-Zhang Xiaofeng's Nostalgia in Spring.
Appreciation: Zhang Xiaofeng's personification makes my heart beat. I think of the spring in my home and the picture of birds soaring in the sky. The author compares birds to bad mathematicians, measuring the sky. This magical imagination impressed everyone, writing about the liveliness and agility of birds and the beauty of spring, and showing the author's love for spring.
When the wind blows, maple leaves fall all over the city, and the endless maple leaves fall, and the next season will be yellow rain. In autumn, people step on it and wear it in their hair, which seems to fall on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally. Is it bright gold and gold? The arrival of autumn fills the space between heaven and earth. After the Mid-Autumn Festival, before Halloween, the autumn color is as thick as a layer.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Left Hand Palmprint"
Appreciation: This sentence uses figurative rhetoric, comparing fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid.
Snow-white makes people illusory, cold makes people awake, endless momentum makes people hard to breathe, and cold makes people's eyes sour. However, to appreciate the state of "clouds, when I look back, just behind me, fog, when I entered them, it was gone", you still have to come to China. The humidity in Taiwan Province Province is very high, which is the most ambiguous.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Listening to Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping to express the phonological beauty of words and the Leng Yan and sadness of snow.
A breeze in Xu Lai, the delicate peony suddenly fell, and the gorgeous petals were scattered everywhere. The petals are still bright when they fall to the ground, like the feathers of a big bird being offered to the altar and leaving with a heroic elegy. When the peony does not wither, it either shines on the branches or belongs to the soil. It spans withering and aging, dies from youth and disappears from beauty.
-Zhang Kangkang's "Peony Rejected"
Appreciation: This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device, comparing fallen flowers to feathers, which shows the outstanding charm of peony.
It's raining quietly, only the thin sound of rain. The orange-red house, like an old monk in a bright cassock, was baptized by the rain with his head down and his eyes closed. The wet red brick exudes irritating pig blood, which is in sharp contrast with the green laurel leaves under the wall.
-Zhang Ailing's Autumn Rain
Appreciation: this sentence compares the house to an old monk by metaphor and rhetoric, and writes about the calm and desolate house in the rain.
Time is like a sharp knife-if it is not used properly, it will carve deep lines on a beautiful face, so that vibrant youth will be worn away month after month and year after year; However, if used properly, it can carve an ordinary stone into a magnificent statue. Although Santa Maria Girls' School has a history of 50 years, it is still an ordinary white stone that can only be slightly carved.
-Zhang ailing's "Wish"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and symbolism to write his own view of time. Time is a knife, and life depends on how well you grasp it.
I couldn't help walking over and holding a maple leaf. Wow, it's beautiful! Like a slap, bright red, bright red; Like a fan, flat; Like a blooming flower, it will never fade! Before I left, I picked up a green maple, which I will cherish forever. It is a symbol of youth, beauty and passion!
-"Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and parallelism to write the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, showing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.
A few friends, drawing bamboo shadows by moonlight, one you draw and the other I draw. The parameters are different, bright and dark, which actually means Chinese painting. Perhaps, art and beauty are contained in children's childish activities. Have you ever had a similar experience?
-Feng Zikai's Bamboo Shadow
Appreciation: A few strokes, writing scenes of several friends painting, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.
The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like flowing rivers. It seems that all life in the world should come by appointment. At this moment, in the sunshine as transparent as honey, they cheered at the same time and rotated at the same time, turning into countless floating points.
Appreciate: Use figurative rhetoric to compare flowers to rivers. The language is exquisite and appealing, and the words are full of love for tung flowers, which makes readers seem to see the beautiful scenery of tung flowers all over the mountains.
10 New Year's Eve. An old man stood at the window. He raised his eyes sadly and looked at the sky. Stars float on the quiet lake like emerald lilies. The old man looked down at the ground again, and several lives more hopeless than himself were heading for their graves. On the way to that place, the old man has spent sixty summers and winters.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor to describe the star very vividly, compares the star to a lily, highlights its cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to a lake, writing its calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am dying, reflecting my regret.
Respondent: windinwillow | Level | 201-10-1515: 36 | Report.
1 was taken by Xi Murong from Tonghua.
After the deep call, the whole world was shrouded in the shadow of snow-white flowers.
The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like flowing rivers. It seems that all life in the world should come by appointment. At this moment, in the sunshine as transparent as honey, they cheered at the same time and rotated at the same time, turning into countless floating points.
Such an afternoon full of white flowers always feels deja vu, and always feels that it is an aggregation that can be put into any kind of time and space. It can be put into the Book of Songs, Chu Ci, classicism and post-impressionism-there should be such an afternoon and such an early summer in any beautiful record of mankind.
Appreciate:
This passage depicts the beautiful scenery of tung flowers in full bloom with vivid and beautiful brushstrokes. The combination of vision and hearing, dynamic and static, is full of vitality and movement. The author compares the prosperous and blooming scene to a flowing river, and compares the sunlight to alcohol and honey, and describes this scene beautifully. The last sentence strengthens the language situation, making people feel the vitality of the eruption when tung flowers are in full bloom, as if the whole hillside is covered with tung flowers, and the tension of life is infinitely extended.
The author's imagination is full of romantic dreams.
2 Excerpted from Autumn Rain by Zhang Ailing.
Rain, like silver-gray sticky spider silk, weaves a soft net and nets the whole autumn world. The world is dark, like the roof of an old house covered with cobwebs. The pile of gray clouds in the sky is like white powder peeling off the roof. Under the cover of this old roof, everything looks extremely dull. The green pomegranates, mulberry trees and vines in the garden only represent the prosperity of the past summer, but now they have become the remains of ancient Roman architecture, shivering in the rustling rain and recalling the glorious past. The color of grass has turned into melancholy yellow, and fresh flowers can no longer be found underground; The delicate daffodils planted outside the dormitory wall hung their heads with tears in their eyes and lamented their poor luck there. Only after two sunny days, they met such a moldy and steaming rainy day. Only the sweet-scented osmanthus in the corner, the branches have been decorated with several precious buds as gold, carefully hidden under the green oval leaves, revealing a little hope of new life germination.
Appreciate:
Sometimes I don't like Zhang Ailing's writing so much. Just like this autumn rain, others will write a warm breath, but she writes in a dark and gloomy way. The brush strokes alone make people feel cold and chilling.
But perhaps this is the charm of Zhang Ailing's writing, flashy and dark, but so real, which has detected the deepest part of people's hearts. This article is meticulous with a pen, and only uses metaphors and personification to write autumn rain vividly, with a dull and lonely color. In this article, full of gray, melancholy, gloomy and sparse, a meaningless funny life, the only glimmer of hope is the low osmanthus tree that nobody cares about.
From the first snow in Zhang Xiaofeng.
Now, the sun has risen, and the fog has gradually dispersed. vilen is green and looks soft, which makes me feel that even if I accidentally fall from this mountain, I won't scratch a piece of skin. If I am bounced twice at most, I will get a green color that can't be washed out by a sock. And the river around the foot of the mountain is also green. It is another kind of green, bright, as if mixed with oil. As for the mountain, it's still green, but it's just a bunch of dark green, which makes people feel that no matter where you start, you can't open a crack. People think that even if you dig it down two floors, its green color will not fade. In addition, my screen window is also green, very light green, really as ethereal as the gauze skirt of ancient beauty under the sunlight. You think, how can I write to you on such a green morning without being full of vibrant green?
Appreciate:
The author fully mobilized his vision and touch, and wrote the green in spring. Metaphors are used in many places, and the images are vivid. I like this passage because it is very warm after reading it. Where does this warmth come from? I think it flowed from those warm words. "Bright", "rich" and "full of vitality" are more poetic and beautiful because they are written for children. The green color in the author's works seems to be alive and flowing, as if it appeared in the letter. I like green, too. I like this piece of green written by the author. Their energy makes people feel happy and hopeful.
4 Excerpted from Zhang Xiaofeng's Autumn in Autumn.
At that time, I was in Nanjing, and I just started to remember some fragmentary things. Beautiful villages often appear in this painting. I quietly walked away from the adults and sat alone on the grass. The plane leaves began to fall and fall, and many mysterious aesthetic feelings fell into my heart together. I was lost at once, and my little heart could hardly bear the excitement. I just picked up a fallen leaf in confusion. The leaves are yellow-brown and curved, like a boat carrying dreams. There are two beautiful phoenix trees beside the boat, which will last for a long time. Every time there is a gust of wind, I shuttle through the rain of fallen leaves and pick up the plane trees all over the ground. There must be one or two buttonwood trees that I didn't pick up sprouting on the grass, right? Twenty years later, I seem to hear the distant west wind and the rustling of leaves in the wind. I can also see those boats carrying dreams, sailing on the grassland, sailing in the hope of a seed.
Appreciate:
This passage expresses the love for buttonwood leaves with beautiful brushstrokes. The onomatopoeic words of "Sasha Vujacic" are vivid and vivid, allowing readers to guess the scene. Mysterious Beauty describes the characteristics of phoenix tree in autumn, which is mysterious and beautiful. Indus leaves are full of infinite charm and beauty in the author's eyes, which is very infectious. The shape of buttonwood leaves is vividly described by metaphor. The author describes the color and shape, and compares the leaves to a ship, which has a side. On the ship's side is a buttonwood tree, which fascinates everyone who looks at it and wants to see this beautiful buttonwood tree. The author has a rich imagination and shows the beauty of autumn to the fullest.
Tea caves are built by mountains and rivers. On the side near the mountain, the wall climbed up the mountain like a long snake. On the waterfront side, there is room to set up a pier by the river outside the city and park a covered boat in the bay. When the boat went down, it took tung oil, green salt and dyed seeds. Upward, cotton, cotton yarn and cloth groceries are transported with seafood. There is a river street across the pier. Most of the houses are on land and half are in water. Because the rooms are limited, those houses are equipped with diaojiao buildings. The river has risen. When the water gradually enters the street, people on the river street use long ladders, with one end on the eaves and the other end on the wall. Everyone cursed and shouted, taking bags, bedclothes and rice jars and walking into the city from the ladder. When the water receded, they went out of the city through the gate. If the water comes particularly hard in a certain year, one place and two places of the diaojiao building by the river will be washed away by the flood, and everyone will look at the city.
-Shen Congwen's Border Town
Appreciate:
Good landscape writing should be concise and full of descriptive power. You can't find gorgeous words in Shen Congwen's pen, but you can clearly feel the outline of the scenery from such brushstrokes. "The wall is like a long snake, climbing up the mountain", and the unspeakable taste complements the faint breath of the article.