Alleys in the rain
Holding an oil-paper umbrella alone
Wandering in the long, long
Lonely rain lane, I hope to meet.
Like cloves.
A girl with a grudge.
She does.
Clove-like color
Lilac fragrance
Lilac sadness
Mourn in the rain
Sad and confused
She lingers in this lonely rain lane, holding an oil-paper umbrella like me, like me.
Walk quietly
Cold desert, melancholy, and melancholy.
She approached quietly.
Get close and throw again.
Breathing eyes
She floated by.
well
As sad and confused as a dream.
Floating like a dream
Dingxiangyuan
I missed this girl.
She walked away silently, walked away.
A ramshackle hedge.
Walk through this rain lane in the sad song of the rain
Remove her color.
Scattered her fragrance.
Disappeared, even hers
Breathing eyes
Lavender melancholy
Holding an oil-paper umbrella alone
Wandering in the long, long
Lonely rain lane
I hope to float over.
Like cloves.
A girl with a grudge.
Analysis: The poem depicts a gloomy picture of the alleys in the south of the Yangtze River during the rainy season, which constitutes a lyrical artistic conception with strong symbolic color. Here, the poet figuratively described the dark and gloomy social reality at that time as a narrow and lonely "rain lane" without sunshine and vitality. The lyric hero "I" is such a lonely wanderer in the rainy lane. "I" still cherish the longing and pursuit of beautiful ideals and hopes in loneliness. The "lilac-like girl" in the poem is a symbol of this beautiful ideal. However, this beautiful ideal is slim and difficult to realize. This mentality is a true reflection of some young intellectuals who pursued after the failure of the Great Revolution. They were in a state of confusion because they could not find a way out under low political pressure. In art, this poem also clearly reflects the creative characteristics of Dai Wangshu's early poems. It not only adopts symbolism and symbolism, but also has the pursuit of musical beauty. "I", "Rain Lane" and "Girl" in the poem are not concrete portrayal of life, but lyrical images full of symbolic significance. The whole poem also echoed with smooth rhythm and melody. The sense of melody mainly comes from the rhyme feet, except that each rhyme foot rhymes in the third and sixth lines, and each rhyme foot selects many sound groups corresponding to the rhyme feet. The application of overlap and repetition in poetry also enhances the musical effect.
Rain Lane adopts symbolic lyrical techniques. The narrow and gloomy rain lane in the poem, the lonely traveler wandering in the rain lane, and the girl as sad as lilac are all symbolic images. These images constitute a symbolic artistic conception, which implicitly implies the author's confusion, sadness and expectation, giving people a hazy and profound aesthetic feeling.
In this poem, the lilac knot in the rain is used as a symbol of people's sadness. Obviously, Dai Wangshu absorbed the artistic conception and methods of describing sadness from these poems and applied them to form the artistic conception and image of Rain Lane.