The poem begins with a description of the rainstorm, and the first half and the second half use two techniques. In traditional terms,
Say, it is the proportion before assignment. Its first couplet is very distinctive, which describes the atmosphere just before the rain. In the thick that can't be dialed
When the clouds piled up very low, a thunder came from the clouds, indicating that a storm was coming. Secondary correlation, three
One sentence is imagination, and four sentences are personal experience. Du Fu's "Taiqing Palace Fu" says: "The cloud of nine days hangs low all over the world."
The purpose of water is to stand. "Su Shi at this time can't help but think of this amazing sentence created by his beloved predecessors, and
Rain with the wind has come from the east and naturally anchored. In the second half of the poem, the author uses several metaphors in succession.
To describe this rainstorm. Write rain, but it seems that the wine in the golden cup is higher than the cup surface, and write rain.
In desperation, it's like a Capricorn, which is pointed out by thousands of people, full of knocking sound. Evaluate Su Shi's beauty at that time.
There was a banquet in the hall, and there was drum music in the banquet, so I saw the scene and felt the situation because I was close. But the poet's imaginative power is not.
At this time, he suddenly thought of the story of another beloved predecessor Li Bai. This rainstorm may be
In order to make Li Bai sober up quickly, God wrote many magnificent poems, so
Spilled rain on his face. So as to fully express their inner activities.
Everyone has experienced heavy rain, but only poets can describe this universality, and.
The fleeting scenery is endowed with eternal meaning, thus showing its beauty. But we must pay attention to Sue.
History is about the rainstorm on the mountains in coastal cities, not the rainstorm elsewhere; At the same time,
What he wrote was a poet's unique imagination and feelings, not others'.
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Appreciation: The first couplet of this poem is about the coming storm. On the one hand, this sentence shows the characteristics of thunder on the ground before heavy rain in summer; On the other hand, it also reflects the high terrain of the mountain. After describing the thunderbolt on the flat ground, the dialogue continued to write about the dark clouds. The so-called "stubborn cloud" and the so-called "unable to open" vividly show that the dark clouds are deep and dense, indicating that the air pressure is extremely low and the air seems to be solidified. Dark clouds are low and dense, charged clouds are close to the ground, and thunder seems to rise from the ground. Judging from natural phenomena, these two sentences should be inverted. The author writes thunder first, then clouds, which makes this poem more magical.
Before describing the prelude to the rainstorm, Lian Yuan went on to write the scene of the rainstorm from far to near. As far as the wind is concerned, "black" is the antithesis of the first couplet, describing the dark scene at that time. "Blowing the sea" is an extreme exaggeration of the fury of the wind, and it is an association generated by the overturning of water blown by the wind.
When describing the prospect of heavy rain, the neck couplet used two metaphors to describe the momentum of heavy rain. I heard about this game and wrote down this fast rain. This couplet uses the words "golden bottle picture" and "Jie Gu reminder" to compare the sound of rain and rain respectively, which makes the article vivid and appropriate, and makes people see and hear it.
Couplets are still about rain, but they are very different. The fact that Li Bai was drunk writing poems and it rained heavily inspired his own poetic thinking. He should write beautiful poems like Li Bai. In this way, the poem is not a simple description of the rainstorm, but can be written in a way that makes the poem shine.
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The poetic Zhong Lu is magnificent.
-Appreciation of Su Shi's poem "Rainstorm in Youmeitang"
A thunderous sound, like shaking from the feet of tourists to the feet, has a beautiful hall and thick clouds, which can't be opened. In the distant horizon, the wind moves with the clouds, and the sea stands like a mountain. A rainstorm, which crossed the Qiantang River from eastern Zhejiang, hit Hangzhou. The west lake is like a golden cup, full of rain, almost overflowing; The rain beat against the forest in the lake, making people feel relaxed and happy. I really want to wake up the drunken Li Bai, wash his face with the waterfall in this mountain, and show him that this scene is like everything in the palace.
Dongpo's ci is "unique", which is characterized by boldness. Su Shi's poems actually catch up with Li Bai, and there are many bold and magnificent works, such as the rainstorm in Youmeitang. "Ou Bei Shi Hua" contains: "There is a cloud in Edgar Allan Poe's poems:' If you exercise your poetry, you will get lead and silver'. But Poe's poems really don't take exercise as a job, but the beauty lies in the ethereal and natural outflow of the soul, which looks completely refreshing and natural, which is unique. " Reading "Rainstorm in Beautiful Hall", the intuitive poetry sounds like a bell road, the weather is compelling, the scene is super moving, the poetry is like a spring, and there is no carving mark.
This poem was written in the sixth year of Xining (1073), and Su Shi was sentenced to Hangzhou. Hangzhou is a scenic spot, especially the West Lake. There is Wu Shan in the southeast corner of West Lake, which is high and open, close to the lake, and the mountains are not high and beautiful. The "Beautiful Hall" on the mountain was built by Meizhi, the magistrate of Hangzhou in the second year of Jiayou. In the early autumn of the sixth year of Xining, Su Shi was drinking in a beautiful hall and was caught in a rainstorm. He improvised this seven-character poem.
The first couplet writes Shanghai Dawn first. A thunderbolt suddenly came, as if it sounded at your feet. In a blink of an eye, dark clouds are gathering, which can't be shaken, and there is a tendency for dark clouds to overwhelm. This couplet is magnificent and vigorous, rendering the amazing momentum of the sudden rainstorm in early autumn. Zhuan Xu wrote that the rainstorm suddenly poured down. Beyond the sky is still far away; The first book "Black Wind" is crazy about clouds and black wind, and it is dark in an instant, which describes the terrible scene that heaven and earth are eclipsed when the rainstorm pours; "Blowing the Sea to Stand at Attention" describes the scene of turbulent sea water and wild waves standing like mountain walls with exaggerated imagination. Where is the water? Xie, the author of Five Miscellanies, explained this sentence with his own personal experience: "Yu ... I was sent to the sea, and there was a dragon in the middle, hanging upside down in the clouds, still a hundred feet away from the water, and the water was like smoke, which was really connected." People can see it clearly. I believe that there is nothing wrong with the language' water station'. " Wu Shan is far from the sea, so Su Shi can't actually see the sea. But the southeast of Wu Shan is the mouth of Qiantang River, which makes sense. The antithetical sentence "It rained in eastern Zhejiang over Jiang Lai" is consistent with the sentence and is physical and mental. The strong wind came to the other side of the river with heavy rain, and together with the scene described in the sentence, it formed a stormy spectacle of heaven and earth. Su Shi's couplets are extremely exaggerated, imaginative and broad. The predecessors' evaluation is "strong"!
The first two couplets write rain, from far to near. The neckline is the scene in front of you. What is the scene of the West Lake under the beautiful hall at the moment? Su Shi, with his fantastic ideas, is extremely small compared with Haitian. He compared the West Lake to a "golden jar", with rough waves and pouring rain, and the golden jar was full of nectar. The word "convex" vividly depicts the shape of a "golden vase" filled with water, which sets off the rain from the side. Looking at the open water surface of the West Lake in the distance, Su Shi imagined it as a huge sheepskin drum. The dense rain columns are like thousands of drums and hammers, and countless drums and hammers fall alternately, which is really shocking. The torrential rain and the surging rain are vividly rendered through this metaphor.
The tail couplet further writes rain. The layout of the first three lines is very large, and the rain is written in front, but Su Shi is still unfinished and finds another way. This couplet implies that Li wrote a poem after drinking liquor. "Supplement to National History" says: "White is in Hanlin, and you drink more. Xuanzong ordered you to write lyrics, and you couldn't wait to get drunk. With water, you can write more than a dozen chapters with a little movement. " "Wake up the fallen immortal to sprinkle noodles in spring" means that this rainstorm is the spring water sprinkled on Li Bai to sober him up, which is only literal. In order to explain the difference in the sentence, I quote Explain the Difference: "There is a Jiao Ren room in the South China Sea. Water lives like a fish, so we don't waste knitting. Its eyes will cry, and tears will produce beads. " "Turn the shark room upside down and drop beautiful roses" means that the downpour is the pearl that rolled out when the shark room fell down. This couplet should be a whole metaphor. Su Shi took Li Bai as a metaphor, and Li Bai was endowed with musical words by spring water. Su Shi was inspired by the torrential rain, splashing ink like Li Bai, and improvising poems as magnificent as pearls and emeralds. This couplet is a pun, and the front is written about rain, but it coincides with Su Shi's excitement and pride caused by rain.
This poem is a famous one among Su Shi's poems, which is highly praised by predecessors and considered as a "great work". So talented, why Tang poetry? "