Chang 'an Old Man Comments:
1. The first linkage is good and handled well.
2. The second couplet is also very good, and the antithesis is neat.
3. Rewrite the third couplet with words and sentences ... ([laughs] I like this couplet myself)
I didn't understand the last sentence. So appearance is looking in the mirror? Or what?
I have taken pictures of the world, but in the end, I don't know what I really am. )
5. The whole poem is anticlimactic.
02? Poets are like husbands.
Five laws of chanting mirror
I am sincere in nature, and Xuanyuan began to prevail.
Fuxi peeks at the water, and Qin Jing distinguishes the treacherous from the heroic.
The glittering silver light makes everything clear.
Now it is red, and I am used to ordinary love.
03? Chengyu Zhang
Five laws? Mirror (new rhyme)
Year after year, you can't elaborate.
Peep at the petals of a flower, peep at the moon and the moon.
I came to comb my horse makeup because I was dressed as hibiscus.
An old friend is twofold and a classmate.
05? Du Xiaoli
Seven laws? Mirror (new rhyme)
Although he can see everything at a glance, he hates lack of sleep.
Distinguish between right and wrong and know what to say and what not to say.
Laughing to the heart is annoying, but it goes against people's wishes.
If you know what I mean, you will frown.
06? Knives are scary.
Five-melody mirror (new rhyme)
If you want a bosom friend, the glass is plated with mercury.
It's not me. Who's opposite?
Who is United at all stages of his creation?
Look at the six roads, nothing is empty.
07? Wen Yue
Five laws. mirror
Who * * * can make me worry? A tear merged into two streams.
Who is a bosom friend? Clear the frost and see the white head.
I don't know when I'm old, but when I stay young for a long time, my color will fade.
Only you came to the opposite side, vaguely old and gone with the wind.
08? Follow each other's heart
Five laws? Chanting mirror
I live in Wutongyuan, and the window falls in blue autumn.
I want to comb my sideburns, reflecting my concubine's head in the air.
The lights are on in pairs, and people speak alone.
Xi Qing and I laughed heartily and had two streams every night.
10? Shu Yan
Five-melody mirror (new rhyme)
In ancient times, it was made of copper, but now it looks like crystal.
It's a shadow recently, but it can't be seen when it's far away.
Fine painting of the mountain eyebrows is light, and the oblique comb clouds are thick.
I can't see through it. Spring scenery is too hasty.
1 1? Sing without confusion
Five Laws and Ancient Mirrors (Yun Xin)
Among the mottled antiques, it is famous for its brilliance.
Painting in the harem and dressing in the temple.
It is easy to shine on the world of mortals, but it is difficult to guess the world.
Time flies and there is not much joy.
Comment on Wei Xiao's last poem;
1. The first couplet is cut in the first person, which is concise and clear.
2. The second couplet is neat, but the meaning is too dull.
3. The third opposite is neatness. How to interpret several places of moss.
4. Why are the first half of couplets associated with praise? The second half of the sentence is only willing to call it your heart. Personally, I think the mirror reflects people, and it is the image of a man of insight, so this word is not appropriate.
13? Travelers of past dynasties
Five laws. mirror
Iron, wood and plastic, glass containing mercury.
Deviation is the same as shadow, and everything is predestined.
Half of it is dry and big, empty.
Originally not fragile, only love to learn from loyal subjects.
14? Pearl river beach
Seven laws? Mirror hymn
Stone pieces and copper pieces are polished to reflect the moon, and green hair and white hair are printed.
There is no left-right extension, there is a contrast between rising and falling.
Thin broken finally contact lament, praise ancient and modern.
The distant mountains suddenly add an eye to the sky, take a look at the Milky Way and explore the pan-if.
Leng Yue comments:
(1) Do you still talk too much? This question is beside the point.
② The layout is chaotic and the overall structure is not smooth, including sentence rhythm.
(3) Except for the first copy, the other three suggestions should be reconsidered.
16? Between water and clouds
Five laws? mirror
I don't know if I'm imitating Dan Qing's hand in vain.
Beauty is easy to get, but sex is hard to hold.
Even if you do Kunna, it's in vain.
Without earthly love, painting is bitter and stupid.
17? There is sunny snow in Xishan
Five laws? What is a mirror?
What wisdom is there? The face is fake and true.
You can see that the clothes are straight, but it is hard to say that the character is sealed.
People know the gains and losses, and they should be horizontal and vertical.
Read history and know its changes, but feel it with your heart.
18? Xiao shengqiu begonia
Five laws? Mirror (new rhyme)
Ningmu makeup platform shadow, autumn marks slightly cold.
Xiao Shu floated past, and indifference passed away.
Fiona Fang was silent, smiling and relaxed.
At the age of 20, the ruby fell and the moonlight soaked in China.
19? Jiuqu rushes to the east of the sea.
Five laws and mirrors
Dissolve an autumn moon and hang it in front of the jade platform.
The red Xie Ling is old and the frost is full of shadows.
Qingluan heartbroken, Golden Magpie has no reason.
What makes Lechang hate again, Xu Lang Luqian?
20? Taya
Seven laws. Ode to ancient mirrors
I am Ruoye Tongren, and rise of the legend Yunlu is a skilled worker.
The clear water is clear and constant, and Yao Hetai is as busy as a bee.
Too much liquid was leaked to make up for the Tang Palace, and the lights dimmed Nagato's tears in the Han Palace?
Rusty mottled clothes have a thousand years' eyes, which rise and fall in the eyes of Vientiane.
2 1? Nanfengchuang
Five laws. mirror
This thing is the most vivid and can be divided into true and false.
Meet the sun and the moon alone and take photos with ancient and modern people.
Cold is empty, and reunion is precious.
Clouds float past, why not dust?
22? Spring lantern childe
Five laws. Mantra mirror
Away from the hubbub, I will always love the moon.
Yun window peeps at the fog temple, and the ancient temple hides clear gold.
I once sighed that pear blossoms were sparse, but I still pity Su Ying.
Yutai is lonely and lonely.
23? Sea orchid
Five laws? mirror
After chasing for several years at dawn and dusk, the shadow went to find sorrow.
A single photo of the moon in the boudoir is equally divided.
Take care of each other and sit back and watch them suffer.
Cover your face with sleeves. Guess you're bald again.
24? candle light
Five laws. Mirror (new rhyme)
Since ancient times, it has been cast in copper for cosmetic surgery.
Now change it to glass and draw it as a prostitute.
You can find the sun, the moon and the earth, and you can explore gold and magnetism.
Cosmic macro and micro events, who and the department of insurance and construction.
25? Little Lord Fauntleroy
Five laws? mirror
Hiding in the bright room, I frequently examine myself.
Beauty makes up, and a gentleman dresses.
Take history as a mirror, instead, people will judge it.
Stay upright in the world and be a good boy.
26? Dalaobao
Five laws? mirror
Ling Huake learned, silently guarding the dust.
Yesterday, the Qionglou reflected the moon, but now I see the white-haired man.
Love for many years, when will the dream come true?
I hope to hold you for a long time, and I will look forward to it.
27? Nayan
Five-melody mirror (new rhyme)
If the frost is as thin as paper, it can be deep and dry.
Like water, like a full moon, like a poem, it can shine on people.
Beauty is pleasing to the eye, and a gentleman respects its truth.
Sorrow and joy are all experienced, and points do not disturb the heart.
28? Xiangbailin
Seven laws? Mirror (new rhyme)
This thing is not naturally envious of wealth, but it is divided into high and low beauty and ugliness.
Beggars' breasts are precious, and ladies' dressing tables are worth thousands of dollars.
The world is full of fantasy, and the court reflects the real body.
Sadness and joy are divorced from reality, and only people can see but not the heart.
29? Lian Jie
Lv Qi Yongjing (Xinyun)
You can show your face without getting a little dirty.
Like water, the biological image is clear, like Dolly.
The mind has the ability to practice as usual, and Wilder's quality can stand.
The road is silent and not obvious, and the hole leads to the beauty and truth in the world.
30? Xishui
Five laws? Yongjing (Xinyun)
Bright crystal plate, installed in Gankun's abdomen.
Stroke eyebrows to distinguish thickness, and write missing circles by month.
I danced with him, but he didn't say what others said.
Who can proceed from reality, the light will hang high tomorrow.
3 1? net load
Five laws? Ode to the mirror (new rhyme)
Crystal clear, sit still and watch the bonus.
Shiny silver, pure and beautiful.
Flaws can be identified, eyebrows and eyes can be presented.
After reading all the pictures in the world, you will know what you are.
32? King of Kaiyang county
Seven laws? Mirror (new rhyme)
Light spirit is as fragile as butterfly soul, and dreams deepen if you catch it frequently.
It is always said that being absent-minded is empty, and long-term worries reflect the old and never rejuvenate.
In the end, the description of the dynasty is all about his bones, but it is his own body that can be rubbed.
Iron jade is cold, bright, silent at night, wandering, and left alone in the world.
33? Fanmu
Seven laws? Haha Jing (new rhyme)
At first glance, the dream is deep and the truth is wrong.
Black and white hues are meaningless, and spring and autumn have souls.
Laughing and chatting, hoping for comfort, love is hard to find.
Looking back, the shadow moves over the line, and the shining light wakes people up.
Exhibits:
0 1 (digression)
Lv Qi Shuijing (Yun Xin)
Icebergs melt into clear springs, and the fields are brightly lit.
Flowing all over the green screen, smiling at the desolate wasteland.
Thinking about the depression under the moon, I have no intention of looking at the jade fence in front of the stars.
The dark sea is my shelter, and the sunrise calls me to the sky.
Wells Pan
02 (digression)
Lv Qi's sad mirror (Yun Xin)
Give Linglong a Kethleen realm, and experience all kinds of happy and sad poems.
Husband and wife are madly in love. Don't kiss your hair when you are drunk.
The court was at odds with the body, and it was too late for white hair to hear it.
If there is no long-term love in the world, it will ruin my face every year.
Wells Pan
03 (Non-metrical Poetry)
Five-melody mirror (new rhyme)
I laugh with her and she cries when I cry.
I have been a constant partner for many years and I am used to it every time.
I laughed at her, and she didn't cry when I cried.
I can see clearly now, but I can't understand the beginning.
-Slow words are insensitive
04
Five laws? Look in the mirror (digression)
A four-inch mirror, only seven feet long,
Stand up, hold up the shovel, and make up for the shadow.
Quite broad-minded, leading and leading.
The clothes are clean and straight, and the blood is boiling.
-Zhong Tianci