, or from near to far, so that the article can be coherent. 6. The characteristic of time series transformation method is that the shapes and colors of various parts of plants change with seasons.
If we write down the characteristics of plants in different seasons and explain the relevant situation clearly, it is equivalent to taking color photos of plants in different periods. After reading this set of color photos, readers will have a more comprehensive understanding of it.
When describing plants with time series transformation method, we should first pay attention to the data accumulated at ordinary times. We should carefully observe the same plant in different seasons in a planned way, and write down the observation diary, so that we can choose the accumulated materials when writing and write good articles.
Secondly, we should pay attention to the continuity of observation. 7. Characteristics of the growth change method Plants always have to grow, and generally go through stages such as germination, branching, long leaves, flowering and fruiting.
If we compare the shape, color characteristics and growth of plants at different stages, it is like making a small movie for this plant. Readers can understand the whole process of plant growth through reading in a very short time.
To describe plants with the method of growth change, we should first pay attention to writing down the most prominent changes in the process of plant growth; Secondly, it is necessary to explain the reasons, situations and processes of plant changes; In addition, we should pay attention to writing it down in an orderly manner in chronological order. 8. Characteristics of Extended Association Method When we see a plant, we often associate it with other things, which often have something in common with this plant.
For example, when we see cotton peaches, we think of white snowflakes, because snowflakes and cotton are the same color; When we see a big watermelon, we think of basketball, because watermelon and basketball are similar in shape; We see pine trees with lush ice in the snow and think of heroes who are not afraid of torture and never bend their knees before the enemy. That is the similarity in quality between pine trees and heroes. When describing plants by association, we should pay attention to the main characteristics of plants and expand our imagination.
To improve one's associative ability, one must first study hard, understand life and store rich knowledge in one's mind. Secondly, think hard and train hard to make yourself rich in imagination.
9. Highlighting the characteristics of key methods Plants are always composed of roots, stems, branches, leaves, flowers and fruits. When we describe a plant, we can describe its roots, stems, branches, leaves, flowers and fruits, or we can only describe a certain part of the plant.
When we focus on describing a plant, we must first find out what makes this plant different. Secondly, it is necessary to describe the part that best reflects the characteristics of this plant from many aspects such as color, shape and smell.
In addition, personification, metaphor and other methods can be used appropriately. 10, comparing the characteristics of comparative method, as the saying goes: "You don't know the flat land until you see the high mountain."
The characteristics of things are often revealed in comparison. When we describe plants, we often highlight their characteristics by comparison.
There are two methods of comparison. One is to compare this plant with another plant; One is to compare two obvious characteristics of plants themselves.
Pay attention to the plants to be described when using the comparison method.
5. Ten tips on how to write a good composition and ten tips on how to write a good composition easily.
Tip 1: The writing score depends on the handwriting, and the scoring factor comes first.
In any form of composition examination, when the marking teacher marks the paper, at first glance, it is handwriting. Therefore, writing a composition must be done well. Remember, the composition is about content, not calligraphy. Don't scribble.
Tip 2: Write five or six paragraphs in the exam composition, and mark the papers neatly.
Pay attention to timely segmentation in exam composition, with three or four paragraphs appearing less and eight or nine paragraphs appearing trivial. Unless there are special circumstances, five or six paragraphs are better. In addition, the roll surface must be neat and tidy, and don't arbitrarily alter it. In my opinion, it is best not to exceed five lines in each paragraph of the exam composition, and at most five and a half lines. Do nothing. Once the visual fatigue of the marking teacher affects his psychology, his score will be affected.
Tip 3: Color contrast is also the key. It is suggested to choose blue with a pen.
The test papers are all black printed squares. Students are advised to write their compositions with a neutral blue pen that is neither shallow nor deep, and the strokes are neither thick nor thin. This kind of composition is written, which forms a certain visual contrast with the black box, and has a bright feeling in the eyes, which may be the advantage of the score. When writing a composition, it is recommended to occupy three quarters of the bottom of the box or the lower left corner, so that it looks good.
Tip 4: the beginning and the end should be concise, preferably two and a half lines at the beginning and the end.
In addition to avoiding eight or nine lines, "big-headed composition" is also unacceptable. Candidates are advised to write a composition with two and a half lines at the beginning and three and a half lines at the end. There will be instant fatigue in vision, which will also affect the mood of the marking teacher.
Tip 5: write a topic before writing, and the topic should be as beautiful as a beauty.
Examination composition, generally by the candidates themselves, the topic can not be too long, nor too short. There are two ways to raise a topic. First of all, you can go to Baidu to search for a composition topic, and you can find similar skills that the composition teacher said. Second, parents or candidates should turn over the bound volumes of Reader and Youth Digest in the last year, select dozens of wonderful topics according to the subject matter, and memorize them, so that they may be used in the exam.
Tip 6: punch holes at the beginning and end of the composition to make it colorful and bright.
There are many ways to start an exam composition: six elements, inscription, suspense, quotation, parallelism, personification, questioning, antithesis, metaphor antithesis, combined rhetoric, clever use of allusions, problem solving, celebrity question and answer, and poetry quotation. At least, when you see the composition, the first seven or eight methods mentioned above will flash in your mind.
The ending is also very important. Generally speaking, the conclusion is a summary of the full text. If it is a narrative, pay attention to lyricism. If it is argumentative, we should pay attention to induction. In any case, it's best to get the topic right. How to deduct? If you are really not sure, tell the title of the first sentence of the last paragraph and then summarize the full text.
Tip 7: Don't panic before you start writing. Think about the topic and make an outline.
In the concrete operation, the outline is very important. For example, when writing a narrative, you should design the beginning and the end, and divide your narrative into several levels. A level is a paragraph, and it would be better if a transitional sentence or paragraph could be set in the middle. When outlining, be sure to write the beginning and end in detail, and what quips, famous sayings, poems and allusions are interspersed in the middle paragraphs, so as to be accurate. A qualified student, make an outline, about 5 to 8 minutes. To master time, the outline should be concise.
Tip 8: Think about the theme and style, neither donkey nor horse is desirable.
Write a composition, narrative or argumentative essay. Generally speaking, it is mostly a "total-sub-total" structure. At the end of the narrative, we should pay attention to lyricism and summing up philosophy. Argumentative papers should be "1-3- 1" or "1-4- 1" with 3 or 4 in the middle, which is a hierarchical problem solving. Of course, you can also use narrative and discussion methods flexibly. However, we should be careful not to say so many examples in the argumentative essay without summarizing the theme, and say too much what we forgot to say in the narrative. Therefore, to write an exam composition, you should think well in advance.
Tip 9: clone and "copy" properly, prepare the materials before the exam and save the information.
Before the exam, candidates are advised to read a lot of model essays and accumulate some structure of the exam composition. You can summarize the outline and routine of writing and recite three or five sentences respectively. For example, there was an Olympic Games the year before last, and last year was the 60th anniversary of the founding of New China, and the touching story of the Wenchuan earthquake. , can be used as the topic of the exam composition.
In addition, there are some nonstandard methods, such as touching stories of other families, which can be moved to their own homes. This should be used flexibly and carefully in the exam.
Tip 10: try to fill the space, and write a little more.
Generally speaking, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination requires no less than 600-800 words. If the requirement is about 600 words, then write 700 words at most. Arrange the paper as reasonably as possible and fill it to about 95%. For example, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination is not less than 600 words, and most of the papers are about 800 words. Then, you should try to write 780 words and leave the last one or two lines.
6. Writing skills What kinds of writing skills generally belong to artistic expression skills (that is, artistic skills and expression techniques, as well as expression techniques (skills))? Common ones are: exaggeration, contrast, metaphor, personification, suspense, concern, association, imagination, combination of suppression and suppression, combination of point and surface, combination of static and dynamic, combination of narration and discussion, blending of scenes, comparison and contrast, bedding and support.
Expression is common narration, description, lyricism, discussion and explanation. (In fact, it also belongs to artistic expression).
Rhetoric is a common metaphor, contrast, analogy, duality, metonymy, exaggeration, intertextuality, pun, rhetorical question, repetition, irony and quotation.