My love is separated by mountains and seas. Both mountains and seas can be leveled. The whole poem is:
On the roadside of Ququchi, few people are walking in spring.
The hibiscus leaves contain water, and the air is still clear after spring.
The sunset is divided into colorful greens, and the high trees hide the sound of orioles.
Looking into the wind at first glance, the flowers are falling more clearly.
Wandering around, I feel the cold dew, and the shadow of the moon is horizontal in the clear night.
Ling Ling Bianstone muscle hair is suspected to be caused by Xiao Han.
You can see each other at a glance, and one step is like a city.
What you love is separated by mountains and seas, and mountains and seas can be leveled.
What you are thinking is far away from the clouds, but it is nothing like the human body.
The Foolish Old Man disappears, and the Jingwei cries.
God still shows mercy, but who can be hated for the rest of his life?
The sea can be crossed by boats, and the mountains can be crossed by roads.
This love can climb mountains and seas, and both mountains and seas can be leveled.
You can calmly think about it in your heart, and there will be no regrets when you think about it.
But you can find what you love and never give up your heart.
My love is separated by mountains and seas. Mountains and seas can be equal. Poetry appreciation:
It can be seen that this netizen writes about a helpless long-distance love. From the perspective of poetic style, the whole poem is written in ancient style. Although the meter is not very neat, it can be seen that the poet deliberately considered the parallelism.
The first four sentences start with a description of the scene. In the spring pond, the hibiscus leaves are covered with dew, the air is fresh, and there are few pedestrians on the winding road. It does not directly describe the appearance of the protagonist, but writes it from the first point of view. These few sentences actually set the tone of the poem: coldness and loneliness.
The next four sentences continue to describe the scenery. The mist in the mountains was gorgeous under the setting sun, and the sounds of orioles were heard in my ears. Following the sounds, I looked into the wind and saw flowers falling all over the ground.
These four sentences are both visual and auditory. Basically, each sentence has a scene, and it is catchy to read. It is worth noting that because it is written from the first perspective, the changes in the scenes in the middle eliminate the need for connectives, which is very clever.
After writing this, the style of poetry becomes cooler in the next few sentences. The shadow of the moon was reflected on the water, and waves of cold air seemed to come from under the skin. Even the dew looked so cold, making people doubt that it was already dawn.
At this time, the poet was confused in time. It seems that this confusion is only due to the coldness of the outside world, but in fact all coldness comes from the heart, which naturally leads to the next 4 sentence.
Because love cannot be found and meeting cannot be seen, the poet's steps are heavy and the scenery in front of him is so desolate. It is precisely because of all the exaggeration in the early stage that when "the love is separated by mountains and seas, mountains and seas cannot be leveled" is finally said in one sentence, it will be full of appeal and the emotion will reach a climax.
All scenery and language are sentimental, and this poem basically achieves this. There was one person in the Southern Song Dynasty who used this method of writing very "superbly". She was Li Qingzhao.
Everyone can read Li Qingzhao’s love words, whether they are “There is no way to eliminate this love, so I only lowered my brows, but it was in my heart”, or “This is the first time, how can I say “sorrow”?, she What I'm best at is using a lot of line drawing in the early stage, and letting the emotions burst out in the end. Although this young poet does not have the writing power of Li Qingzhao, he has actually learned some of this writing method.
We read this poem carefully. Although it is not perfect, we can see that the poet put his heart into the setting and rendering. All the choices of imagery are actually carefully arranged. There is a slow transfer in space and a span in time, and the emotions also progress layer by layer along with the words. This is its brilliance.