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My mother (Lao She) excellent teaching plan.

Huaqiao Middle School Road, Boluo County, Guangdong Province

Lesson One: Experience Motherly Love

Pre-class knowledge expansion:

1, the story of Meng Mu's three steps.

2. The story of mother-in-law tattoo.

3. The song "Only a mother is good in the world"

4. I really love you

5. Mother by candlelight

6. Poetry Meng Xiao's Wandering Sons

7. China's ancient sayings about maternal love:

A loving mother loves her son and asks nothing in return. Liu An [Korea]

In October, the baby is heavy and the reward is light. Song of exhorting filial piety

One-foot-three baby, ten years and eight years' work. Song of exhorting filial piety

The mother said that the child was lying dry and the mother was asleep and wet. Song of exhorting filial piety

The mother's bitter son has not seen it yet, and the child's mother is uneasy. Song of exhorting filial piety

My mother is one hundred years old and often reads eighty children. Song of exhorting filial piety

With a loving mother, the prodigal son does not feel cold. Song of exhorting filial piety

I didn't know my parents when I loved them. Children's language

The old white-headed mother hid her face and cried bitterly, and her shirt sleeves were torn. Han Yu

When the mother instrument hangs down, it is bright and the night platform is silent. Motto collection

The mother used the needle and thread in her hand to make clothes for her long-distance son. Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged. Who can say that a filial child like the weak can repay his mother's love like the sunshine in spring? [Tang] Meng Jiao

Yesterday, Meng Mu chose a neighbor. In Mencius' laziness, she cut the cloth. Three Character Classic

Mother, the first relative in the world; Motherly love is the first love in the world. Strict words

The only unpolluted love in the world is maternal love. Strict words

When you succeed, everyone will choose 5? Swing your heart to cover it up? What is the coupling between you and me?

Mourn for my parents and give birth to me. The Book of Songs

What's wrong with having no father? What's wrong with not having a mother? The Book of Songs

A father's virtue is a son's legacy. Strict words

Parents are highly respected; Give children a good education. Motto couplets

Don't be happy with children, and don't sigh without children. Han Yu

Everyone knows that it is good to have boys and girls, but they don't know that men and women will make people old. Wang Jian

All parents in the world; The rarest person in the world, brother. Motto Lian Bi

Being a parent is the best in the world; Being a child is the greatest filial piety in the world. Motto Lian Bi

My father gave birth to me, and my mother bowed to me, caressed me, nurtured me, nurtured me,

Take care of me and answer me. The Book of Songs

Father is not kind, son is not filial; A brother who is not a friend is disrespectful; Husband is unfair.

This woman is not smooth. Yan Zhitui [Southern and Northern Dynasties]

There are no virtuous fathers and brothers in life, no strict teachers and friends outside, and few people can succeed. [Song] Lv Gongzhu

Parents do whatever they want, and I will continue to describe it; I cherish the thoughts of those parents. Motto Lian Bi

In the eyes of parents, children are often a part of themselves, and children are his ideal chance to start over. Fei Xiaotong

8. Holy maternal love

Motherly love, not picky about looks.

Motherly love, regardless of spring, summer, autumn and winter.

Motherly love is noble and great.

Motherly love, infinite loyalty

Whether you are peaceful or uneasy.

Whether you fail or succeed,

Motherly love, you failed and succeeded.

Motherly love is everywhere.

She, accompany you through life.

It was she who released the dragons and phoenixes on earth.

It's her, Changhong, who made the day.

Don't understand maternal love

You have lost the meaning of life.

Forget maternal love

High-ranking officials are generous, and the blood is cold and the body is weak.

Celebrity's depiction of maternal love

All the glory and pride in the world come from mothers. (Gorky)

Motherly love is a huge flame. (romain rolland)

There is one of the most beautiful voices in the world, and that is the mother's call. (Dante)

A loving mother's arm is made of love. How can a child sleep in it without sweetness? (Hugo)

Mom is there, which is the happiest place. (UK)

One of the most beautiful things in life is maternal love, which is selfless love, and morality is dwarfed by it. (Japan)

The sweetest word a person's lips can say is mother; The most beautiful name is "mom". (Ji Bolun)

Motherly love is the greatest power in the world. (Mill)

When you succeed, everyone is a friend. But only mother, she is the partner of failure. (Zheng Zhenduo)

Everything in the world may be false and empty, but mother's love is true, eternal and immortal. (India)

Mother in memory! Dearest lover, you are all my happiness and friendship. (France)

How intense, selfish and fanatical maternal love is, occupying our whole hearts and feelings. (Duncan)

In the child's mouth and heart, the mother is God. (UK)

How similar mothers all over the world are! Their hearts are always the same. Every mother has a very pure heart. (Whitman)

Motherly love is one of the most beautiful human emotions, because this kind of emotion is not mixed with fortune. (France)

Women are the most vulnerable, but mothers are strong. (France)

Without the help of selfless maternal love, the child's mind will be a desert. (UK)

Chinese activities before class: your description of maternal love ......

Long maternal love and continuous intervention, let's describe our mother. Please remember quietly for 3 minutes and express your feelings about your mother's love in words. Let's talk about maternal love again (The following are the students' answers. )

1, every time I go home, my mother always cooks her favorite dishes for herself.

2. My mother is always nagging, but when I am in a foreign land, I know that I really miss those nagging.

Mother always leaves the best things for me to eat.

My mother always tidies up my salute before I go back to school.

5. I am often told to wear more clothes.

Lesson 2: Analyze the text

Teaching objectives

1. Learn about the author's life and his important works.

2. Experience the author's love, praise, gratitude and nostalgia for his mother.

3. Understand the narrative way of the text in chronological order.

4. Taste the author's natural, simple and emotional language.

Learning focus

1. Try to appreciate the great mother image created by the author and understand the author's deep affection for her mother, so as to cultivate healthy emotions.

2. Taste the author's natural, simple and emotional language with your heart.

3. Experience the mother's "life education" that the author has always emphasized, so as to enhance the value of affection.

Introduce a new course

Teacher: We all know a great writer who was contemporary with Ba Jin, Lu Xun and others. He wrote many novels and plays before his death. Most of his works are little people, poor people and "eschatologists" in the old society. He is one of the few modern writers in China who can cause a world-class sensation. Do the students know who he is?

Approach the author, walk into the text, and understand the mother image in Lao She's heart.

Approaching the author

Lao She, formerly known as Shu Qingchun, was born in Shexian County in 1886.

Beijingers. Modern novelist, playwright, man

Artist. Manchu people. Representative works include novels.

Camel Xiangzi and Four Generations of a Family; Modern drama

Teahouse, Longxugou, etc. , known as a model writer.

He used to be the vice chairman of China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, Chinese Writers Association and China Folk Literature and Art Research Association. He participated in political, social, cultural and friendly exchanges with foreign countries, and attached importance to the cultivation and guidance of young writers. He was awarded the title of "People's Artist" for his excellent drama Longxugou. At the beginning of the Cultural Revolution, he died of persecution.

Read the text quickly and discuss the questions in groups.

Inquiry 1: What is the image of Lao She's mother?

Tip: American writer Whitman once said: "Mothers all over the world are so alike! Their hearts will never change, and every mother has a very pure heart. " So Lao She is a great writer. What is his mother like? Did his mother treat him like Whitman said?

☆ Group discussion, select representatives to answer:

☆ Teacher's summary: The author's description is a very touching mother image: hardworking, honest, conscientious, hospitable, helpful and not afraid of hardship. She is both hard and soft, kind and strong, and has deep feelings for children.

Inquiry 2: What are the similarities and differences between your mother and the mother described by the author?

☆ Discuss in groups and answer in pairs.

☆ The teacher boils down to:

Before we were born, our parents were not as boring as they are now. They have become like this because they have been planning for us all these years, bearing everything we take for granted for our life and study, and constantly accepting our nagging and complaints about life dissatisfaction. However, blood is thicker than water, and it is that strong family relationship that makes us who we are today.

Explore deeply

1. On the influence of mother on Lao She's personality.

Tip: Mr. Lao She, a great writer, is grateful to his mother. So, what kind of life education did her mother give Lao She?

☆ Study group discussion and choose representatives to answer.

☆ Prompt again to get the final result:

Four aspects: they appear in Section 9, Section 10, Section 17 and Section 12 respectively.

Please sort out the writing order of this article.

Clear: chronological order

☆ Specific order: (Please look for nouns about time in each section)

My mother got married → I was born → I was one and a half years old (the year of the Boxer Rebellion) → I graduated from primary school → I graduated from normal school → I was 23 years old → I was 27 years old → the July 7th Anti-Japanese War → last year → this year.

Focus on learning

1 and 12 show the mother's strong personality from which three aspects?

Study group discussion and choose a member to answer.

☆ boils down to:

(1) When the Allied forces searched their home in the city, the mother calmly protected her children.

(2) In the countless accidents in Peiping, my mother didn't panic or cry, trying to find a way out from nothing.

(3) consider family livelihood.

2. What are the three specific things that show great and selfless maternal love in section13?

☆ Study group discussion and choose representatives to answer.

☆ boils down to:

(1) Write that my mother is going to prepare a "huge sum" to send me to school.

(2) Write that Mother sent Third Sister to get married.

(3) Write that my mother sent me back to school on New Year's Eve.

Appreciate language features

1. The author is good at expressing the rich inner world of characters through their words and deeds.

For example, in the sentence "She struggled, bit her lip, held the doorframe with her hand and watched the sedan chair walk slowly" mentioned above, a series of actions of "struggling", "biting", "holding" and "watching" implied the inner activities that the mother was reluctant to part with when sending her daughter to get married. And "Go, son!" This sentence contains a very rich subtext.

2. The author is good at depicting characters by line drawing.

☆ The author also used this method when describing characters. In my memory, her hands are red and slightly swollen all the year round. This wonderful sketch vividly describes the mother's hard work. The word "perennial" highlights the mother's fatigue all the year round, and "bright red and slightly swollen" vividly shows the mother's fatigue. For example, "the tables and chairs are old, and the bronze wares of the cupboard door have been broken for a long time, but her hands can always make the broken desktop clean and the broken bronze wares shine." This sketch shows the mother's hard work and plain language from one side, which is more or less vivid.

3. Express sincere feelings in plain language.

Lao She's language is simple and popular, natural and fluent, good at mobilizing those vernacular and truth, rich in meaning and full of charm. For example, "whenever I receive a letter from home, I always dare not open it at once." I am afraid, afraid, afraid of having that ominous news. " This sentence uses the word "fear" in succession, showing the inner fear and expressing the deep love and affection for the mother. The language expression is very simple. Another example is "I know I should find food to relieve my mother's hard work." The phrase "looking for food" is very popular. "But the loving mother won't wait for me, she has been buried!" This sentence is full of emotion, but the language is vernacular.

Text abstract

In this article, Lao She talked about her mother's life experience. Tracing back to the source, the article is rich in plot.

Exhibition and change, although prose style, can be as fascinating as novels.

The author vividly wrote the mother's species along the clue of "never too old, poor to old, difficult to old"

Excellent quality. At the same time, the author wrote down the fundamental meaning of his mother to him in a nearly parallel sentence pattern at the end, which made people naturally turn their love for Lao She into admiration and nostalgia for their mother.

The full text begins with a calm tone, and the feelings are getting stronger and stronger, the emotions are getting more and more excited, and the sentences are getting more and more tense until "heartache!" Shout out heartache! "The pure heart overflows outside the text; Come to an abrupt end, with endless aftertaste.

Appreciating American literature:

An unlocked door

A mother and daughter live in a remote hut in a small village in the country. Her mother is afraid of being stolen, and always puts three locks on the doorknob at night. My daughter hates the boring and unchanging country life, just like a landscape painting. She yearns for this city and wants to see the gorgeous world she imagined through the radio.

One morning, my daughter left her mother in pursuit of that illusory dream. She sneaked away from home while her mother was sleeping.

"Mom, you just don't have my daughter." Unfortunately, the world is not as beautiful as she imagined. Unconsciously, she embarked on this road and fell into a quagmire, and then she realized her mistake.

"Mom!" Ten years later, the grown-up daughter dragged her broken heart and clumsy body back to her hometown.

When she got home, it was already late at night, and a faint light was shining through the door. She tapped on the door, but suddenly she had a bad feeling. My daughter got a fright when she twisted the door. "It's strange that my mother never forgot to lock the door before." Mother's thin body curled up on the cold floor and fell asleep distressfully.

"Mom ... mom ..." Hearing her daughter's crying, her mother opened her eyes and put her arms around her tired shoulder without saying a word. After crying in her mother's arms for a long time, her daughter suddenly asked curiously, "Mom, why didn't you lock the door today?" What if someone breaks in? "

Mom replied, "Not just today. I'm afraid you can't get in at night, so the door has not been locked for ten years. "

The mother waited for her daughter to come back for ten years, and the decoration in the room was the same as that of that year. That night, the mother and daughter returned to the way they were ten years ago, locked the door tightly and fell asleep.

Mother's heart

At the age of six, the long winter passed and spring came. I finally woke up from a serious illness. The sunshine in spring is very good, reflecting the oleander outside the window and casting the shadow of the tree. My mother was obviously gaunt and emaciated, which almost made me dare not recognize, but she was in a good mental state, as if she had found precious jewels and guarded me carefully. I have no appetite after a long illness, and my family always tries to coax me to eat. That day, I told my mother that I wanted to eat crabs very much, but my family was very embarrassed: how can I buy crabs in a remote mountain village in an era when material conditions are so scarce? Fortunately, my mother had her way and soon went out with a bamboo basket. There are many criss-crossing streams outside our village. If you turn over the big stones in the stream in June, you can find crabs. However, in the spring when the stream is still cold, crabs can't turn over in caves. Mother never gave up, turned the stones, large and small, and went all the way up the river. Spring water is still very cold, but it can't freeze the surging hope in her heart. Maybe God has pity on her mother's affection for licking calves. When my mother's hand was swollen and almost desperate, she finally climbed over a big crab, which crawled slowly under the stone that my mother had turned over. Mom's surprise can be imagined. She quickly caught the crab with both hands, but looking at the crab in her hand, her mother's hand couldn't stop shaking! Because it is a female crab, there are countless small crabs as thin as mosquitoes under its bulging belly, and some climb on the back of mother's hand ... Mother thought for a long time and gently put the crabs back into the water. But just put it down, she remembered something again, and quickly picked up the crab, and repeated it several times. In that chilly spring day, a strong and capable mother must be experiencing a major choice in life! How does her heart struggle and torture herself again and again between repeated actions of grasping and releasing? I didn't see the story with my own eyes. My mother sat beside my bed, stroking my forehead and told me in detail. Mother said that for the last time, she just gritted her teeth, closed her eyes and put the crab in the bamboo basket, and walked for more than ten steps, but the constant "rustling" struggle in the bamboo basket finally made her completely lose the courage to go back and ran back to the stream. The moment she put down the mother crab, she burst into tears! Mom finally went home empty-handed. On that chilly spring day, she never turned to the second crab again, sat on the stone in the middle of the stream and looked at the stream that kept moving forward happily. She couldn't help crying. Mother wiped her eyes and said she didn't regret letting the mother crab go, because she is also a mother, and all mothers in the world are one heart.

Outside the window is a turbulent twilight. By the dim light, I carefully looked at my mother's face, which was no longer bright and rosy, and suddenly gave birth to a desolation that was never commensurate with my age of seven. What an unfortunate and lucky crab this is. I happened to meet my mother, and only my mother knows how to be a mother!