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Comments on plant composition. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and vivid language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
2. The article narrates the events in the order of their development. The language is fluent and the level is clear. It seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
4. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, full and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
5. The story is vividly described, and the words and deeds of specific characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and reasonable.
6. Being able to have a reasonable imagination and embody a meaningful philosophy is a good composition.
7. Many excellent sentences in the full text add some literary interest to the article.
This article may not be particularly attractive in plot, but it is still a successful work. First of all, it describes the image of the characters well. Second, the language is vivid and full of life, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.
9. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
10, such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This is really what teachers should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
1 1, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
12, writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as your person. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
13, Wen Neng Yansheng, I think the article is a portrayal of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
Wen neng yi Qing 14. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
15, caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. From the article "Accident", we can see that your heart is not only full of innocence and books, schools, but also endless worries about society. This article is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
16, the language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, which shows the image of a bookworm's bosom friend and the affection between "me" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.
17. We seem to have heard a lot about the topic of fragility of life at ordinary times, and it can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the fields and forests, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter.
18, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
19, the article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key point of the article ….
20. Practicality contains simple and profound philosophy, which is refreshing and exciting.
Plant Composition Review 2 1, quoting classic famous sentences, is more convincing and can express the author's views more forcefully.
2. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.
3. Rich examples, appropriate materials and detailed descriptions are more convincing.
4. The logical reasoning ability is weak, and the evidence is not conclusive enough.
5. Failure to tell the truth, to tell the truth, to create a true personality and to express a unique individual.
6. The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the words are beautiful, the narrative image is vivid and vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.
7. The language is concise, concise, concise, concise, concise and powerful, and a few words can convey the appearance of the characters.
8. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.
9. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.
10, the language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.
Comments on the plant composition 3 1 The main feature of this composition is to narrate specific details, vividly describe the true feelings, and use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to write … vividly, expressing … love for ….
2. The language of the article is easy to understand and close to real life, which makes people feel very cordial to read.
The beginning of the article is novel, which has the effect of affecting the whole body, so that readers will have the impression of … as soon as they meet, and the article will be coherent and form a complete image.
4. The article can describe xx in fresh and interesting language. The lines are full of childhood, childlike interest, laughter and endless laughter, which is a masterpiece. The two characteristics of this article are richer and more vivid.
5. Make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor and personification, and let the readers praise the characters sincerely and deeply at the end as if in a dream.
6. Pay attention to specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this article. The article is good at using metaphors to make it vivid and concrete, which makes people laugh.
7. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing. The beginning of the article is fascinating, attracting readers ... the combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and detailed.
8. A concise and accurate description language of scenery is a natural fusion of touching the scene. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, unpretentious and worth learning.
9. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
10, the end of the article narrates and expresses emotions, which not only takes care of the beginning but also summarizes the full text in one go.
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