Keywords: first grade primary school
This article applies to: the first grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about the first grade of primary school. The title is "Love-a poem of my own making". Everyone is welcome to contribute.
love
(self-created poetry)
Mother's love.
be just like
perfume
How to smell it
I can't smell enough.
Daddy's love
be just like
source
Sometimes.
Sometimes very close.
Grandpa's love
be just like
teapot
He didn't say
I also know that.
Teacher's love
be just like
cosmetics
The more you rub it,
The more beautiful.
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Source of creative inspiration
This is a fruit whim in front of a fountain when I was playing in the botanical garden the day before yesterday. To be exact, it's just an automatic watering faucet, but I didn't expect it to give children an inspiration for writing. Guoguo smiled and said, "Play with the sprayed water."
Dad's love is like a fountain, which opens and closes. "Also said that today is open! What an apt metaphor! Seeing the cheerful appearance of Guoguo, I asked her, what is maternal love like? What is grandpa's love like? What about the teacher's love?
Asked about grandpa's love, the little girl froze at once. Although grandpa has been here with her since the holiday, there doesn't seem to be much "* * * language" between her father and grandson. The elders are silent, and they can't hear him say a few words a day. So, I guided "Grandpa doesn't like to talk, but he loves you, buys you favorite snacks every day and accompanies you in class." Guo Guo said, "I know all this." All right! This is a very apt metaphor. My daughter looked at me puzzled. I went on to say, "Look at that teapot for boiling water. When the water is boiled, it will only beep and bubble, but it will not talk. " "Yes, grandpa likes that teapot very much. He doesn't say he loves me, but I know. " Guoguo quickly stopped and interrupted a two-part allegorical saying related to teapot.
Comparing the teacher's love to cosmetics is very fresh. Mom, this is really the first time I've heard of it. Maybe this is the modern version of children's thinking? ! The truth, goodness and beauty in her eyes are so ordinary and ordinary!
-Mom's diary