The theme of this issue is "Spring", and the works are not limited to Pingshui Rhyme and Linz Zheng Yun, but new rhymes and rhymes must be
The theme of this issue is "Spring", and the works are not limited to Pingshui Rhyme and Linz Zheng Yun, but new rhymes and rhymes must be indicated. On the premise of good rhyme and meter, artistic conception comes first. ? According to a large number of contributions, we publish on the basis of merit. Thank you for your attention and support. We welcome the author's criticism and correction, so as to make this journal better and better! ?
1.
Text/Poetry Yang Liuan (Guangdong)
Spring came to pick dreams and flowers, and bamboo and horses played willow smoke that year.
Without parting between people, there will be no wind and rain.
Invited editor comments on Pei Guanghua's writing. She said: this quatrain is in line with the rhyme of even words, and the sixth word of the third sentence, if read horizontally, is a difficult way to save yourself. The author skillfully used this method.
? The author's language is novel and fluent, as if writing about spring. When I think about it carefully, the author is using the breath of spring and the whimsy of spring to deeply express his thoughts on his childhood friends. Between the lines, it reveals the sadness of human parting, which is really ingenious and unconventional.
2. Seven Temperaments, Spring
Text/Mountain City Juren (Guangdong)
The east wind only warms the trees in March and flowers in the garden.
After ten days of rain and cold, a clear cloud dawned.
Pour a pot of old wine at dusk and pick dreams and flowers in spring.
I suddenly feel cold by the window. I wish I could fall asleep with the first thunder.
3. Seven laws? Jiangnan early spring
Text/worry-free ninja? (Jiangxi)
In February, the willows in the south of the Yangtze River shook, and Yan Zi's make-up contact lenses dazzled in front of the eaves.
Every time a singer wants to get drunk, it's full of rain.
The wave halo is Puqing Fu Bi, and the beautiful colors are covered with mountains, green and red.
Peach Garden is full of spring dreams, and the flowers are magnificent.
The editorial comments are magnificent, and the analysis is as follows:
Willow shakes the wind, purple swallow dazzles spring. This new green is overwhelming, with a few warblers and a few spring rains, green as waves.
The fresh and bright spring is so beautiful. In the dream of Peach Blossom Garden, the fragrance of flowers bursts and the breeze blows gently, which is refreshing and intoxicating.
4. Lin Jiangxian? Visit Phoenix Island again in spring to enjoy peach blossoms.
Text/Huang Zhuoqun (Guangdong)
The east wind blows green all night, and peach blossoms fly red. There is thick green smoke floating on the shore of Phoenix Island. The bamboo fence hides beautiful colors, and the fragrant path is drunk and charming.
On this day, I returned to the grassland and the swallows flew without a trace. Life comes too fast and goes too fast. Think about the past with columns and ask the sky with wine.
Editor's comment: It was written by Tian Xin, with the word spectrum Linjiang Xianyou 1 1. The teacher didn't tell the editor, and I don't know which one. Later, he told me that it was He Zhuti, which was tested to rhyme with Fa! "Linjiang Xian" has 60 words with two tones, the first five sentences and the last five sentences, and three rhymes. This is He Zhu's style. Huang Lin Jiang Xian teacher? In spring, I revisited Phoenix Island and enjoyed the peach blossoms. The phrase "the east wind blows green all night, and countless peach blossoms fly red" makes people feel that spring is coming and the smell of spring is fragrant. Then I told the readers where this beautiful spring was and explained it clearly. Poetic and picturesque, indicating that "the bamboo fence hides beautiful colors and the fragrant path is drunk and charming." Returning to the grassland, the flying swallows disappeared without a trace "describes a beautiful picture scroll, and the key point of the inscription is," Life is in a hurry, and we can't get together or leave. The beauty of "thinking about the past by leaning on the bar" causes the author to think, and the way of thinking is "wine", which gives people infinite reverie and beautiful words, so read and appreciate it!
5. Seven Laws? Yin is a matter of winter and spring.
Text/Uncle Yu (Shanghai/Wuhan)
I have been in Chu and Wu all my life in order to stay up late and send photos to Jianghu.
The snow in Zhaoguan cage returns to the guests at night, and the reptiles in Mianshui trap the old people.
Hit the rhyme to find the Wei and Jin dynasties, fly empty and worry about the fire and sigh Russia and Ukraine.
Is there no warmth in front of the post office when the east wind blows at first?
Editors commented on Tian Xin's writing, and Mr. Yu Shu's masterpiece "Seven Laws" is to do things when winter goes and spring comes. The antithesis is neat, the rhyme is standardized, and the statutes are harmonious. The characteristics of this poem are that it is thought-provoking to quote classics into the poem; The author and I are colleagues who have never met before. My hometown is Wuhan and I work in Shanghai. The degree of hardship can be imagined. I know my life like the back of my hand, and I can learn a thing or two by exploring his poems. Read and enjoy learning!
6. Have tea with friends in the lotus garden in the spring morning.
Text/Zeniu (Zhejiang)
In the morning, the lake mirror floats, and the porch window sits on the terrace.
The air clears the bird feathers, and the willow color surrounds the pool.
The dense trees are full of voices and the air traffic control is full of music.
The fragrance of tea and fresh water came out and dispersed into a spring outing.
7. The color of spring in Chen Jing.
Text/Xiao Zhibao (Jingmen)
The water is waist-high, and the vegetables in the field are fragrant.
Hearing the sound of looking for an ancient temple, I turned my attention to Hengtang.
The bird pecked at the village girl's hand, and the wind blew the leaves of Pu Ye.
Butterflies and bees come to soak honey, which is full of spring.
8. Four musts, fragrant peaches and plums
Text/Wei Wei (Ji 'an, Jiangxi)
Li Bai's peach blossoms are full of branches, and birds are singing in the sky.
The inscription is full of lofty sentiments, and the spring breeze in February is poetic.
The editor commented on Jing Yi's writing style, and she said: Wei Wei's Four Wonders are closely related to the theme, with a strong sense of rhyme and rhythm, distinct levels and a blend of scenes.
The first sentence comes straight to the point, showing a picturesque spring scene with birds singing and flowers singing, while the last two sentences turn to nature, writing lyrical scenery and having something in mind. "The inscription is full of pride, and the spring breeze in February is full of poetry." Poetic and picturesque, make readers intoxicated!
9. The word "water" is the beginning of the song.
Huangshihai early spring
Text/Zeng Xianming? (Hubei)
Anti-magic sends away winter, and Xue Mei welcomes back to spring. Who is calling the east wind and blowing the green bank slope? The drizzle wakes me up, and the fog reveals peach cheeks and smiles, fearing to miss the spring season. More wild flowers are small, winding paths waiting for the sun to shine.
Arch bridge hidden, lake island light, waterfowl chasing. The sea of lions is vast and misty. Watch the winding detours, listen to fishing boats chasing waves, close the net and sing back. Looking back on the road, willow warblers are singing in ten miles.
Note: Huangshihai is the lakeside of the airport community.
10. Ten thousand mu of rape field in Xiaosi enjoys flowers and pursues spring.
Text/Liu Tianhua (Wuhan)
Enjoy it and chase the spring near cauliflower. The future is limitless.
Gold wins the favor of poetry, and Xiumei wins the praise of the public.
Seed pressed sesame oil nourishes the country, and cake fat helps Sang Ma.
The scale economy is new, and scientific breeding is promising.
Invited editor comments on Mr. Chen Houcheng's article. He said that Miss Liu Tianhua's "Looking at Flowers and Chasing Spring in Ten Thousand Mu Rape Fields" is a beautiful and lyrical pastoral spring scene. Rape flowers emerge in an endless stream, with economies of scale and scientific cultivation, which has a great momentum. The color of the poem is golden, which is praised by many people. This is the most wonderful description of flowers. The author has rich associations, from flowers to seeds, from seeds to oil and cakes. The land supports people, people plow the fields, and nature is harmonious. The seven laws are fluent in writing, harmonious in sound and rhyme, and neat in antithesis, which is worth appreciating.
1 1. Chunyong
? Text/Wang Shunlan (Wuhan)
The splendid exhibition of China is full of spring and the earth is full of color.
Apricot flowers are shy and peach blossoms are charming and attractive.
The weather is fine, the sun is shining and the birds are singing and dancing.
The fragrance everywhere urges you to sleep, elegant and beautiful.
12. Silver Lake Spring
Text/Zeng Fanhan? (Wuhan)
Mo Dao Dong Jun visited late, and the garden was green and good for poetry.
Pray for the plague to stay away from people, and plan to hang the spring heart on the willow branches.
Editor's comment on Tian Xin's writing, the author and I are a family, and all the poems and songs are here. At the same time, I am the editor of many poetry couplets and my teacher. This "Silver Tiger Spring" is a continuation of nature. This year, the focus is still on fighting the epidemic. The author prays that "the epidemic will be far away from people" and concludes with the wonderful pen "I intend to hang spring on willow branches". In one word, wonderful! Read and enjoy learning!
13. Sixteen-character order (three)
Text/Longmen Inn (Zhaoqing, Guangdong)
One:
In spring,
Last night, the vegetation in Qian Shan was new.
On a sunny day,
Swallows are at dusk.
Two:
In spring,
Wan Tian swept away the old dust.
In a hurry,
There are traces of winter in several places.
Three:
In spring,
I want to ask Tianya to make a snowman.
Looking back,
Tao Rui man gan Kun
14. Seven rhymes, two rhymes, Yu Shu's "People's Sounds in Winter and Spring are Things"
Text/Yang Liuan (Yichang, Hubei)
Once bought a sword to learn from Sun Wu, he naturally threw a shot to catch the five lakes.
There are three Chu Shi between bamboo leaves and green leaves, and a farmer who grows flowers and vegetables.
Occasionally singing is worth a pine-edged crane, lying drunk and peeping at the house.
When spring wakes up, let him get something in autumn.
Tian Xin wrote an editorial. Originally, I meant to let the original author write a comment to express his gratitude to the author of the second rhyme. Because the original is busy, I can't reply, and I have to publish it, so I can't bear to write a few words. First of all, secondary rhyme is a Chinese vocabulary, which refers to a way of writing ancient poetry. According to the rhyme and rhyme order of the original poem. The second rhyme is a way to reconcile poetry. Also known as rhyme.
The secondary rhyme requires the author to use the original rhyme and original words in the same order as the poem, which is the most restrictive one in the poem, that is, the original rhyme and original words are combined in the original order. The author of the original poem and the author of the harmony poem are good friends, and they are also good friends with me. The biggest feature of the original poem and the poem is that it is quoted into the poem, which is thought-provoking; Elegant language, elegant and free and easy. Both of them have high poetic quality, so I won't explain them in detail. Readers will slowly taste and enjoy reading and learning!
15. Four-stop spring
Text/Phoenix Song (Shenzhen)
The spring is chilly and warm, and the branches of the mangrove trees are full of spring.
Colorful lanterns are red as fire and green is about to drip.
16. Return to the earth in spring
Text/Wu Weimin (Wuhan)
China is famous everywhere, and hundreds of towns and villages are busy with everything.
The grass in Jianghan Plain is green, and the cauliflower on both sides of Jingxiang River is yellow.
Men serve the country and preach three Chu, while women leave their relatives and walk around.
I hope the year-end income is good, and I will go back to my hometown with laughter.
The editor commented on Tan Dede's writing style, and he said: I appreciate the seven laws of Wu Hanmin, a poet in Wuhan, Hubei. Now enjoy it.
In "Spring Comes Back to the Earth", the first couplet is written about China's rural areas, which are famous everywhere, busy with everything and always ahead of the whole poem. It is a vast drunken scene of Jianghan Jingxiang returning to the earth in spring: the grass is green and the cauliflower is yellow, like an infinite watercolor painting. Men and women bid farewell to their country and go to the world: spread three dreams, travel around the world and be ambitious. At the end of the couplet, I expressed my wish: travel around the world, strive for good returns, and go home for a family reunion dinner with laughter at the end of the year, which is a happy family! We should not only serve our country, but also manage our family, and be happy in the face of reality!
The content of this poem is very good, which is a true portrayal of the real life of migrant workers all over the country. The language is concise and fresh, fluent and natural, elegant and popular. Structurally, the total score is total and natural. It would be even more icing on the cake if you were more diligent about the opposite of the transfer. In a word, the combination of thought and art in this poem is perfect and has a strong sense of the times. Songs and poems should keep up with the times and sing the charm of China. Jane's ambition is to promote and entrust me with my views on poetry!
17. Spring outing in Lv Qi
Text/Zou Daojun? (Wuhan)
There are green fields and yellow willows hanging down by the lake in Zhang Bi.
It was raining, and Xia Yingtian was invited by dawn.
Birds sing to welcome guests, butterflies fly to meet Gao Xian drunk.
Delicate peaches and tender buds laugh heartily, and beauty dissipates nature.
18. Lv Qi pastoral spring scenery
Text/Chen Houcheng (Wuhan)
The frozen river blooms and sprouts, and the spring scenery intoxicates the farmers.
Beautiful weather, Li Bai loves flowers.
In the morning mist, dew fell from the grass, and in the sunset, Ai Cai flew into the distance.
After the most pleasant village, the slope was full of fragrance, and the girls were talking and laughing to pick green tea.
19. Tao Yong
Text/Liu? (Hubei)
When a tree begins to blossom, fresh air moistens its roots and branches.
Sing a song, sing a prosperous dream, and write a poem with flowers and elegance.
A beautiful figure appeared in Lv Yun, blushing and dancing lightly.
Looking at the garden after autumn, the pond full of flat peaches offers longevity.
20. Four Wonders? Chunxing
Text/Tan De (Hubei)
Ada was moved, Yunying danced and fell in love with Ming Jiang.
Li painted green and beautiful mountains and rivers in Karl Honnore.
2 1. Like a dream? Tanchun (Linz Zheng Yun)
Text/(Henan)
A simple poem is a poem,
Get up and walk in the garden.
Haitang is still in full bloom,
Peaches and plums compete with each other.
You know what? You know what?
Spring has come for a long time.
22. Seven laws of thimble, stepping on dust to welcome spring.
Text/Yu Yu (Fuxin, Liaoning)
Pure love is drunk, the world is red, and the world is invited.
Follow your heart, throw away the past, and look forward to the morning with great ambition.
The morning light shines on the blue sky, and the sky welcomes colorful spring.
Spring is full of butterfly dance, and the dance is graceful and pure.
23. longing for spring
Text/Wang Shihe? (Wuhan)
Stay away from the grass, flowers reflect, clear water and green mountains, rosy clouds all over the sky. An De Chun Hui faces the world, and the east wind warms the world!
24. Spring stickers are accurate to Jiang Nanchun's style
Text: Mozian (HK)
Flowers are gorgeous, clusters.
Red cotton is full of trees,
Hanging in the air like fire.
Although spring is warmer and the ice is harder to melt,
The seal is still blocked before it is closed.
Note: Ice refers to epidemic situation.
25. partridge day * drunk spring scenery
Text/Jing Yi (Suzhou)
The winding stream is quiet in Lin Jing, and the heavy buildings are covered with smog and green trees in spring.
The sound of the cold mountain clock is crisp, and the toad moonlight is soft.
With a white head and a leisurely heart, what can you ask for when flowers bloom and fall?
Hand in hand with you in the same boat, the four seasons are full of flowers.
The editor commented that it was written by Yang Jun. He said: Write the beautiful scenery of spring in the first film. The first two sentences use the images of river, river, forest, smoke, trees and buildings to write a quiet and pleasant spring scenery. "Cold mountain bells are crisp at night, and toad lights are soft." The author set off the silence of the night and the intoxicating moonlight with the bells on the cold mountain. From the perspective of writing skills, the last film is a scene in one sentence, coarse and fine, and the combination of dynamic and static forms a colorful and vibrant spring scene, which is very poetic. The elegant mood of the writer in the next paragraph. The scenery is intoxicating and intoxicating. Read this word repeatedly, and you will feel that everyone is drunk in the spring. The success of this word is not only that the author is good at observing things, but also that the author is good at observing things. The whole poem revolves around the word "drunk", expressing feelings in the scene, revealing the poet's happy and relaxed mood between the lines, praise!
26. Go for an outing
Text/Yan Guanghua? (Wuhan)
In the early morning, the western suburbs are bright and the willows are misty.
The rape blossoms splashed with gold, and the wheat seedlings were dyed with the wind.
Swimming in the cup, butterflies dancing, charming yinger singing through the trees.
Play with the villagers, enjoy the music in the fields and walk in the clouds.
27. Longing for love
Text/Zhao Xiaoshan (Beijing)
An inch of spring scenery is covered with brocade, and the pavilions are surrounded by willows.
At that time, the imperial garden was brightly colored, overlooking famous mountains and lush.
Dream that painting is too late to be old, and drunkenness is too late to suffer.
Who grinds peaches into ink and scatters them in the suburbs to recite.
28. Chunxing
Text/Liu (Hubei)
Deep red and fragrant, the sunrise reflects the blue pool.
The beautiful wind shakes thousands of trees and green trees, and it smells strange and rainy.
Frog singing creek welcomes guests, and birds sing branches into the corridor.
Outside the building faint intoxicated, peach magpie Man Chun.
29. "Guizi Ballad Spring"
Linz Zheng Yun? Part six? Zhang Xiaoxiang's body.
Words? /? Sun (Kaifeng)
In spring, the plum blossoms outside the Great Wall are a little new. Smile in spring, proud of your red lips.
In spring, willows spit out traces of goose yellow snow. The east wind is warm, and it enters late spring in a blink of an eye.
In spring, the grass grows and the warbler flies. Flowers are in full bloom, and sisters step on green grass.
30. Spring Festival music (new rhyme)
Text/Feng Wenquan? (Chongqing)
Winter plum returns after snow, and spring mud is bright.
Add shade to the village head and irrigate Qingtian after listening to the rain.
The rivers and mountains are beautiful, and the trees are all buds when they wake up.
Farmers look forward to a good year when they catch up with the bad times.
3 1, Qiu Feng (Fuxin, Liaoning)
Text/Spring Breeze (New Rhyme)
Spring returns to Wan Musheng, and Qingchuan is beautifully painted.
Flowers bloom in the country road, and the wind blows from the hut.
Boys swim happily on the grass, and old people love the sunset glow.
The mountains are full of new green, and it is another year of rain and dew.
32. Five laws? Chunyan
Text/Kong Fanyin (Jiangsu)
Mei drives to the east, Yan Zi and Chun chirp.
Wanli's voice was urgent, so he took a break to worry.
Only fate and messenger, in case the mail goes wrong.
Cut willows through Zhujiajian, and peach blossoms are rewarded with smiles.
Editorial Department of Yue Shi Quan Yun
Members of the invited advisory group of the Literary Society:
1. Li Wenchao, former executive vice president of Chinese Poetry Society. The ranks of political commissar, director and major general of China People's Liberation Army Television Publicity Center.
2. Zhong Zhen Zhen, President of China Phonology Society and Vice President of Chinese Poetry Society. Director of Institute of Literature, Nanjing Normal University, doctoral supervisor.
3. Wang Jiao, Senior Colonel of China People's Liberation Army, Vice President and Secretary General of Chinese Poetry Society.
4. Lin Leimeng, Vice President of Chinese Poetry Society and Deputy Editor of China Poetry magazine.
5. Zhang, Executive Vice President of Hubei Reportage Society and Vice President of Hubei Couplet Society.
6. Jiang Xinwen, member of Hubei Poetry Society and former vice president of Hubei Couplet Society.
President:? Tian Xin mumuxin
Vice president:? Mingji tianxia
Editor in chief:? Remember the world (simultaneously)
Deputy editor:? Yoguro? fierce
? Where is Jing? Yang Jun
Editorial board:? Jing yi? Qiu Feng
? German army beach
? Walk by the river
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Copy that:? Yang Jun (simultaneously)
Coordinator: Tian Xin Mumuxin (concurrently)
Headline inscription:? Jiang Xinwen