You should know my situation.
I have lost weight, like a rope!
It seems that I can't breathe.
I can't eat or sleep well.
Love torments me,
Sorrow is in my heart.
You should know my situation.
I've lost weight, like a rope!
no food, no prayer,
fidgeting and empty.
love torments me, and
sadness ripples in my heart.
the swan goose doesn't come, and
it adds another piece of sadness.
I can't sleep well.
I've been watching the morning for a whole month.
love torments me, and
sadness ripples in my heart.
without you, my love,
how can I be happy and cheerful?
As you clearly know,
I'm heartbroken.
love torments me, and
sadness ripples in my heart.
(translated by Zhou Guoyong)
Appreciating
the eternal literary theme of love can always give poets rich imagination and unlimited creative inspiration. They write about the sweetness of their first love, the expectation of love, and the helplessness when they are lovelorn ... The feelings they express are bold, warm, subtle, humorous, persistent and affectionate. In a word, the poet's love styles are different and varied. Robert's "Sorrow in My Heart" is a touching love song. The poet writes simple and fresh feelings in a brisk style, giving people a lively feeling and expressing the poet's infinite longing and yearning for his lover.
The whole poem * * * has four sections, and the last two lines of each section are repeated, forming a roundabout. In addition, the first and second sentences of the first two sections also appear repeatedly, which echoes the pain and melancholy that the poet could not get rid of at that time, and also adds a strong color to the melancholy. Here, the poet uses a typical rhetorical method of repetition, and the repeated words are strengthened by the repetition of sounds, giving readers a deeper impression and feeling; At the same time, the echo of sound also produces a pleasant and harmonious sound effect. I can't see my lover, and I haven't heard from her, so the poet can't extricate himself from his thoughts all day. He is restless all day, and his diet is tasteless. The pain of love torments him and makes him "toss and turn".
In this poem, the poet gave vent to his thoughts heartily and directly expressed his fervent feelings. The phrase "Love torments me,/Sorrow is rippling in my heart" runs through the poem, which expresses the poet's feelings caused by frustration in love in a reciprocating and tortuous way, as if the poet's feelings were unstoppable like spring flood and torrent. The poet's love is deep and touching, and it is love that brings back their childhood innocence and firmness.
The whole poem highlights the poet's infinite melancholy through direct expression of subjective feelings and description of past scenes, which are in contrast with each other's joy and sadness. Because the poet is writing the beautiful love that has been lost, the characters in the memory are particularly precious and beautiful; It is precisely because of such beautiful memories that I felt the special disappointment after my loss, so the poet had the feeling that "love tortured me,/sadness rippled in my heart." In fact, whether it is good or bad, as long as you laugh, cry, love and live, that's enough! Poets write about the germination, burning and loss of love, including sweet but not greasy joy, blazing and implicit confession, bitter but not sour pain and endless long-lasting hatred.
The most striking feature of this poem is that it pays attention to details and exquisite structure to convey poetic scenes. The charm of this poem lies in revealing the potential universal sadness and exclamation in concise sentences. The whole poem flows with sincere thoughts and love for lovers from beginning to end, vividly depicting the beautiful feelings of a slightly sad love season. The feelings expressed by this instant touch are exactly what many people think and want to say. Once the poet refines and summarizes them by artistic means, it has typical significance.
Like other works of Robert, the whole poem uses simple words and conveys the author's simple and sincere feelings. The language of poetry is not fake, but it is formed by words and sincere feelings, showing rich charm among the people. The rhythm is neat, the rhyme is harmonious, and the beauty of soft expression is produced in the repetition of the loop, which can be deeply rooted in people's hearts and will not be forgotten for a long time.
(Dang Xiaolin)