Gorky's clock
Appreciation: this sentence uses metaphor, symbol and personification to write the ruthlessness of the clock, reminding us to cherish time.
In autumn, people step on it and put it on their hair, which seems to fall on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally. Is it bright gold and gold?
-Yu Guangzhong's "Left Hand Palmprint"
Appreciation: This sentence uses figurative rhetoric, comparing fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid.
Snow-white makes people illusory, cold makes people awake, endless momentum makes people hard to breathe, and cold makes people's eyes sour.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Listening to Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping to express the phonological beauty of words and the Leng Yan and sadness of snow.
The petals are still bright and dazzling when they fall to the ground, like the feathers of a big bird being offered to the altar and leaving with a heroic and sad song.
-Zhang Kangkang's "Peony Rejected"
Appreciation: This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device, comparing fallen flowers to feathers, which shows the outstanding charm of peony.
The orange-red house, like an old monk in a bright cassock, bowed his head and closed his eyes, accepting the baptism of rain.
-Zhang Ailing's Autumn Rain
Appreciation: this sentence compares the house to an old monk by metaphor and rhetoric, and writes about the calm and desolate house in the rain.
Time is like a sharp knife. If it is not used properly, it will carve deep lines on the beautiful face, so that the vigorous youth will be worn away month after month and year after year.
-Zhang ailing's "Wish"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and symbolism to write his own view of time. Time is a knife, and life depends on how well you grasp it.
7 like a slap, bright red, bright red; Like a fan, flat; Like a blooming flower, it will never fade!
-"Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and parallelism to write the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, showing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.
A few friends, drawing bamboo shadows by moonlight, one you draw and the other I draw. The parameters are different, bright and dark, which actually means Chinese painting.
-Feng Zikai's Bamboo Shadow
Appreciation: A few strokes, writing scenes of several friends painting, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.
The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like flowing rivers.
Appreciate: Use figurative rhetoric to compare flowers to rivers. The language is exquisite and appealing, and the words are full of love for tung flowers, which makes readers seem to see the beautiful scenery of tung flowers all over the mountains.
He raised his eyes sadly and looked at the sky. Stars float on the quiet lake like emerald lilies.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor to describe the star very vividly, compares the star to a lily, highlights its cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to a lake, writing its calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am dying, reflecting my regret.
1 1 At this time, a bird is a leaf, and a leaf is a chirping note. On a lonely winter day, the old pagoda tree is a song.
Appreciation: This sentence compares a bird sitting on a branch to a leaf, a birdsong to a note, and an old locust tree to a song, which vividly shows the lively scene of the old locust tree in winter.
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