[original poem]
E ri duo Feng Xue zhi bian
This is the only height I can conquer at present:
I leaned out my forehead carefully,
Be amazed at the thin wall
The sun has been wandering for a long time towards the snow.
Is decisively jumping into an infinite gravity.
Sand and gravel from mountains and seas slide down from time to time,
The brown abyss buzzes from top to bottom,
Like the cry of a distant army.
My knuckles wedged into the crack of the boulder like rivets.
Thousands of torn palms oozed blood from the soles of their feet.
Oh, I really want an eagle or a snow leopard to be with me.
On the corroded rock wall;
But there is a pitifully small spider.
Enjoy this gift from nature silently with me.
Comfortable.
[Appreciation of the poem "Edo Snow Peak Edge" I]
This is a self-portrait of a climber.
The sentence is simple: "This is the only height I can conquer at present." The words "at the moment" and "only" imply multiple meanings: this height is not the "extreme" of "all other mountains are dwarfed under the sky". , but "I" went all out to achieve it; This does not mean that "I" can't reach a new height in the future (or the next moment), nor does it mean that the height at this moment is insignificant. After all, it was a difficult conquest. This sentence also implies that I have conquered one height after another, the gap between goals and efforts, and some kind of decision to take a breath first. As if it were a reward for all the hardships, "I" was surprised to see a magnificent scene of a snowy peak sunset, a long sentence with endless overlap and strange rise, which said that the sun finally jumped into the mountains and seas after a long time. I have never seen anyone organize the tension and momentum of the sunset so finely in one sentence. Long sentences are easy to write or cumbersome or loose or delayed, but the image density here is