(Original title) The students have just learned the Chinese textbook seven times. You must remember Deng Jiaxian who devoted himself to the scientific research of the motherland, Wen Yiduo who was angry with the enemy pistol, Lu Xun who sought the way to save the country and the people, the Red Army soldier who overcame difficulties and crossed the old mountain, and the explorer Captain Nemo who devoted himself to science ... These people are all heroes in our minds; There are such heroes in real life.
Please write a narrative on the topic "I admire such a hero".
Requirements: (1) Combine your own reading experience or life experience; (2) the number of words is not less than 600 words; (3) No real names such as names, place names and schools are allowed.
This essay topic is full of positive energy, which is very meaningful. However, this topic is not good. "You must remember Deng Jiaxian who died for the scientific research of the motherland, Wen Yiduo who was angry for the enemy's pistol, Lu Xun who worked hard to find a way to save the country and the people, the Red Army soldier who overcame many difficulties and climbed the old mountain, and the explorer Captain Nemo who died for science ..." These are all heroes in the book. Their deeds are earth-shattering and touching. However, life in the book is far from children. Such hints have little effect on students' writing.
Secondly, the teacher's understanding of the word "hero" is too single. And look up the meaning of "hero". In Modern Chinese Dictionary, the meaning of "hero" has three nouns of 1, namely, a person with superb skills and extraordinary courage, two nouns, an admirable person who fought bravely for the interests of the people despite difficulties, and three adjectives with heroic qualities.
Obviously, the three meanings of "hero" apply to the first and second in this composition topic. From Deng Jiaxian to Wen Yiduo, to Lu Xun and Red Army soldiers, Captain Nemo was far away from students' lives. But the questioner's understanding of heroes seems to be limited to the second item, and only understands heroes as those who are brave and fearless and sacrifice themselves for the benefit of the people. In the busy, tense and ordinary study life of students, where can there be so many such heroes? Where can I get close to such a hero?
Of course, some people will say that today's epidemic is a war without smoke. In the process of fighting the epidemic, there are a lot of heroic heroes who sacrifice themselves for others. However, children often meet on TV and news. In the fight against the epidemic, children stick to their families, and online classes are their most ordinary life. What writing should advocate is to let students write their own real and concrete life, so as to guide students to pay attention to life, learn from the examples around them and improve themselves.
What is the second meaning of "hero"? It means outstanding talent in one aspect and "extraordinary courage". What is "extraordinary bravery" refers to his courage and self-confidence in his behavior, which produces great strength and momentum, surpasses others and has a certain (arguably greater) influence. This is a hero in a broader sense.
There are indeed many such heroes around our students. They insist on learning, dare to make progress, are ready to help others, are not afraid of difficulties, and are tenacious ... and they have played an exemplary role from silently insisting to shining and touching. I think it is the guiding significance of this topic to advocate the good qualities of perseverance, perseverance, self-confidence, friendliness, carefulness and concentration, and even the behavior that embodies the core values of socialism. This is also more suitable for students to open their minds and write more exciting exercises, so as not to write some relatively unfamiliar characters in TV news and shout slogans in vain.
Then, can you make the following changes to the tips of the composition?
"You must remember Deng Jiaxian, who devoted himself to the scientific research of the motherland, Wen Yiduo, who sought the way to save the country and the people, Lu Xun, who overcame difficulties and climbed the old mountain, and Captain Nemo, who was an explorer devoted to science ... these are all heroes in the book, and their deeds were earth-shattering and touching. However, heroes also refer to those who are skilled and brave. They are either dedicated and persistent in their studies, or very optimistic and tenacious in the face of difficulties, or care about others' care and warmth ... Whether it is the protagonist in the book or the people around them, he silently persists, shines, touches people and always leads my progress. It is a hero I admire. "
A good composition topic should open students' minds and make them not find it difficult to write. It is prescriptive, not limited to one aspect, and can write rich and colorful content.