1, flowers. I have seen beautiful winter jasmine and red leaves in Xiangshan, but I have never seen flowers like roses. Rose Zhen Hong, red as the blood of a soldier; Roses are so beautiful and intoxicating; Roses are really fragrant, and the fragrance attracts a few bees; I looked at it quietly, looked at the delicate rose like a fairy, and was intoxicated by it. 2. mountains. Changbai Mountain is so white that you can't feel other colors. The snow in Changbai Mountain is thick enough to cover the saplings. The snow in Changbai Mountain is so heavy that it seems like goose feathers scattered by angels. The clouds in the sky are so white, it seems that you have been in a beauty SPA for 99 1 1 day. 3. Cloud. The clouds in the sky are really strange. They become cows and sheep for a while, and no one knows what they will look like when they come to see you. There are so many clouds in the sky, big and small, round and flat, thick and thin, falling in every corner of the sky, as if to fill the sky; The clouds in the sky are really strange, sometimes black and sometimes white, sometimes white and sometimes black, like a magician doing magic for you. I have seen the fragrant cordate telosma and the graceful Chinese rose, but I prefer the strong and unyielding plum blossom, which is really white! Like snowflakes in winter; How beautiful these plum blossoms are! Like a dancing swan; Plum blossoms are so strong! Like a brave soldier. The indomitable spirit of plum blossom has always inspired me to move forward. 5. Birds. Larks are so beautiful that you can't feel yourself breathing. Larks are so green that you can't feel other sounds; The lark's voice is really sweet, so sweet that even if you have a candy in your mouth, it is bitter.
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Vivid, concise and clear language beauty
In this paper, the characteristics of Guilin landscape are described in detail, and the language is concise and clear. At the same time, a large number of rhetorical devices such as parallelism and metaphor are used to vividly show readers a picturesque scenery of Guilin, which is catchy and fascinating to read.
Second, the article has distinct layers, natural transition and unified structure.
This passage is written in the order of beginning-narration-synthesis, which echoes from beginning to end and has a rigorous structure. The checkpoint clearly shows the beautiful scenery of Guilin in front of our eyes. It not only summarizes the position of Guilin landscape in the scenic spots of the motherland, but also explains the reasons why the author likes Guilin landscape. Then, the water of Lijiang River and the mountains of Guilin are compared and described. Finally, the mountains and water in Guilin are connected into a perfect whole and presented to the author. It adopts basically the same structure and sentence pattern, showing a kind of neat beauty. The paragraphs are closely related and the transition is natural.
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