A composition of about 3000 words (just extract it) is very enlightening.

Unpleasant kindness

We always pity the poor in rich places, always lie in a safe place and condemn evil, always appeal to stay away from indifference after pot calling the kettle black, and always calculate the value of life after the bloody road fades.

So, we bent down and pitied others' self-esteem.

After every disaster, too many people compete to adopt orphans. This craze has passed, and too many orphans have fallen into misery. According to the analysis of psychologists, the adoption of orphans should consider their own financial situation, the family atmosphere should be similar to that of children family of origin, and the education methods and parents' personality should be suitable for orphans. However, too many people rely on their own enthusiasm. Enthusiasm calls back the division of the family, and the children are once again facing the pain of family destruction, and the injury once again hits the soft hearts of innocent children. Kindness changes from sweet to bitter.

We burn other people's bodies with boiling blood.

The 2008 Olympic Games is the Olympic Games for the people of China. National celebration, warm atmosphere, torch relay, one world, one dream. However, the discordant colors also defiled the red torch and green olive branch of the Olympic Games. It is reported that it took 8-year-old children 55 days to complete the "Marathon" in Beijing. 10-year-old children are marching in the rapids with their arms tied; Accompanied by her father, the 8-year-old girl walked more than 3,000 kilometers to Beijing, the capital ... These behaviors have attracted the attention of the media in China and even the world, including many foreign media to denigrate the China Olympic Games. False comments need to be resisted with all one's strength, but there is no denying that this is a kind of "abnormal Olympic fever". If we hold a rational Olympic Games, we need rational behavior as the support. Enthusiasm changed from fiery passion to madness.

When we burn others' bodies with blood, we also burn others' hearts.

In the Wenchuan earthquake on May 2, 2008, we saved too many lives with the fastest and most United actions, and we won the respect of the world. Numerous flashlights focused on Sichuan, flashing countless touching stories, and also stabbed the eyes of the people in the disaster area.

The children who were successfully rescued were lucky, but some reporters reminded them of painful memories over and over again for interviews. The children were in tears and the adults were in tears. Enthusiastic volunteers have no sense of disaster relief, but go to the disaster area. Although they are enthusiastic, they have added chaos to the disaster area. Incorrect rescue action, imperfect service behavior and unreasonable comfort and help have caused "secondary harm" to the people in the disaster area. Kindness has changed from the comfort of original intention to the sword.

The Chinese nation is firm, enthusiastic and kind. When we survived floods, SARS, lawless elements splitting the motherland and desecrating the Olympic Games, we will also survive the tragic Wenchuan earthquake and successfully host the Olympic Games. But we need more thinking and action, and look at the problem rationally and comprehensively from the perspective of others.

The "heart of love" goes deep into our blood, always keeps kindness and sweetness, and keeps fresh for kindness, so that it does not fade, deteriorate or change its taste.

Comments:

Calm, calm, insightful and analytical. Reading "The Beauty of Disappearing Taste" can make us treat and deal with some things rationally, make love truly implemented, and make good deeds not hurt others' self-esteem and burn others' body and mind.

Three things listed in the article are typical: the adoption of orphans, the Olympic fever, and the "good deeds" of some people after the Wenchuan earthquake. These things are concerned and familiar to people, and they have just happened or are happening in real life, so it is easy for people to compare, confirm, think and analyze the author's inference with their own understanding, so as to draw a correct conclusion. Therefore, the article has received the expected effect.

Think carefully and analyze deeply. The article makes the ins and outs of things, people's motives and consequences clear and reasonable, which makes people have to accept. In particular, the paragraph about the adoption of orphans is very reasonable and can arouse readers' * * *

The language use and content expression of the article are also well combined. Wash and practice, simple, natural, not gorgeous, but also carved, as if talking to you, let you accept his point of view, with strong persuasion. *.*

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