Feeling about Looking at Lushan Waterfall (1) Looking at Lushan Waterfall is a poem written by People's Education Publishing House, the second grade of primary school, and we are all familiar with it. This poem was written by Li Bai, a great poet in the Tang Dynasty. Magnificent, expressing the poet's love for the motherland and its great rivers and mountains.
Senior two students still have some difficulties in learning ancient poems, and they often just read them repeatedly under the guidance of teachers. In this way, a strange circle is formed, and students are proficient in reading, but they have no feeling at all; In addition, repeated reading also makes students feel boring, which leads to the phenomenon of "loud reading" in class, but it does not achieve the effect of "seeing what it means".
Recently, our school carried out the teaching research of "effective classroom" for young teachers, and I was deeply impressed by the section "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" taught by Mr. He Zujiao.
One, seven reading characteristics.
In the whole process of learning the text, He Laoshi made a fuss about "reading". Every link of her design has a task, and reading has a purpose: reading ancient poems and reading correct pronunciation; Second, read ancient poems, read sentences ... until the seventh reading of ancient poems, expand and extend. Interlocked, integrated and logical. People can't help but sigh the teacher's good intentions. As we all know, there is still a lack of methods for senior two students to learn ancient poetry. The teacher's design makes students know clearly what to do next and why to do it. This is beneficial to the study of ancient poetry in the future and plays a very good guiding role. And in the process of reading, He Laoshi avoided repeating boring and inefficient reading, and designed individual reading, group reading and model reading in various forms, so that the whole classroom life was not chaotic and the bilateral activities between teachers and students were very harmonious.
Second, poetry is effective.
Whether a class is effective or not, I think it is important to see whether the class has achieved the teaching objectives and whether the students have learned anything. In this lesson, the text is static and single, even very rigid and boring. But He Laoshi avoided mechanical repetition well. At the beginning of the class, He Laoshi used courseware with many beautiful waterfall pictures. These pictures successfully attracted the children's attention. At first, the whole class was silent-they were stunned by the ingenious design of nature; And then unconsciously, "Wow!" -They expressed their inner feelings. As the saying goes, "We can feel her feelings even before she plays", in the minds of students, they have become interested in this poem, and they want to know and are eager to get in touch with it.
Through the understanding of the words "travel" and "biography" in the poem, as well as the imagination and feeling of "flying to thousands of feet, suspecting that the Milky Way will fall for nine days", students have already integrated the artistic conception in the poem with those pictures, and naturally can understand the thoughts and feelings to be expressed in the article. In this class, students read poems rhythmically and fluently; Poetry reaches the artistic conception, as if it were in its surroundings; Learning is directional, progressive and thoughtful, and the learning effect is obvious. Naturally, it is an effective classroom.
This class is full of Chinese flavor, showing the real characteristics of Chinese class and reflecting the characteristics of current Chinese teaching. It is true, not false, nor is it a mere formality. In my heart, it's a different passage to see Lushan Waterfall!
Feelings about Looking at Lushan Waterfall (2) Li Bai's Looking at Lushan Waterfall depicts the magnificent landscape of Lushan Waterfall with great momentum.
"Rizhao incense burner produces purple smoke." Sunshine, sunshine. Incense burner, incense burner peak, a peak, because the peak is sharp and round, and the clouds are lingering on it, so it is called incense burner peak. As can be seen from these four words, the sunlight shining on the incense burner is very magical and beautiful. Purple smoke, the word "health", vividly depicts the mountain smoke clouds rising and floating, making the incense burner like a fairyland. Purple smoke, purple smoke. "Look at the waterfall hanging in Qianchuan." You see, Li Bai not only wrote about the surrounding mountains, but also wrote about the most spectacular scenery: "Waterfalls". Hanging thousands of rivers, waterfalls like white silk hanging in front of the mountain. Looking from a distance, why look from a distance? Oh, in order to see the whole waterfall, if you look carefully, you can't see the top of the waterfall.
"Fly down three thousands of feet". Flying stream, flowing down like flying. Go straight. Go straight. Thousands of feet, which seems to be three times as long as thousands of feet, highlights Li Bai's exaggeration in writing this poem. "I suspect that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days." The milky way poured into the world from nine days, which made people feel trance.
The four sentences in the whole poem * * * use 28 words, describing the majestic momentum and magnificent landscape of the waterfall and expressing the poet Li Bai's passion for the rivers and mountains of the motherland.
After reading Wang Lushan Waterfall (3) I read Li Bai's Wang Lushan Waterfall and was deeply attracted by it.
He compared the clouds on the mountain to "the incense burner gives birth to purple smoke", which made people feel like they were in a fairyland. He looked at the waterfall from a distance as if he saw a silver curtain falling from the sky. How long has this curtain been hanging here? Maybe tens of thousands of years! Nature is so wonderful!
From this poem, I feel the poet Li Bai's broad mind and rich imagination. He used bold and exaggerated techniques to describe the beauty of waterfalls, from the world to the sky, from eyes to dreams. The beauty of the mountains and rivers of the motherland has been recorded.
I want to learn from him and sing praises to the great motherland with beautiful poems.
Looking at Lushan Waterfall (4) Looking at Lushan Waterfall (Don Li Bai) Rizhao incense burner is full of purple smoke, and the waterfall hangs in front of Sichuan. On the high cliff, it seems to be thousands of feet high, which makes people think that the Milky Way has fallen from heaven to earth. Everyone came with their mouths open, saying that Li Bai's exaggeration was beyond ordinary people. The teacher explained this. If you have been to Lushan Mountain, you don't think so. Lushan Mountain lies to the south of the mountain. Xiufeng consists of six peaks: censer peak, sister peak, double sword peak and turtle back peak. The first sentence in the poem refers to the censer peak, and the scene behind it is hard to feel without seeing it with your own eyes. In June 2003, I went to Lushan Mountain, and the construction site was at the foot of Xiufeng. I was disappointed to see Lushan Waterfall for the first time.
Looking from a distance, it looks like silver silk, like Hada, floating between the peaks, which is poetic. The lost mood changed completely after May of the following year. In May, Jiangnan entered the rainy season, fell asleep in the drizzle at night and woke up with a loud noise in the morning. With the sound, the rushing waterfalls, like ten thousand vines, fell through. Is the waterfall cheerful? Is it anger? Magnificent and diarrhea. This is a far cry from "flying over the eaves and walking over the walls, three thousands of feet, and it is suspected that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days", and the poetic imagination is too rich.
There is something on the construction site. To Xing Zi County. When I came back, the clouds opened and the sun rose. Looking from a distance, I can only see the green peaks such as censer peak, sister peak, double sword peak and turtle back peak. The moisture in the forest rises and gradually turns into fog. The jungle on the summit is looming, as if it were real. At the beginning of the red sun, purple, crimson and silvery white waterfalls hang between green peaks. Moisture quickly gathered, and in a short time, clouds covered the peaks, just at the top of the cliff where the waterfall overflowed. I feel that the clouds are the mythical heavenly palace, and the waterfalls rush out of the clouds and really fall from nine days.
Now it seems that exaggeration is exaggeration, but it is not imagination. Only when you are there, can you feel poetry!
Feeling after seeing Lushan Waterfall (5) Patriotism is a sincere love and deep emotion for one's motherland, and it is one of one's most primitive feelings. But as a wet behind the ears, I always think that patriotism is unattainable and relatively slim. Recently, I revisited the "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" I learned in the third grade, and I have a deep understanding of patriotism.
Looking at Lushan Waterfall by Li Bai, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, is a well-known poem, which is known for appealing to both refined and popular tastes. Lushan Mountain is one of the most famous scenic spots and cultural sites in ancient China. There are immortal caves with "infinite scenery", waterfalls with "wonders of the world", and the Yangtze River and Poyang Lake in the distance set each other off. These naturally form a natural picture. Not only that, Lushan Mountain is also rich in history and humanities. Throughout the ages, I don't know how many literati's feelings have been aroused and countless poems have been written, but Li Bai's "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" stands out among many poems, although it is only a small seven-character quatrain.
The first sentence of the poem, "Purple smoke from Rizhao incense burner", seems to be a description of incense burner peak, which has little to do with waterfalls. However, we should know that this poem is not simply about "waterfall", but about the dynamic process of "seeing waterfall", so this seemingly insignificant understatement tells readers that the waterfall is located on Lushan Mountain, and the incense burner peak is in the northwest of Lushan Mountain, with a round of peaks and clouds all day long. This sentence also points out the specific time to see the waterfall. Because in the daytime, the "Rizhao incense burner" can't see the "purple smoke" landscape. Only when the sun has just risen in the east and the golden sunshine shines on the incense burner peak will the haze in the mountain show a rare purple color. Depicted a fairy mirror-like dream world.
In the second sentence, the poet focused on the waterfall in front of the mountain, "looking at the waterfall hanging in front of the river", pointing out that the poet was standing at the foot of the mountain looking up. If you are right in front of you, you are in the sound and water potential of the waterfall, which is completely different, just out of touch with the word "hope" in the title. Only "from a distance", that is, from a distance, never stopped at that moment, and kept jumping and looking at the "Lushan Waterfall" in the distance. The seemingly ordinary words and expressions contain the author's careful conception and ingenious organization.
In the second half of the poem, metaphor and strange imagination are used. Whenever people appreciate the waterfall, they will inevitably be deeply moved by it, not to mention Li Taibai, who was born with the ability of telepathy and * * * communication with this magnificent landscape that never stops and rushes down desperately. Therefore, the "Lushan Waterfall" written by Li Bai is "flying down three thousands of feet", which is more wonderful and unique than any poet can imagine. The word "fly" is just right to describe the situation of the waterfall rushing and jumping. The word "straight down" indicates both the height of the mountain and the urgency of the waterfall. And "Flying down three thousands of feet" is the best description of Lushan Waterfall. It gives us the feeling that it is a unique motive force for mobility, and we go forward without hesitation.
The last sentence is the essence of the whole poem. Without this sentence, the poem "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" may not be so popular and known throughout the ages. The Milky Way is made up of countless stars, which was originally a romantic word in people's imagination. The waterfall fell from "nine days" to "Lushan Mountain", which made people feel that the Milky Way poured into the world from nine days. But its charm remains, no matter where it is, it gives people a romantic imagination and infinite charm. In addition, due to the use of the word "doubt is", the whole poem is increasingly covered with a trance-like artistic color.
The four sentences in the whole poem * * * use 28 words, describing the majestic momentum and magnificent landscape of the waterfall and expressing the poet Li Bai's passion for the rivers and mountains of the motherland. Reading "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" inspired my patriotic enthusiasm. The so-called "patriotism", as the name implies, is to love your country. Teenagers are prosperous when they are successful, but they are strong when they are successful. Patriotism is very extensive, loving the mountains and rivers of the motherland, loving the history of the nation and caring about the fate of the motherland. We should adapt to the requirements of the development of the times, study hard and master skills. Study hard to revitalize China and contribute to the glory of the motherland tomorrow!