Green leaves? like
When Grandpa began to taste the aged Longjing brewed four times, undertaker had gradually dispersed. My mother held my hand tightly and bid farewell to this land where I was born and raised. I smiled slightly. It turns out that there is no eternal hometown, and we are always passers-by.
After dealing with grandma's funeral, grandpa no longer missed this land that left countless memories, and obediently followed us to the city. However, walking on the cobblestone path, I saw my grandfather's back countless times. That kind of deep attachment and unspeakable helplessness finally turned into a muddy tear and slowly flowed back to my heart.
Goodbye, I heard these two words.
Grandpa in the city still gets up early every day. This is somewhat different in a city accustomed to nightlife and disdaining the morning sunshine. However, grandpa doesn't care about those strange eyes, and still wears old blue overalls that are washed white every day and shuttles through the community. He cultivated a flower field in the wasteland in front of the building, sowed all kinds of strange seeds, and waited every day with a serious face, as if he were completing a sacred mission.
Only I know grandpa's loneliness. Because I also have such loneliness. I miss the old house in my hometown. Every morning, the euphemistic sound of warblers, the mournful moan of wooden stairs, the tiny sunshine scattered through the green bamboo forest, and the unforgettable earthy breath with a faint fragrance.
I can't find such a simple and pure smiling face in this piece of reinforced concrete. Every time I see grandpa waving his hand and putting it helplessly under the cold brush, I always have an impulse to cry.
At that time, my grandfather was a green leaf and full of energy. He can temporarily leave his roots and wander in the distance, looking for his own scenery. Now, however, this green leaf has quietly withered, and he needs to go back and stay in his hometown forever.
It was grandpa's eightieth birthday, so my relatives and friends got together. I rolled my eyes, but I couldn't find grandpa. I got up quietly and walked out of the banquet hall. I saw my grandfather wandering in the corner window. I went over to shake hands with grandpa. Grandpa moved his lips and said, "I want to go home." Like a sheltered child looking for a home.
"Well, let's go home together." I saw my own shadow in my grandfather. Everyone is a green leaf. No matter how far it floats, it has been deeply branded by that land. Yes, this is the helpless and sweet fate of every green leaf.
Then, let's work hard with our feelings for the roots, and then go home hand in hand before sunset.
Full marks in Shanghai college entrance examination composition in 2009
China's wisdom of harmony but difference.
At the calligraphy exhibition in the museum, I was shocked by the fascinating exhibits and was at a loss for a moment. Suddenly, a work came into view. Its words look crooked, but on the whole, it has a different taste. It is beautiful in form and spirit. I'm a little shocked.
"That's what Zheng Xie said." A deep voice. I turned my head, and it was a smiling grandfather.
I can't help but sigh: "This word is so beautiful. Although it doesn't look like Liu Tiou's orthodoxy, it doesn't hinder his unique beauty of integration. It really deserves to be the masterpiece of Zheng Banqiao, the head of Yangzhou Eight eccentrics. "
The old man smiled and said, "This is China's great wisdom of harmony but difference. You can see it from a small pair of calligraphy. Every word is crooked and doesn't look beautiful, but when it is combined, it has a powerful all-encompassing energy. "
"This is a concrete sense of great harmony, that is, accommodating all different harmony," I said. "This kind of harmony does not insist on the identity of all things, but beauty is in name and beauty is in reality."
The old man nodded and pointed to the work in front of him: "Look, Banqiao's handwriting is written in official script, not official script, and so is China's wisdom." It has never had a specific paradigm, and there is no unified demand. The ancients let their wisdom walk in front of us, let us have a glimpse, absorb and coexist various cultures and elements, and finally reach a harmonious state. Look at every masterpiece handed down in front of you. Every painting has its own special charm, even if it is not like a Banqiao, it is not ancient and is born out of the most primitive spirit. "He suddenly stopped and laughed." Perhaps this energy is given by Cang Xie's characterization. "
On reflection, I said, "A gentleman is harmonious but different, and a villain is not harmonious. So should a person. Only by gaining the power of harmony can we turn words with strong personality into one. Harmony is different, it is different, no, it must be different. Only in this way can we not be willful, not confined to our own narrow space, not seeing everything, and not having the tolerance to feel it. "
"So some people say that Zheng Xie's calligraphy is indispensable and cannot have both." The old man replied, "He's the only one. That's the difference." Look at those famous people: Jin Nong, Badashanren, Zhang Xu. They are wild and restrained, energetic and feminine. They seem to have such distinct personalities, but in fact they are all footprints in the history of China's calligraphy. China culture embraces these unique beings with its unique attitude. "
"Harmony is different. I have never thought so seriously about the wisdom hidden in such a painting. " I said with emotion.
The old man patted me on the shoulder: "China's wisdom has never been illusory, it has already penetrated into everything." Take a good look. "
I am immersed in the alternation of black and white. I return to absolute being, turned to look at it again. The old man has disappeared.
[Comment] This year's college entrance examination composition seems to be a traditional material composition, but the stylistic requirement is only four words: "Except poetry." Therefore, it is not excluded that other styles besides argumentative writing, such as this imaginary composition, are a successful example. In addition, the advantages of this paper are quite obvious. First of all, the topic is unusual: "China's wisdom of harmony but difference." Secondly, the dialogue between "I" and "the old man" well corresponds to the dialogue between today's culture and China's traditional culture. Furthermore, Zheng Banqiao's calligraphy art was promoted to the height of "all kinds of elements absorbed and coexisted in it, and finally reached a harmonious realm". After reading this article, I have to admire the author's relaxed attitude and galloping imagination under the tense examination state.
Selected essays with full marks
Don't treat common sense as improper food.
If you ask any middle school student what logarithms are, what Lorenz's law is, and what nuclear structure is, he will definitely explain these things clearly and make you marvel that young people are scientists now. However, if you find a top student and ask him what to do if he is bitten by a snake in the wild, he may scratch his head and think about various chemical reactions, and then simply say "I don't know" to you. Then "How much is a catty of green vegetables?" I don't know! "How to fold the quilt" "I don't know!" "Why don't you know anything?" "I don't know!"
This is a current situation of education in China: scientific knowledge is very tight, and all kinds of Olympics are flourishing, but common sense education seems to be not strong enough. The school curriculum is all-encompassing, and "common sense" alone can be lacking. Therefore, students are placed on the "ivory tower" high above them, and only engage in high-end knowledge. Today, if China wants to become a powerful country, it depends on high technology such as airplanes, cannons and rockets, so it seems that students should be "fed" with scientific and technological knowledge. "Common sense is a trivial matter, and those who achieve great things are informal." Whenever I see these remarks, I really want to get angry and shout, "This statement is ridiculous. Don't treat common sense as improper food!" " "
Common sense is an art that guides us to live a better life. Daily behaviors such as food, clothing, housing and transportation need the guidance of common sense. Nowadays, we can do housework such as washing and cooking by our parents, and all kinds of things can be done by our parents, just like the little emperor who doesn't ask about political affairs. But parents can't take care of us all our lives. When we grow up, we still have to take care of ourselves. If you don't even know common sense, won't you run into a wall everywhere in the future? Or do you have to call your parents for everything? And even if you can't take care of yourself and your life is a mess, how can you have the heart to learn?
Common sense is also the foundation of science and technology. Science is not a castle in the air, but is born from people's practice and exploration of things around them. Newton summed up the law of gravity from the common sense of apple landing; Lu Ban invented the saw from the common sense that leaves can cut hands. Talking about high technology without common sense is like building a building without foundation, which is unreliable.
From this perspective, it is very meaningful to increase the popularization of common sense in the quality education system. We should attach importance to both common sense and scientific and technological knowledge. But at the same time, we should also cultivate students' innovative consciousness and independent thinking ability, let them sum up scientific laws from common sense, or let them boldly question common sense and not stick to it. Galileo, the great physicist of that year, put forward a new viewpoint in questioning common sense. History has also proved that his bold questioning is correct.
Common sense is the foundation of human survival and scientific and technological development, and its significance to people is comparable to dry food. Don't treat common sense as dry food, use it to "fill" students' heads and use it to support the waist and abdomen of science building!
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Commentator: Deng Yuhuan, Associate Professor, School of Arts, South China Normal University.
The local use of proverbs and clever use of metaphors are vivid and fascinating. Comparing "common sense" to "dry food", the basic substance of survival, emphasizes the basic essence of "common sense", and the topic and text content complement each other.
The full text is mainly composed of "common sense", which is related to the topic and highlights the center, emphasizing the necessity of popularizing common sense in life. This article is rich in content. At first, it focused on the teaching of "high-end knowledge" in education, ignoring the popularization of common sense in life and calling on the society not to despise common sense. Then, from the guidance of common sense to daily life, common sense is the basis of science and technology, questioning the need of common sense, demonstrating at different levels, deepening at different levels and having a tight structure, and deducing at the end of the article. The most prominent thing in this paper is that the language is vivid, vivid and natural, with personal opinions and sincere feelings.
But the writing of this article is not neat enough, the expression of common sense is not accurate enough, and some sentences are flawed.
Selected essays with full marks 3
Such common sense
Early in the morning, as soon as the factory director came to the office, Xiao Li rushed in, holding a steaming cup of Tieguanyin in his hand, handed it to the factory director obsequiously and said mysteriously in a low voice, "Director, I want to discuss something with you. Can the master who took me be replaced by Xu Changke? " The director is puzzled: "What? Master Zhang is too strict with you? " "No, Master Zhang is experienced and skilled. Such a good master should be left to Xiao Wang. " "Yes, no problem."
It turns out that Xiao Wang and Xiao Li are new apprentices, and the factory has assigned two masters to lead them respectively. In the original factory, Xiao Li was arranged by the best master Zhang. I don't know why, but he asked for a replacement. The training will begin soon. Master Zhang is a veteran. He is very hard on Xiao Wang. If he can't do it well, he will ask for redone. Even if the gears were not smooth, he asked for a fresh start. It is common to make mistakes and severely punish people for not eating; In addition, Xiao Wang is required to read a bunch of theoretical books and understand the main points thoroughly. Xiao Wang was so tired that he was sweating all over every day that he fell asleep as soon as he touched the pillow. On the contrary, Xiao Li is at leisure, following Xu Jin in and out every day, socializing constantly, not learning much technology, but making a lot of money. Xiao Wang looked in his eyes and wondered.
One day, Xiao Wang finally had a chance to find Xiao Li and asked, "You and I are disciples. Why is it so easy to learn? " Xiao Li smiled and whispered in his ear, "Brother, you don't understand this. In today's society, relations are valued, not technology. Many relatives are senior officials. I see many important people with him these days. He also said that when he became the director, he would promote me to be the deputy director. It is common sense to have connections and good interpersonal relationships. Do you understand? " Xiao Li patted Xiao Wang on the shoulder and strolled away.
Xiao Wang went back and told Master Zhang that Master Zhang was furious: "Common sense? Bullshit common sense! Nowadays, everyone talks about relationships, and everyone climbs relationships, which breeds a lot of unlearned moths and leads to the real talents being buried! Don't listen to his nonsense What the country needs is technology and talents. Only with excellent technology can there be a future. This is common sense. Study hard. " Xiao Wang nodded and continued to study hard every day.
The end of the training one year later coincided with the country's need for high-tech talents. Excellent master Zhang became the factory director, which set off an upsurge of "learning solid technology to serve the country" in the factory. Xiao Wang graduated smoothly with excellent theoretical results and excellent technical operation, and was promoted to senior technician with a monthly salary of over 10,000 yuan. As for section chief Xu, because his relatives were arrested for taking bribes, he could not be laid off without practice. Xiao Li miscalculated his wishful thinking and had to start an apprentice again.
The factory has assigned another master to Xiao Li. On the day of training, Xiao Li was surprised to see Xiao Wang coming. Murphy? "Yes, I am your teacher," Xiao Wang whispered near his ear. "I also want to tell you that you only have the real thing, practical learning, and have a future. This is common sense, understand? " Xiao Wang patted Xiao Li on the shoulder, looked at Xiao Li's stupefied appearance and smiled happily.
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Commentator: Zhou Xiaopeng, Associate Professor, School of Arts, South China Normal University.
Such Common Sense is a rare narrative masterpiece in this year's Guangdong college entrance examination composition. Through the story of two young people who just entered the factory, this paper satirizes and criticizes those who regard courtship and kindness as "common sense" for personal development, and reveals that the so-called smart people who act according to this "common sense" have no future after all. The examination questions ask candidates to talk about their experiences and opinions related to common sense. This article is written in this way, to the point, with clear theme, profound conception and strong social criticism.
The form and writing skills of this article are also commendable. First of all, the title is well written, and "so" is used to indicate the critical and ironic attitude of the whole article. Secondly, the article is ingenious in conception, seeing the big from the small; Compact and rigorous structure, echoing back and forth; The author gives a clear and concise account of the origin, occurrence, development and ending of the story, and the ending of the story is unexpected and reasonable, which has a strong ironic effect. Third, the description of the characters' language, movements and demeanor is quite vivid, accurate and vivid.