Dear friends who are interested in and know about poetry, the following poem feels a lot of flaws, please help me revise and improve it! Thank you very much

It was a beautiful day.

She is permeated with a pure smile.

(The front can be omitted, and the description is vague. Anyway, it's what you saw and what you wrote, so I won't go into details. )

Quiet maple forest

Birds are jumping on the branches.

The breeze caressed her hair.

(Soft and micro overlap, beauty and beauty are the most important,)

Blue sky and soft sea breeze.

It seems that there is a sound of nature attached to this place.

I asked them.

(I can't help asking)

Will this place be cleared as soon as possible? Do you like the silence here? Or love her beauty?

It's those delicate bare feet.

It's the white skirt.

It is as light and charming as a lotus.

Is that a sweet smile? ...

pass

She picked up a maple leaf blown by the wind.

Touch his cheek gently.

Like stroking her beloved bow.

(Don't)

Put him in the book slowly.

The wind whispered to me.

Since then, she has kept the maple tree in her heart forever.

I used to be fat with her.

faraway place

And this sound.

Gradually

He is with her.

(Feng) (He is a little too much and messy)

Run