Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words according to your own feelings and associations. (∞ point)
The window is a photo frame. Looking out of the window, you can see a round picture. Some people see elegance, some people see vulgarity, some people see noise, some people see silence. ...
Requirements: ① Choose the right angle and correct your mentality; 2 self-made topics; (3) Except poetry, the style is not limited; (4) distinctive stylistic features. Expert analysis
First, the proposition inheritance
In 2009, Shandong Volume was a propositional composition with the title of "Witness"; 20 10 is a material composition, which is based on a living story of lev tolstoy; 20 1 1 year is a propositional composition entitled "The world needs you"; 20 12 is a material composition, based on "a proverb of Sun Yat-sen"; 20 13 is a material composition, with "finding the wrong words for mo Yan" as the material. This year is still a material composition, with "everyone sees different scenery outside the window" as the material. We can see that the propositional form of Shandong Volume is basically a propositional composition and a new material composition alternately, which not only avoids guessing the topic, but also effectively increases the discrimination of the composition. Judging from the content of the proposition, the composition of 20 14 Shandong college entrance examination highlights the characteristics and traditions of Shandong people's propositions and the scientific spirit of pragmatic innovation. From the way of proposition, the proposer pays attention to real life, focusing on "window" and "scene" and highlighting the subtle relationship between subject and object, which is both realistic and intuitive and profoundly influential. Looking at the composition topics of Shandong volume since 2009, it is not difficult to find that Shandong volume is often propositioned by a sentence or a meaningful thing. 20 10 should grasp the key word "light and shadow" in the topic, while 20 12 takes Sun Yat-sen's epigram as the topic, which further improves the requirements for candidates' ability. Generally speaking, this year's topics tend to be simple, providing candidates with a number of keywords to start with. As long as you hold your horses and patiently examine the questions when you answer, your composition will certainly play a better level.
Second, the characteristics of the test questions
Paying attention to life, self and social phenomena around us has distinct personality characteristics. 20 14 The materials given in the composition of Shandong Volume are closely related to real life. China is maturing, and China needs a further vision, a more mature mentality, a higher cultural background and a higher humanistic quality to go further.
Guide candidates to think freely, learn to look at the world with a positive and healthy attitude, and live a smart life. 20 14 The essay topic of Shandong Volume is very open, and the materials provide a very broad "picture". Candidates can look at the clouds and enjoy the sunset through the "window" according to their own preferences. According to their own experiences and feelings, candidates have a high degree of freedom, which also reflects the tolerance of science and democracy.
Thinking about the world of subject and object contains a profound dialectical relationship. This year's essay topic of Shandong Paper requires candidates to dialectically look at the relationship between subject (viewer) and object (picture outside the window). The person who observes the world is the subject, the picture is the object, and the window is only the medium and way. People are subjective, the picture is a realistic existence, and the cognition of the subject constitutes the colorful objective picture. Grasping this relationship also grasps the core of proposition writing.
Third, writing ideas
20 14 Shandong college entrance examination composition turned its vision to the world outside the window. In the subtle relationship between man and painting, window and landscape, materials contain a wider range of potential play space. As far as the examination of questions is concerned, the materials closely surround and point to a center-the subject-object relationship between people and pictures.
1. conceived from the perspective of people and painting. Different people or a person facing the same picture from different angles will naturally see or understand different meanings and connotations. Only by seeing or feeling the connotation of the picture can we reveal different reasons, and then think about changing the circle and innovating life with actions.
2. From the heartfelt scene. Every phase is born of the heart, and all scenery is the heart. The picture outside the window is a tortuous reflection of my own mentality. The world is wonderful, and my heart knows it; Only by adjusting ourselves can we appreciate beauty and enrich our wonderful life.
3. From the point of view of "I". Focusing on the theme of looking through the window, we emphasize that self-awareness and mentality are the main factors that change the world. Therefore, we can write from the perspective of the world mind and mood in life and social reform.
4. Conception from the perspective of renewing ideas and correcting positions. The difference between elegance and vulgarity in the world lies in the different understanding of the positional relationship between "self" and "picture": taking "my heart" as the main body or "picture" as the main body.
When the subject gives feedback to writing, it reflects the turning point of the renewal of the concept of the times, and it is more speculative to put forward his own changes.
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5. From the perspective of lowering our sights and building a harmonious world. In society, everyone is a landscape. Only by lowering oneself and observing people with a low attitude can we find the splendor of others, coordinate our relationship with others and realize our own value.
6. From the perspective of wonderful eyes and intelligent life. The world is still that world, and the reason why the "picture" is different lies in the different perspectives and qualities of the spectators. There is something in painting, and painting is life. Through painting, we should see the tolerance of the world, the insight of the world and the cultural background of the world. Because a person's success depends on his insight; The revival and development of a nation depends on its tolerance and long-term vision.