Analysis of group poems:
"When will there be a bright moon?" It was written by the author in the Mid-Autumn Festival in Song Shenzong on 1076 (the ninth year of Xining). Su Shi once asked to be transferred to a place near Su Zhe to be an official. In A.D. 1074 (the seventh year of Xining), Su Shi knew little about Mizhou. After arriving in Michigan, this wish still cannot be realized. On the Mid-Autumn Festival in A.D. 1076, the poet was filled with emotion in the face of a bright moon, so he wrote this famous article with a pen.
The poem "Don't Listen to the Woods and Beat Leaves" was written in the spring of the fifth year of Yuanfeng (1082), which was the third spring when Su Shi was demoted as the deputy envoy of Huangzhou (now Huanggang, Hubei) because of the Wutai poetry case. The poet and his friends went out in the spring when a storm suddenly came. Friends were deeply embarrassed, but the poet didn't care, took it calmly and walked slowly.
"Linjiang Xian Farewell to Qian Mufu" was written by Su Shi in the spring of A.D. 109 1 year (the sixth year of Yuan You, Song Zhezong) to bid farewell to his old friend Qian Mufu who moved northward from Yuezhou (now Shaoxing, Zhejiang) and passed through Hangzhou. The whole poem has changed the sentimental, sad and generous style of farewell poems in the past, and has made some innovations in statutes, resorting to bold, argumentative and frank writing, which has both charm and interest, and fully embodies the author's broad-minded and free-spirited personality.
The first part introduces the new lesson.
Teacher: Don't look at the teaching content of this lesson, listen to the information and guess the characters. There is such a man, known as the national male god, and countless women have confessed that they will marry him when they get married. Guess who he is.
Health: Li Bai!
Health: Wang Wei.
Teacher: Keep listening to the information. He is an artistic generalist, proficient in poetry, prose, calligraphy, painting and temperament; He is a master of life, cooking all kinds of delicious food and creating yoga fitness; He is a naive boy and sees that there is no one in the world who is not a good person. He can accompany the jade emperor at the top and the peddler at the bottom.
Health: I see, I see, he is Su Shi.
Teacher: It seems that you love Su Shi very much and know him very well. In this lesson, we will learn Su Shi's group poem "When will there be a bright moon?" "Set the storm? Don't listen to the sound of beating leaves resounding through the forest? " And "Linjiang Xian? Send Qian Mufu? " Approach Su Dongpo, who has been loved for a long time, and listen to the lovely and respectable soul echo of Dongpo.
The second part, first look at Dongpo and see his feelings.
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When will there be a bright moon?
Chen Bing Mid-Autumn Festival, happily drank the next morning, drunk, wrote this word, and missed my brother Su Zhe.
When did the moon begin to appear? I take my glass from a distance. I don't know the palace in the sky, and I don't know the month and time. I'm willing to ride the wind to the sky, I'm afraid I can't stand the cold for nine days in a pavilion of fine jade. Dance and enjoy the shadow of the moon, which is in the world.
The moon turned into a scarlet pavilion, hanging low on the carved window, shining on the sleepy self. The moon should not have any resentment against people. Why is it round when people are gone? People are sad and happy, and they are separated and reunited. The moon will darken or shine, and it will become round or round. Nothing is perfect, even in the past. I hope people will live for a long time and have a good scenery thousands of miles away.
Don't listen to the sound of knocking leaves through the forest
On March 7th, it was raining on Shahu Road, and all the servants with rain gear left. The same people felt embarrassed, but I didn't think so. The rain gear comes first, and the peers are in chaos. I didn't know it at first, but when I found out, I pretended to use this word.
Don't pay attention to the beating rain in the forest. Mei sings a long whistle and walks leisurely. Bamboo poles and sandals are more dexterous than riding horses. What's to be afraid of? A raincoat and hemp fiber, despite the wind and rain, still live my life.
The coolness of spring breeze awakens my wine, and the cold begins to be cold, and the peak of the sun is the sun, but it is satisfied in time. Looking back at the place where I met the wind and rain, going back, for me, there is no wind and rain, but it is still sunny.
Linjiang Song Xian Qian Mufu
Since we have been in Beijing for three years, far away from the world, you have traveled around the world. When I meet with a smile, it's still warm as spring. Your heart is like an ancient well, not water, and the peak is like a bamboo pole in autumn.
My heart is melancholy, because you want to separate the sails overnight. When you see me off, the clouds are the color of the moon. Don't frown before bottling. Life is a difficult journey, you and I are both passers-by, just like stopping at different hotels.
Teacher: Please read these three words freely, correct the pronunciation, divide the rhythm, and pay attention to the length and width when reading.
(Students) (Pinyin, Rhythm)
Teacher: Come and read When is the Bright Moon, and pay attention to the length and width.
(Original reading)
Teacher: What do you think of his handling?
Health: It is not obvious whether it is long or short.
Teacher: You try.
Health: I don't know/day/Palace Que-,today/is/when-
Teacher: After reading this, the charm of the characters is even more prominent. You read the second song.
(Original reading)
Teacher: Everyone is getting better and better. The more you read, the better. Let's read the third word together.
(All students read together)
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After reading these three words, where do you think they are similar? From this, what do you think impressed you most about Dongpo's ci?
Teacher: After reading these three words, what do you think are their similarities? What impressed you most about Dongpo's ci?
Health: These three words are full of deep feelings. The first one is about missing my younger brother and traveling. The second song was written by Su Shi after he went to play with his friends. The third one is very clear. It was written when he bid farewell to Qian Mufu.
Teacher: It seems that you attach great importance to these three words, and you have grasped their "emotional flavor". Dongpo's ci is very human.
Health: After reading it, my biggest feeling is that the feelings in the last sentence of these three words are very broad and optimistic. Su Dongpo's open-minded attitude towards life can be seen in the first song "I wish people a long time, thousands of miles away". The second song "Go home, rain or shine". The third song "Life is like a journey, and I am also a pedestrian."
Teacher: You have a good eye. You have keenly captured the last sentence of these three words, and you can also try to figure out the true meaning. Do other students have anything to add?
Health: I think these three words are all about the unique understanding of life and the poet's life experience. They are very real, and every word is from the bottom of my heart.
Teacher: Great. You comment from the perspective of literary creation. Words are true and moving only if they come from the bottom of my heart. The students are all literate people. These three words are full of deep feeling, deep feeling and broad-mindedness, which is really "only when you have feelings"!
Teacher: Please keep thinking. If you were asked to classify these three words in pairs, how would you classify them?
Health: The first two songs can be classified into one category, and there is a small preface in front of these two words, which can help us understand the background and reasons for writing the words.
Teacher: Correct me, because Chinese characters have a fixed epigraph, and there are strict regulations on the format such as level and number of words. Generally, it is not called writing, but filling in words. Can you summarize the contents of the small preface of these two words?
Health: The preface of "When is the Bright Moon" tells the time and reason of Su Shi's lyrics. He wrote this article when he was drunk and missed Yu Zi. Don't listen to the beating of leaves in the forest, The Preface to the Storm describes the different mentality of the poet and his friends in the face of wind and rain, and also tells us what kind of mood he is in when he writes lyrics.
Teacher: You are good at refining, and the teacher especially likes your explanation of Ding Fengbo. The word "mentality" is extremely accurate. Are there any other classification angles?
Health: The second and third songs can be classified into one category, both of which were written in spring.
Teacher: Specific verse.
Health: "the cold spring breeze wakes up the wine", which shows that Dingfengbo is full of spring; "Laughing as spring" shows that Linjiang Fairy should be full of spring.
Teacher: It is also a way to find clues from specific words.
Health: I have something to add. Just now I talked about the division of seasons. From the specific time point of view, I found that the first song and the third song were written at night, and there was a night with the moon.
Teacher: On a moonlit night, it's poetic and picturesque. It's absolutely true.
Part three? Read Dongpo on the second reading to understand its taste.
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Read the following words and expressions in "When will the bright moon bloom at the beginning of the flood season" and "Don't listen to the sound of beating leaves in the forest" to appreciate their true taste.
When did the moon begin to appear? I take my glass from a distance.
The moon should not have any resentment against people. Why is it round when people are gone? People are sad and happy, and they are separated and reunited. The moon will darken or shine, and it will become round or round. Nothing is perfect, even in the past.
Bamboo poles and sandals are more dexterous than riding horses. What's to be afraid of? A raincoat and hemp fiber, despite the wind and rain, still live my life.
Teacher: Su Shi's words are very personal, sometimes they don't play cards according to common sense, and they are unforgettable to read. Students, please look at these three groups of sentences. What are the similarities?
Health: These three groups of sentences are all self-questioning and self-answering. It seems that Su Shi likes to ask and answer by himself. (Laughter)
Teacher: Don't laugh. This answer is really like that. Then please read these three words carefully. What kind of feelings do you have for Su Shi? What is the beauty of these words?
(thinking)
Health: "When will there be a bright moon? Asking for wine from heaven ",Su Shi looked up at heaven as if he were a fairy and left the world. He asked the sky from a distance with a glass, and the sky, like his friend, might help him answer.
Teacher: You really have good taste. "The sky is like his friend", which is very emotional. Let's think about trends again. What do you think of from this?
Health: I think of Li Bai, who is on cloud nine and often as elegant as Su Shi. I didn't know until I read the notes after class that these two sentences were just Li Bai's poem "When the sky is high and the clouds are light, when the moon is bright?" I want to stop for a drink and ask. "
Teacher: This is interrelated. What kind of Su Shi did you see at the beginning of such a sentence?
Health: Su Shi is very heroic. At first, he felt very atmospheric.
Health: Like Li Bai, he seems to be out of touch and full of romanticism.
Teacher: Your words are becoming more and more sophisticated and accurate.
Health: I saw a Su Shi full of immortal spirit. He can travel through the past and the present. He is extraordinary.
(Laughter)
Teacher: A vivid picture of heroic and romantic Su Shi is in front of our eyes. But does Su Shi want to be an immortal who can go to heaven? Let's keep looking.
Students read together: "There should be no hate. Why should we make peace with each other? " ? People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. This matter is old and difficult. "What did you find? You can discuss it between your deskmates.
Health: I found that Su Shi hates the moon. He seems to be asking, "Why is the moon round when people are gone?" In his opinion, the moon doesn't seem to understand people's minds. Obviously her relatives are separated, she is still so glamorous and round.
Teacher: Thinking from the perspective of asking, with ideas, the moon doesn't understand and is not familiar with people's hearts. The moon is not sensible. Is Su Shi sensible?
Health: Su Shi is sensible. Under questioning, he made an explanation. "People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. This matter is ancient and difficult. " The joys and sorrows of human beings, like the ups and downs of the moon, cannot be perfect. He figured it out.
Teacher: Yes, the world is long, and nine times out of ten it is not satisfactory, but you should always think about it. You can think like this. What kind of mood do you feel when you see Su Shi?
Health: Facing the unhappiness of life and the departure of relatives, Su Shi finally looked at it with an optimistic and open-minded attitude.
Health: Su Shi doesn't care about parting, he can afford it and let it go.
Teacher: Exactly. "Affordable, affordable" is really a very broad realm of life. Let's look at this sentence in Ding Fengbo. "Bamboo straw sandals are lighter than horses. Who is afraid?" A misty rain is a lifetime. "What did you read again?
Health: Su Shi became a farmer at this moment, walking in the wind and rain with bamboo poles and sandals. He asked "who is afraid", that is to say, he is not afraid of such a life, even for the rest of his life.
Teacher: You gave the students a good start. "Who's afraid", in turn, means "Who's afraid". If you change this, what can you find? You can explain it in the first person or you can explain it yourself.
Health: Even if I am in a wild place, even if I go through hardships, I am not afraid of anyone, because my heart is calm and calm.
Teacher: This answer is very logical, conclusive and justified.
Health: Su Shi's question is ostensibly asking himself. In fact, he already has an answer in his heart, and this answer is very firm. Regardless of natural storms or life storms, he will smile and not panic.
Teacher: You have grasped the surface meaning and deep meaning of "wind and rain" and studied it deeply, reading out the general picture of your words. Su Shi is calm and philosophical in the face of wind and rain.
Teacher: Read these three words again, notice that there are two words "nothing" and "nothing" in the poem, and compare and analyze the tastes of these three words, so that you can discuss them in groups and study together.
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I don't know the palace in the sky, and I don't know the month and time.
I'm willing to ride the wind to the sky, I'm afraid I can't stand the cold for nine days in a pavilion of fine jade.
The moon should not have any resentment against people. Why is it round when people are gone?
-"When will there be a bright moon?"
Looking back at the place where I met the wind and rain, going back, for me, there is no wind and rain, but it is still sunny.
-"Set off a storm" and "A lifetime of misty rain"
Don't frown before bottling.
-"Linjiang Xian sends money to Mu Fu"
(health discussion)
Student: The teacher put these words together in "When will there be a bright moon?" During our group discussion, we found a problem. At this time, Su Shi was full of contradictions. He doesn't know what year this year is. He wants to fly to the sky, but he is afraid that he can't stand the cold at high places. I feel that Su Shi is always entangled and wandering.
Teacher: this group's inquiry is fruitful, and other groups continue to express their opinions.
Health: In fact, the Forbidden City here can also be understood as the imperial court. At that time, Su Shi wanted to go back to the imperial court to be an official, but he was afraid that young people would gossip and the emperor would be demoted if he listened again.
Teacher: That is to say, Su Shi was in a contradiction between being an official and being born. He had a faint melancholy about his career disappointment, a faint yearning for the imperial court, and a fear after yearning. Is there any other emotion in this word?
Health: There is also yearning for his son. All kinds of emotions are mixed together, and Su Shi's inner contradictions are tangled.
Teacher: So Su Shi in this poem is full of emotions, one after another. Let's look at Ding Feng. Is it the same?
Health: The word "nothing" is written in Su Shi's mind. No matter how hard he suffers, he can face life with a smile and ignore the wind and rain. Even if it is sunny, there is no wave in his heart.
Teacher: Everyone is really good at tasting words! Su Shi, who can grasp the key points, connect with the whole word, braving the wind and waves, has his mood changed too much?
Health: I don't think so. The word "Ding" in Ding Fengbo shows Su Shi's inner firmness. In this poem, Su Shi has no emotional vacillation, he has seen through life, and any problem is not a problem in his view.
Teacher: You can read and interpret this word by contacting the epigraph, which is very attentive. Indeed, Su Shi in this poem doesn't have such a big mood fluctuation, and laughs at the gains and losses of honor and disgrace, calmly and calmly. Without wind and rain, life is not afraid, calm and stable, and seek the true self.
Health: On the surface, "don't frown before drinking" means that geisha don't have to feel sad for leaving at the farewell party. In fact, it is Su Shi who comforts his friends. In the face of parting, don't be sad, be open-minded and cheerful.
Teacher: This is the core meaning that Su Shi wants to express. Parting is the normal state of life, there is no need to be sad. If these three words are put in the same space, which one is the turning point of his life mentality? Why?
Health: naturally, it is "against the wind." In this word, Su Shi put everything down, blended things with me, and didn't like things or feel sorry for himself. I think this is the biggest turning point in his mentality.
Teacher: The comments are in place. Let's summarize.
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Ding Fengbo can be regarded as a turning point of Dongpo's life mentality. In the misty rain of my life, I forgot both things. In the calm of happy-go-lucky, heaven and man are one, self-placed, not deliberate, not persistent, not casual. If there is a contradiction between being an official and being an official, a fear of slanders, and an obstacle to personal gains and losses in When there is a bright moon in Fraxinus mandshurica, then in Ding Feng, Su Shi puts aside all the gains and losses of fame and fortune, cares about honor and disgrace, and calmly comes and goes between heaven and earth, and naturally advances and retreats.
Part four? Reading Dongpo three times, slightly meaning
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"When will there be a bright moon?" It was written by the author in the Mid-Autumn Festival in Song Shenzong on 1076 (the ninth year of Xining). Su Shi once asked to be transferred to a place near Su Zhe to be an official. In A.D. 1074 (the seventh year of Xining), Su Shi knew little about Mizhou. After arriving in Michigan, this wish still cannot be realized. On the Mid-Autumn Festival in A.D. 1076, the poet was filled with emotion in the face of a bright moon, so he wrote this famous article with a pen.
Ding Fengbo, don't listen to the sound of leaves beating in the forest, written in the spring of 1082 (five years in Yuanfeng, Song Shenzong). At that time, it was the third spring when Su Shi was demoted as the deputy envoy of Huangzhou (now Huanggang, Hubei) because of the Wutai Poetry Case, and he was named "Dongpo". The poet and his friends went out in the spring when a storm suddenly came. Friends were deeply embarrassed, but the poet didn't care, took it calmly and walked slowly.
"Linjiang Fairy" was written in 109 1 year (six years in Yuan You, Song Zhezong). Su Shi got to know Hangzhou as he wished and bid farewell to his old friend Qian Mufu (name) who passed through Hangzhou from Yuezhou (now Shaoxing, Zhejiang). The whole poem has changed the sentimental, sad or generous style of farewell poems in the past, and has made some innovations in statutes, putting wonderful reasons outside the bold and unconstrained, arguing vigorously and expressing the temperament directly.
Teacher: What did you read in combination with the background of these three poems?
Health: I understand that when Su Shi was demoted, he still didn't give up on himself, but insisted on his pursuit.
Teacher: Can you be more specific?
Health: When Su Shi was demoted to Mizhou, his heart was full of contradictions, and his ideas were not realized, so there was a gap in his heart.
Health: I think Su Shi's demotion to Huangzhou is a turning point in his life. Perhaps it was the heavy blow of Wutai poetry case that made him see through life and death, fame and fortune, and achieved the unity of heaven and man.
Teacher: Everyone is still quite good. Taoism's "harmony between man and nature" can also say one or two, which is great.
Health: When Su Shi wrote Linjiang Fairy, all his wishes came true and everything went well. He encouraged his friends not to be complacent, but to comfort them wisely. Su Shi seems to regard sadness and joy as the normal state.
Teacher: You are so clever. In the third sentence, although Su Shi was in a proud position at that time, he was not proud at all and still knew his heart clearly.
Health: I agree with what the teacher said. "Life is like a reverse journey, and I am also a pedestrian" can tell his thoughts.
Teacher: If you were asked to tell your friends that you were most moved and full of philosophy of life, which ones would you choose? You can create your own situation.
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example
If my friend is thousands of miles away, I will choose "I wish him a long life. I will enjoy the bright moon with him and send my best wishes and thoughts."
Health: If I send a blessing to my friend for the Mid-Autumn Festival in August, I will choose "I wish him a long life and enjoy the bright moon with him".
Teacher: Good luck.
Health: If my friend encounters difficulties and twists and turns, I will choose "go home, no rain or shine" to comfort him and make him look down on the storms of life.
Teacher: Apply what you have learned.
Health: If I work in the future, I will be separated from my friends and face parting. I will say, "Life is like a trip, and I am also a pedestrian." In fact, we are all passers-by and pedestrians.
Teacher: You have matured a lot at once!
Part five? Read Dongpo four times and look at his heart carefully.
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Su Shi has made great achievements in poetry, ci, writing, calligraphy and painting. His poems and Huang Tingjian are called "Su Huang"; His words are bold and unconstrained, and he is also called "Su Xin" with Xin Qiji; His prose works are rich, and he is also called "Ou Su" with Ouyang Xiu, and he is one of the "Eight Masters in Tang and Song Dynasties". Su Shi is also good at books and is one of the "Song Sijia"; He is good at painting, especially at ink bamboo, strange stones and dead wood. There are seven episodes of Dongpo, Yi Zhuan of Dongpo and Yuefu of Dongpo.
Teacher: Do you like this Dongpo? Why?
Health: Naturally, Su Shi is an all-rounder in art, and both poetry and painting are masters. It's amazing!
Health: brilliant, no one can match!
Teacher: Your horoscope is very powerful.
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When Su Shi arrived in Huangzhou, he saw that it was hard for farmers to transplant rice by hand, so he invented a new transplanting tool called "Ma Yang", and Huangzhou people gave it a name, "Sumagong". Without a salary, Su Shi led his family to cultivate land, starting from Tao Yuanming and calling himself Dongpo; Without a house to live in, Su Shi led everyone to build a house and named it "Tang Xue". Seeing that Huangzhou has a bad habit of abandoning baby girls, angry Su Shi actively advocated the establishment of a rescue home. On the one hand, he sells calligraphy and painting to raise money, on the other hand, he widely raises money to save baby girls.
During his five years in Huangzhou, he wrote many well-known and colorful poems, such as Nian Nu Jiao, Nostalgia on Red Cliff, Fu on Red Cliff, Wind Rising, A misty rain all his life, Fairy in Linjiang, Drunk at Dongpo at night, Buji, Hanging Shutong without a Moon, etc., and he also created the so-called world first.
-Si Yanping's tearful laughter
Teacher: Do you like this Dongpo? Why?
Health: Su Shi has done so many good things for the country and the people, and the people will never forget him, especially saving the baby girl, which moved me very much.
Teacher: Dongpo of compassion.
Health: Su Shi changed from a big official to a farmer, and farmed by himself. He is diligent and pragmatic and never complains about others.
Teacher: Su Shi is great in any line of work!
Health: It is admirable that Su Shi did not sink in Huangzhou and made such great achievements in literature.
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In A.D. 1089, Su Shi went to Hangzhou as a university student in Longtuge, and from then on, Hangzhou began a brand-new atmosphere. That year, Hangzhou suffered from plague, severe drought and no harvest for the people. After Su Shi came to power, from the beginning of curing the plague, the government set up Anlefang to treat the people free of charge, and severely cracked down on profiteers who hoarded. Open the granary of the government, distribute food for the people and relieve everyone's worries. Su Shi led a crowd to dredge Hangjun Road and manage the West Lake, and built nine pavilions on it.
-Si Yanping's tearful laughter
Teacher: As Zhejiang people, we should know more about Su Shi's contribution to Hangzhou. Do you love this Dongpo? Why?
Health: Su Shi is really a good official. Wherever he goes, the people will benefit. It turns out that he has made such a great contribution to the West Lake.
Health: Su Shi is not only a literati who writes poems and lyrics, but also has the ability to be an official.
Teacher: He is really a versatile master. Let's read these praises to him and express our respect for Su Dongpo who has been in love for a long time!
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We love Dongpo, love his wandering, anything will do;
We love Dongpo, his reckless situation and self-placement;
We love Dongpo, love his home country and the world, and never forget the military camp;
We love Dongpo, love his free and easy, and attach importance to feelings and righteousness;
We love Dongpo, his calmness and pragmatism for the people.
(Students read aloud in chorus) (End the class in chorus)