Imitation material
You can copy the materials in our hands exactly, and then you can follow the stupid theme. Because the materials are not long enough, Feng Youlan is not enough, Zong Baihua's aesthetic position is not enough, Wu Zuxiang is not witty enough, and Yao Ming is not controlled enough, the Weiming Lake in Peking University will certainly be very lonely. The first four characters and their respective characteristics, they and the great nameless lake, according to this idea, we can imitate: without Tao Yuanming under the hedge of picking chrysanthemums, without the bread moon Li Taibai in my eyes, don't lament Du Fu's people's difficulties, and don't swim in the red cliff and laugh at Su Shi. China's poems must be much paler.
Extended written materials
Among the reprocessed materials, there is a skill expansion writing. The so-called extended writing, at first, is a relatively simple, rough and more universal extension of the material content, thus producing rich and vivid materials. For example, "Wen Tianxiang vowed to do or die with Yuan, and the materials were inflated. Student Operation: Ding Ling captured Wen Tianxiang in the face of the turbulent ocean, lost in thought: barbarians in the north occupied it, hoping to recover lost ground, but they also arrested the RMB that Nanshan also fell into their hands. Refuse to entrust, such as the fugitive who surrendered has inexhaustible wealth and status ... no, no, no, I respect the dignity of An He Song, and everyone who lives should live in an upright way, right? ... extended to writing materials, rich in content and touching in plot. Today is my lonely ocean of blood. Write the key connection between reasonable imagination and development, and be faithful to the theme of the original material.
Compressive material
Sometimes, it is obviously inappropriate to directly quote more content into written materials, but it is essential to use this material. What should I do? Compressing content is complicated. Long-term compression of text material will retain its main content, and if the number is limited, it will be reduced to shorter fragments. The original intention of compression is to keep the theme unchanged, try not to destroy the order of the original material, and only keep the main content at the beginning to be deleted. A clear theme is not important. If there is such a material: Tangshan, 1976, earthquake. A young mother and her children were trapped in the ruins. Mother and baby can survive the disaster in the ruins and feed him with their own milk. So for many days, there was no breast milk. In order to keep the child alive, the extraordinary young mother decided to bite off his fingers, 1 and continue the child's life with her own blood. Through you don't know how long the mother's blood dried up and fainted. However, when the baby was found and rescued by her mother, she never slept again and looked pale. This material tells the story of a young mother's noble maternal love and exchanged her life for her child's life. But the original material is too long, which can compress the theme of "maternal love". For example, in the Tangshan earthquake, mother and son were trapped in ruins. After a few days and nights, my mother's milk is the best. Our child's ordinary mother decided to prolong his life by biting her finger and using her own blood. The mother who was later rescued by the baby has been in a dormant state, and her face is as white as a sheet.
Usually written words are true, and fictional materials express real feelings. It is a text that one really feels, but at the same time, a fair and reasonable "fabrication" in an expensive process is fiction. The article only insists on "truth" and "fiction", not good writing, and the written form of thinking will be seriously hindered and it will be difficult to develop. In fact, novel is the concept of literary creation, and unrealistic "fake" is never the same as so-called fiction, ordinary life in literary creation, and prominent keynote speech. This material can also use the same way to make up the changing process of a student's inner life and inner conflict. The night before, Sima Qian wrote: "Choose" the fictional Sima Qian, and finally choose castration, in order to compile "Tianan-the change of great projects in ancient and modern times". It can be seen that fictional material is completely feasible, but several principles must be mastered: First, the novel must be credible. Fiction is not true, but you must have a credible fictional basis, fictional common sense, not common sense. This novel is original. The innovation of the original material embodies one thing, and the third is that there is a certain plot. The fictional plot is just boring preaching, just to promote the characterization of the plot.
(2) adding multi-angle processing materials
Simple material can strengthen the story. Even if the material is processed to expand the content of the story, such as writing "Waiting for Mom on a rainy day", some stories can be added to enrich it: the mud in the rain negotiation and the heavier rain knocked down to form a pool of mud. It was raining heavily in the street, with small parachutes, but none of them were my mother's. The sound of rain and shouts seems to be mixed with the sound of cars, the sound of earth, and the world is chaotic and vague. I feel very cold, cold to my heart and lungs. What will happen if mom doesn't come? I'm a little worried. It was rainy in Wenzhou, Zhejiang in 2008, so it rained harder and harder. At the same time, I look forward to my mother's eyes through this action and emphasize my concern for his mother.
According to some reasonable similarities of the plump figure of the characters, under certain circumstances, through the detailed description of psychological activities, the character of the language action expands the content that the negative image of the object can express, so as to achieve the purpose of confirming the theme, such as writing a story about a job applicant and encouraging her sensible brother. These materials can only be monotonous, describing characters and plump characters: "Sister, goodbye to the Zhuangyuan River ahead, bark at the Zhuangyuan River, and you will definitely be admitted next year." "I have a Zhang Mingliang face, messy hair and a pair of hopeful eyes. Brother put down the pole, and Li Le boldly said, "Sister, I can call my voice for you. "Brother's hidden lamp is as fair as Shanliwa." (The scenery left in my heart in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province in 2008), the language, movements and psychology of the characters are vivid and concrete descriptions. Field, let the characters plump up, we must carefully analyze the material, find the bright spots of the characters, and interpret the theme deeds. We must focus on the narrative characters of the "running account" type in life.
Conversion angle processing material
Some materials, written by others from our own perspective, will have different effects. "I-Lu You is a patriotic poet, passionate about poetry and hardworking. A happy life is not peaceful, and there will always be stumbling blocks, big and small. We can't lose heart, as the saying goes, "There is no way to recover from the doubts, and there is another village. "By the way, this is my best. Please let me explain the origin of this poem. It should be pointed out that the role of "he" must be replaced at this time, so both language and content are "he".
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(C) the use of several mentality
1。 Explore yin Siwei
The processing material is not random, but the way of this material finds the best starting point. Otherwise, how can we find this breakthrough point for the problem we are dealing with through backward and continuous causal thinking? For example, "The answer is a colorful topic, and we can speculate that the reason is" Why the answer is colorful ",because the perspectives, standards and methods are varied and the world is constantly changing. This is the entry point.
think
The so-called cable, you think about it, is what is the result of consideration as a prerequisite topic, such as the Chongqing examination paper in 2008, that scene, unforgettable examples, can be considered from the following aspects: there are many touching stories, people help each other, there is no gap; The salary after harvest, in applause, is his best reward; People's inner feelings are impacted and produce * * * sounds; The best moment of mankind has been revealed ... so it is no problem to grasp the connotation of the material comprehensively and accurately.
3。 Positive and negative thinking
Sometimes, when analyzing and processing a material, we will highlight the comprehensive and frequently used positive and negative ideas, that is, from the positive and negative aspects of processing materials, if any, we may think that honesty is the foundation of an enterprise, and dishonest behavior cannot have a foothold in social life. Through the analysis of these two aspects, the completeness of this material is listed from two aspects; Think backwards.
College entrance examination composition materials
Material is a new technology of writing, which can be said to be determined by the score of material composition of ability. Many students write a composition with outdated materials and lack of individuality, and even often "crash" with others. According to my investigation, students have not done any materials, but in recent years (except for the special instructions in 2003, the following combinations), the rest are unable to use the college entrance examination and are not smart enough to learn a new material. So how to use existing materials, new ones? Some methods introduced by excellent papers:
The newly cooked dishes are particularly fragrant.
The gist of this method: the freshness of hot spots, especially from life, newspapers and news, grasps the timeliness of rich materials and skillfully uses the theme of the article. This kind of material can not only meet the needs, but also be close to current events. Of course, marking teachers of all ages. Jiangsu left behind The Mystery of Wife and Children, Historical Monument of Zhejiang, An American Marine Corps Soldier, and Feeling and Knowing Things Up Close to Fight SARS, and skillfully used the articles. Zhejiang Wudu Battlefield "reflects the reason why the thrust performance blinded patriotism in the Iraq war launched by the United States. These candidates have a broad vision, pay attention to major events at home and abroad, and skillfully write college entrance examination compositions with fresh materials. Of course, they won high praise. Secondly, this is only because the angle is different when viewed from the side of the ridge, because this method
Key points, novel perspective, especially the boring and decadent magic that changes the writing angle from the habit, the wording of Jiangsu cyclops teacher's grading letter criticized the ugly phenomenon of nepotism from the obvious angle of cyclops. The repentance of Chu in Hebei Province is a surprise. The historical perspective explains the tragedy of Qin Chu's demise and reveals the intimacy and fancy personal feelings of the government, which will lead to the confusion of Donnie Yen blasco. The profound lesson of the national address is that it is novel from the perspective of special people. What about Anhui? The theme of anti-corruption is revealed from the perspective of "bulldog" and "baby". The title of the excellent composition for the college entrance examination in Henan Province begins with: "I am a donkey, 18 years old ..." It is precisely because people wrote "Friends of Donkeys" that the article is interesting. The fairy tale writing method of An and Nanjing culture, represented by the landscape dialogue between Xi 'an and Nanjing, the examinee of Jiangsu college entrance examination, made the anthropomorphic Qinling Yangtze River forget his article and start a dialogue with the wise. This is a unique angle change. The author introduces the cultural differences between Xi 'an and Nanjing from a habitual point of view, and certainly can't score high on the narrative perspective of short-term changes. The biggest advantage is that the written materials can achieve "strange" effects. Looking at strange eyes or familiar things causes a fresh and cool feeling.
Reincarnated
The rewriting and expansion of this method, especially those directly related to the theme materials (usually referring to well-conceived stories and fables), leads to the twists and turns of the plot and the profound meaning of the new story. Chongqing's Special Review, Shandong's Naoko's Suspicion of Neighbors and Sichuan's Fool's Story are rewritten on the basis of original fables and unconventional stories.
It's a wonderful story.
Starting from Lu Xun's "story", many newspapers now have story columns, and the "big talk" in movies and TV shows is "new story"
The essentials of this method: a new (or make up a new plot, or express a new theme). Especially according to literary masterpieces, historical stories, folklore, junior high school texts and stories. There are the following types of subdivision:
Is the conspiracy behind writing called writing? In the form of "Blood and Tears in Zhejiang", after being interviewed by Hyundai, Sun Bin hit back, mainly focusing on two themes: 1. Please chisel both patellas. 2. Pang Juan was killed. It is intended to tell people that intimacy directly affects people's attitude towards things and their handling of things.
Expand the details of the original story, which is just an excuse, that is, the so-called "new wine in old bottles." Zhao Jun's Choice (2002) in Hubei explained Zhao Jun's mental choice. Henan's "trap" bypassed Han Laen's ideological struggle before Cixi's Hongmen Banquet, in order to spread Han Xin's words of "Chasing Han Xin and Xiao He". Han Xi believed that Xiao He relaxed his vigilance, and as a result, "there is no future without leaving Weiyang Palace."
The style of conviction and the original work show different or even opposite stories. The idealist "Hubei Baochai, a bold breakthrough" praised A Dream of Red Mansions and "Dai" belittled "Chai", which made Baochai's inner monologue have the meaning of crying and criticizing. It warns people that people are not intimate. The "new" article was overturned and won the excellent composition "New Biography" and "Peacock Flying Southeast" in Jiangsu College Entrance Examination in 2004 and the ingenious and bold transformation. According to the narrative topic, you need considerable emotion in vivid narration. If you give a new paradox explanation of "such a story" and "wonderful", you will naturally get high marks. Adapting the original story linebr/> Rewrite the formula according to the theme. Health in Hunan Province is "bright". He sang "Guan" and? "There is a new explanation in the history of Shu Han: Liu Bei's unprincipled emotional intimacy will only lead to the tragedy of Shu Han, and Zhuge Liang sighed deeply. Anhui "Who stole the jade pendant? "This nanny is adapted from A Dream of Red Mansions. Gems don't naturally doubt nannies like jade pendants. " Nurses who don't like him suspect that she is a thief ",and the materials meet the technical requirements of topic.br/>. The previous summary is not comprehensive, and it is often written in two basic methods: comprehensive use of time-space transformation method and role dislocation method. Need to write, candidates can not be limited by time, at any time, people and things can enter the article, modern people talk to the ancients, the ancients can enter modern life, write the theme, do not stick to historical facts, reinterpret history and historical figures, so the material will be different, which will naturally attract the attention of teachers.
Note: (1) The "new story compilation" must be backed by materials, and classic works, historical stories, folklore, myths and legends, textbooks or famous people in the plot are all the materials we rely on. To write such an article well, it is a prerequisite to reserve rich materials. Only the familiar characters and stories, the words and deeds of the characters in the story are in the original story, the characters and language, and an episode of the genre continue the basic plot of the original story. The premise of writing a story is to tell a "new story". (2) The familiar purpose of "new" is to write the soul. We must write a new program or express a new theme, and we must understand that it is not. (3) Anchoring the theme, writing your own thoughts and learning from the ancients are the key to success, and the story of the theme is not abandoned! (4) Writing skills of new stories: take a little truth, touch at will, and focus on imagination and fiction (such as psychological activities and detailed explanations). ), but never.
Five, take different synthesis.
Essentials of law: novels. Especially on the basis of real life, we don't object to using body double's fancy, exaggeration, making things out of nothing and other technologies to create and create life. The ability of novels should be the writing skills of high school students, and novels also meet the requirements of "innovation" in college entrance examination composition. The novella "Wise Choice" in Chongqing college entrance examination composition comes from the type of corrupt officials who want to "get rich" before retirement. The Book of Tea in Henan draws on Lao Li's tea drinking habits from the surrounding environment where he lives, and writes that Lao Li knows the changes of his two granddaughters, vividly enlightening people that intimate relationships will affect their cognition of things.
Of course, it is a good article for the latest and most authentic candidates to come up with their own study, life experience, candidates' family and friendship. For example, the Family Life of Kingdee in Gansu Province, which was adapted by Lu Yue in Hubei Province according to the social life symbol of the college entrance examination in 2004, and the Glass Incident in Primary School in Henan Province, Henan must remember the last 45 minutes of excellent composition in Jiangsu Province tomorrow and draw the examinee's face directly from the examination room. This article indicates that people are in favor of this year's composition because of calmness and cleverness. The best material
Be yourself in the short term, or (if applicable) use other people's information, and then your only choice is where to be new!
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February 1 1, CCTV- 1 20:00.
1, Zhu Bangfu month
Acceptance speech: this strange family focuses on the pain in the world and blends the most real feelings in the world. Gray hair, smiling face, gentle and firm old man, his chest is full of difficulties for 40 years, and his crutches are the wings of a family. His shoulders bear the weight of life.
2. Zhuo Lin
Awards: Qiong Ying, a talented woman from the South China on the Loess Plateau, walked with a small drawer for 58 years, and the smoke was in the same ups and downs parade ground. The person she loves never leaves, and love has become a belief. Her love has injected women's firmness, warmth and arms into the rise of a nation.
Award speech: no flesh and blood, but they are all her children. She spread her wings and propped up their sky. Weathered and hungry, everything is blocked, the anti-fatigue ability is poor, and the shoulder hits her home, blood is thicker than water, and family ties surpass family ties. The clearest and truest maternal love in Quancheng.
4. Shen Hao
Award speech: The home included in the Sixth Middle School of the two village officials will always face to face with the peasants and shoulder to shoulder. He left in a hurry and went to a village suitable for building roads, factories and farmland, instead of living with his wife in a young girl's parish. The villagers pressed the red handprint and changed their fate. Today, they collected all his inscriptions with bright red handprints again.
5. Li Ling
Acceptance speech: Everything starts from scratch, from the countryside, from literacy and arithmetic. When others left, so did she. She was still a heavy farmer when others were harvesting. She carries her children's dreams and sows the seeds of hope for her in spring. She is 80 years old.
6 Zhai
Introduction: The ancient fleet sailed for so long that people have forgotten the appearance of the sea. Six hundred years later, the direction he looked at, our ancestors, belonged to him from the east, and he didn't want to conquer. He just wants to realize a dream-sail to the sea and sail to the west! A person, a sail, goes further than us!
7. Chen Yurong
Awards: This is a marathon of fate. She restrained hunger and fatigue, did not stop the test of God and disease on human affection, the flesh and blood and hardships of her family, and pursued the confidence of people who love DD very much. She is a mother, and she will definitely win her footsteps.
Zhang Zhengxiang
Awarding words: Life is only once, and Dianchi Lake is only once. He is a soldier and his courage is amazing. He is lonely and stubborn, and the Xuefeng Song Summit in Korea is proud of it. Because of such people, the power of human nature can be transmitted to honest and frank.
9, Sablja-talk about sad bite.
Acceptance speech: She can't see the world and chooses to create a new world for the blind. She came from the other side of the earth, and the children came to a group of strangers. She doesn't want a miracle. It depends on hard work. She brought light. Her eyes are so bright that healthy people can find their way.
10, Song
Acceptance speech: juvenile pain, heart disease, the way to save the country and the youthful and ambitious aspirations of middle-aged people. Now, his blood is full of steel eagle, green son, antimony cloud, NAG Xingang mountain range and small dreams and thousands of miles, and he is still on the road.
Special Award: Yangtze University students collectively saved children from drowning.
Awarding words: They danced and drew the most magnificent arc of life. They fought hard and made a brave youth legacy with the noblest light of life, forming a heroic hymn and fearless 2009.
Zhuo Lin Pingfanwei Touching People Selection Organizing Committee delivered a speech for Zhuo Lin;
A talented woman in the south of colorful clouds, Qiong Ying on the Loess Plateau [1]. Portable small tie 58 upload smoke parade landing wind and rain. The person she loves never gives up, making love a belief. Her love has injected women's firmness, warmth and arms into the rise of a nation.
Chen Huai, a member of the Central Selection Committee who was moved by a member, said:
Unswervingly, unswerving, I have suffered a lot and never wavered, not because of whose wife she is, but because of her unswerving.
Zhou Xiaochuan: She stood quietly behind a great era, with firm faith and deep love, the support of great men who survived the disaster and created a new era with a history of nearly 30 years. China should have a heavy sum.
Song Wencong top gun
Song was awarded the 2009 Touched Person Award by the Organizing Committee;
The pain of junior high school, the ambition of the port, the survival of the nation, the vigorous middle age, the surging ambition game. Now, his blood has flowed into the Gangyingling [2] within walking distance of the old horse. Trinidad is his dream, and he is still on the road.
The committee was moved by the high quality and unique functions of the Selection Committee, and said:
50 years of spring and autumn elegance, 2 years of loyal sword, his dedication, his soul's silent dedication to * * * and China Blue Sky Guardian, his body melted into its soul.
Ji: Finally, China's blue sky can fly to the level of advanced countries. This is an eagle made in China. Innocent children, Yu He-eun holds great power and creates the blue dragon soul of the motherland.
Lipa Ali Mahon's maternal love is the most real.
The award speech of the Organizing Committee of the 2009 Olympic Games was awarded to Alibaba:
No flesh and blood, but they are her children. She spread her wings to prop up their sky to resist hunger and cold, all the congestion, poor anti-fatigue and shoulders, playing in her house, water is thicker than blood, and kindness transcends family ties. Spring is the clearest and truest maternal love [3]
Members of the China Selection Committee were moved by Yan Su and said:
The back of the palm is meat, and the dead baby's stars smile at the moon to welcome the golden light every day.
Results: Her warm and caring nation, impartial heart, her helpless children's eyes opened the hope of the world, healed the fear face of weaker souls, and the earth was calm.
Light, Sablja talks about sadness and gnawing, heart.
In 2009, the Organizing Committee awarded Sablja the China Tambeken Prize:
Choice will usher in a new world that she can't see. She came from the other side of the world with a group of strangers. She didn't want a miracle. By hard work, she brought light. Her eyes were so bright that healthy people found their way.
Tu Youyou, a member of the China Selection Committee, said:
She is the contemporary Prometheus Matthews. Although they can't see the light, it brings light and hope to the blind children in Tibet who are far away from home.
Wang: She showed us the modern Bethune! Foreign blind people can directly feel the needs of blind children in Tibet, which requires lofty humanitarian principles and a kind of charity!
Zhang Zhengxiang is very bold.
The 2009 annual report was moved, and a sentence awarded to Zhang Zhengxiang by the China Chinese Character Award Selection Committee:
Life is only once, and Dianchi Lake is only once. He is a soldier and his courage is amazing. He is lonely and stubborn, and the top of Xuefeng proudly belongs to Han Song. Because of this person's character strength, the position conveyed.
Moved by Chen Xitian of the Central Selection Committee, he commented:
The interests of a farmer, country and people, in order to protect the interests of Dianchi Lake and the whole family, disabled people are more willing to pay the price of bone marrow. How precious this spirit is!
Pu Cunxin: Facing greed, ignorance and cruelty, he persisted in his faith and fought bravely and tenaciously, which proved that loving the mountains and rivers of the motherland was not empty talk. He is a veritable environmental ambassador.
Moved by fossilization, mother loves monkeys.
China Chen Yurong 2009 Person of the Year Award Speech:
This is a fate granted by the marathon organizing Committee. Suffering from hunger and fatigue, she dare not stop in heaven to test human feelings, the flesh and blood and hardships of her family, and keep the faith of being a mother. She will certainly win the footsteps of her great feeling for people.
Peng, a member of the Selection Committee of Mobile, Great Wall and China, said:
The picture of her leaving in a hurry strongly shocked my heart. That gesture is so sad and beautiful.
Results: How much can a mother give for her children? This is a never-ending answer. Chen's seven-month-old maternal love is becoming heavier and heavier on the plain.
Lord of Zhu Bangfu next month.
In 2009, China Organizing Committee awarded Chu Yue the Touching Person of the Year Award:
This strange family focuses on the sufferings of the world and blends the truest feelings in the world. With gray hair and a smile, this gentle and firm old man's chest is full of four years of hard work. He is on crutches and carries the weight of life with one wing and shoulder.
Yi Zhongtian, who was moved by China, was elected as a member. In his fourth year, Kim.
Men's chivalrous Zhu Bangfu's shoulder in January. Feel the truth that heaven and earth are stationed in the world's most ordinary China man.
bright red
The invalid footer is weak, illuminating the abnormal ups and downs of life in the eyes of others. Although life is hard, there is still light here.
Shen Hao's Practical Belief
In 2009, China People's Selection Committee Award was awarded to Shen Hao;
Two village officials, who have lived at home for six years, always face to face with farmers, and he walks sideways [4]. Young girls who rashly adapted to the roads, factories and farmland in the village lived in their wives' parish that year. The villagers pressed the red handprint and changed their fate in the village. Now, they once again collected his inscription with bright red handprints.
Process information management that moved China to be elected as a member of the Committee
You are a seed, deeply buried in my affectionate land; Your flag, flying high in this promising land, you put it in your heart and people put you on your head! Stand up, you are a statue, go down, you are a monument!