Text/Li Junjie
-read Mu Yi's poem "I am a farmer"
Sleep with the earth in your arms and follow the sun.
When you are thirsty, drink some cold water.
Eat a yam egg when you are hungry.
Some people say I was born without wings.
Never try to let your dreams fly to the sky.
Some people laugh at me for being a hillbilly.
With sorghum flowers, there is no posture to climb with him.
Land is my mother.
Land is the lifeblood of my education.
I'd rather flowers are not fragrant or earthy.
It is the blood of crops.
Fan when the wind blows and sweat when it rains.
Liaoguoshan, Tian Yang
Rising white cotton fields
Still a dark face.
Such a bunch of flowers
It's more beautiful and colorful.
No thread-bound books, no exquisite books.
Sweat
Represents the sparkling eyes of poetry.
Mu Yi, I read some short poems you published in the newspaper recently. I'm really happy for you. Ingenious conception, unique perspective, unique image and implicit conception. There is another talent in our poetry group. Put it in the flowers and look for bees to collect honey. There are so many poetry publications that can be published for you now. It is useless to contribute less works to the official WeChat account in the future. I don't pay a penny for the manuscript, and I don't have any guiding opinions. Of course, I don't want to contribute more than one draft. I haven't published it in a paper, and I haven't posted Weibo from the media outside my official WeChat account and blog. How did you get it? Is it the Jade Emperor? ? At present, some newspapers and periodicals allow more than one manuscript, while others require that it is not a city. You see how tolerant the author is. Just write poems for the paper media, and don't let them disturb the people again. I've seen through them. You have to read thousands of works before tipping, huh? Look how aboveboard! In a word, they just treat us like cabbage!
I am a farmer, and I prefer to write poems. Unlike some poets who write ancient styles, his syntax is old and meaningful. He copied ancient Chinese characters all the way, without any aura. At first glance, the Ming people knew that he didn't write it himself, but he made it himself, and it took decades of hard work! Wang Shouchang-yun in Qing Dynasty: Poetry has three governors, namely, thirst for knowledge, desire for meteorology and desire for language. I don't believe that something so dead can surpass anyone. Make the past serve the present? You have to live a new life when you write any poem. For example, you wrote "I am a farmer", and I applaud our farmer poet!
Some people are bluffing, shouting, foggy and doing everything they can, but do you know that this is just a dead end for literary and artistic creators? The more humble a person is, the more proficient he is. The more he goes up, the heavier his heart will be, the steadier his heart will be, and the road will be stable. I read your poem several times in one breath. This poem is written in a down-to-earth manner, without top-down publicity, but it is so subtle, rich and dynamic. How many beautiful flowers can't compare with this heavy fruit!
Short poem: snow
Text/Mu Yi
1
The wind drank too much.
Holding snowflakes
Fall from the sky
Fall into the wheat field
village
log
……
It doesn't hurt at all.
2
A soulful poet
Her pen
Waving infinite lust
Facing the end of the cold season
(of a man) having an improper sexual relationship with a woman.
A few strokes
flying all over the sky
three
Love the branches
Send bunches of brilliant flowers.
The branches hide left and flash right.
Swing one's unwanted long hair.
I don't know when.
The snow has stopped.
Love flies and falls.
Branches can't be harvested any more.
Brilliant flowers.
four
Huge snowflakes.
Fall from the sky
Jingjing Yingying
floating a river
pleasant
You said that.
This is white flour.
he said
This is cotton.
I was wrong.
It is sugar
Don't believe it?
Please try it.
five
As soon as the snow falls,
You got a kiss from the earth.
And then spit a sweet smell.
blush
yellow
White flower
Give birth to another drew.
A bunch of fruit
The ancients said: wonderful, it is called a good product. This poem is wonderful, you must taste it!
People who only like to write about winter are divorced from winter. This poem is too vivid to write their true feelings, so the poem should be written like this.
What is a good poem? A good poem is that it can be read by people. It is exquisite, unique and meaningful, just like water in a mountain spring. The more you drink, the better. Poetry affects people with emotion. If there is no real feeling, it will only be a dead mouse after taking medicine, even if there is a little new image.
These poems are like a string of golden beads. How to string them together depends on the author. In a word, it is very simple: there is no other way but to write more and practice more! Kung fu! As a result, I thought of a person, thunder does not rain. Damn it, where is the job? It is difficult to write, and it is even more difficult to write well. It is more difficult to have a state and style, and it is difficult to go to the sky. Don't just shout, calm down.
Disabled shoemaker
Every day he will appear on the side of the road.
A parasol
Support the street, don't block it.
The knife-like wind rushed at him and stabbed his wrinkled face.
Blood-oozing hands thread needles.
Every stitch and thread is the sweetness of a dream.
Sometimes take a few breaths.
It's broken, but it's broken
Sew all kinds of wounds with a fiery heart.
Don't look at him, he is disabled.
Looks like Linnaeus.
But he used this position.
Smile all the way
This is a poem that pays attention to the bottom. It vividly presents the image of a shoemaker in front of readers, with flesh and blood, which makes people feel amiable, lovely and respectable. It can be said that you are a conscientious writer and a compassionate writer.
hope
Build a quiet path
A picturesque place with four distinct seasons.
Find a mountain forest where butterflies are flying and flowers are flying.
Spread a pair of beautiful wings
Expect a rain.
Look at a flower.
Hang a string of purple wind chimes
Hear a sweet voice
I hope you can hold my hand.
Standing next to me
A smile as bright as a rose
Open your face.
Beautiful language, profound artistic conception, colorful. It makes people roll all over after reading it.
The reason why Tang poetry can spread is that there are many famous sentences. If a poem wants to catch readers, it must have these good sentences. This poem is well written and has aroused my interest from the beginning. Clean, simple and natural, few words and deep content.
Poetry is written for people to see, not for others to understand. In this way, your feelings and your life experience will impress readers. These poems did it, and they really did it to the extreme! Don't you believe it? Then you can read it again. First of all, none of the words used in the modern language are uncommon, difficult to understand and archaic, which has left a deep impression on readers. Poetry expresses ambition, is it deep or not!
About the author:
Farmer Li Junjie is from Hebei. Hebei Farmers Daily, Cangzhou Daily and other news media interviewed many times, and made a detailed report in Publicity Department of the Communist Party of China's "Learning Power"; He has published short stories, poems, folk art and essays in many publications, such as Peasant Literature, People's Daily Overseas Edition, Northern Rural Newspaper, Peasant Woman, New Peasant, Rural Culture, etc., and published a collection of personal poems, Sticking to the Soil, Me and My Motherland, which won the second prize of China Poetry New World in 20 19. He is now a special guest of modern poetry of Hong Kong Poetry Society, a member of New World of Chinese Poetry Association, a poet of Hunan Contemporary Poetry Society and vice chairman of Suning Writers Association.